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Reviewed By: Kirara Girl 019 On: September 02, 2007 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superbe story!:DReally like how it's going.The fight scenes are awesome.I can easily imagine all the blood and the pain.Very nice details.And the love story is really heart-breaking.I'm quite scared for Tegan now that Demetriov wants to make his move.Wonder what will happen next :D
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 15:22 CDT
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It was a nice and short chapter that I much liked. The relationship between Tegan and Torin is as awkward as it is intriguing. It stood out to me that Torin kept the feeding part of his personality away from her though they both know it exist, it seems they have found themselves a nice little rhythm, they really should see know Demetriov will act soon with all of the other group out of the way. The fight with Marina was a bit...awkward to me. It seems like Tegan gets lucky irrationally often. To win after such a beating seems almost impossible. But otherwise I liked the chapter muchly. Demetriov is going to get off his lazy ass, oh goodie, now the fun *dives a rock from Tegan and Torin* really starts.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 07:10 CDT
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Oh boy, now the fun really starts. It's getting difficult disliking Torin in this situation *chuckles* Though the last part showed little of his point of view. I wonder what he is planning to do, surely not sit around doing nothing while Demetriov gets more crazy then ever. *snigger* And it was still very much fun to see him get beat up.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 03:56 CDT
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Oooh, he was just being impossible in their 'fight'. I'm glad I've beenof help, I guess we won't be exploring his character anymore in our RP though *grins meanly at him* It was well written and hey, I knew it was coming. Loved the shakespeare moments! Mmh, I am wondering just how much Demetriov suspects at the current moment...
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 11:00 CDT
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Tegan seems to have well learned to take care of herself. Her escape-plan was very cool, oldest trick in the book but it worked like a charm. And then the healing process and all that. Torin is beginning to take more then a casual interest there and even defending her against the big-almighty-Demetriov. And speaking of Demetriov, she's in for some trouble. Nice couple of chapters!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: June 25, 2007 03:45 CDT
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and there we go, Torin getting closer and Demetriov getting antsy about it. I liked the chapter, the dialogue was well done between Torin and Tegan. Isn't it funny that the more he starts to become likable the more he starts to annoy me? Anyway, good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 07:39 CDT
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oh boy, Tegan's a mess and now has Torin babysitting her. She'll be a happy girl when she wakes up *watch me be sarcastic* I'm quite anxious to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 09:57 CDT
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Mmh, well there was the first cat-fight. Porr Tegan got it rough. But she narrowly survived, even though it was close. I did like Torin's intro's. those interludes always give such an extra touch to the story. The fight, as far as it was a fight instead of a severe beatin *snigger* was well done. I liked the little spat they had. Nice two chapters.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: May 20, 2007 06:45 CDT
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Nice chapter. As well as she stands against other vampires against Demetriov she remains weak, in more then one way. I wonder if she'll ever be able to hurt him and shake of his contro. Ah, I suppose I know too much of where this story is heading. I can't wait until the next update. Great chapter, nicely done!
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Reviewed By: paniwi(nli) On: May 13, 2007 08:34 CDT
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Another two nice chapters. I loved how Tegan stood up for herself and fought against the guy. Going into the mansions was stupid but Demetriov loves hunting her to much to end it now...mmh. Torin was useless as usual (had to pick on him) and now we get fights with groovy weapons! Whoah. I want a drawing of Tegan with her groovy weapon. You detailed it so nicely! I'm waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: May 08, 2007 05:28 CDT
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Nice two chapters! Once again the emotions were conveyed so well. I'm jealous at your ability to write such emotions as losing a loved one so well. It shows that she is deeply hurt but it doesn't have this 'emo' feel over it that is often found in other fics. I'm curious as to whether or not Demetriov has seen her. And now she seems to want to confront him, mmh, I have a vague inkling as to where this is going. Waiting for more as usual........and no, I still don't like Torin, don't ask me why.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 06:00 CDT
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*whistles* maaaaaaaaaaaan, if I wasn't such a wimp and ever met Torin I would beat the living shit out of that asswipe. Does he anger me more then Demetriov? Yes he does! Anyway, of with the personal ranting of how evil, vile and careless your vampires are. Both chapters were extremely well written. The emotions *shiver* I'm beginning to wish I never gave you the advice to put more emotion into it, I swear, I'm going to melt on the floor if you keep on doing this to me (and I know you will). The combat scenes ( I know you were antsy) were really well done, it draws the reader into the story, wonderful! Eagerly awaiting the next update!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 09:08 CDT
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aaaah, that was such a sad chapter. Mmh, I can't wait until she and Demetriov will meet again. I liked this chapter, the story just keeps on getting better and better!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: April 20, 2007 01:27 CDT
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Yeey, it's readable! At least at school it is *has free period because goofy teacher decded not be be at school* I liked the chapter, the scene is completely set now. I can't wait until the training/fighting thing will start.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 06:35 CDT
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ohohoh, looooovely chapter (am not a sucker for mental karate, no I'm not, what gives you THAT idea?!) Poor Tegan really is lost in the mix isn't she? I wonder if he'll take her eventually or if she's going to be the only one of the three that will remain human...and I wonder about Micheal, will he play an important role.
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