| "Defining Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: January 12, 2009 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I read this new chapter - I just want to say THANK YOU for updating. I really look forward to this chapter and I'll leave some feedback after I'm done reading. Thanks and good luck!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aah i always look forward to your updates. :) they're both so adorable and awkward.
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Title: thank god!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare not logg in On: October 26, 2008 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wohoo u updated again! im so glad! no one seems to be updating anything anymore, guess its exams and stuff. anyway i enjoyed reading this chapter, even though there was no man loving 0.o ur writing is a jooooy to read, so please update again soon. and good luck with all ur university stuff or wateva.
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Title: i really need an update!!
Reviewed By: update!!!! On: September 30, 2008 21:14 EDT
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i keep hoping there is a new installment - want more! i am not usually into mpreg but this is well done! (especially since you skipped over the preg years - wee!) more please!!!
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Reviewed By: gracespradlin On: July 27, 2008 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. :) I must admit I've never played FF8, but I was able to follow this story easily. I'm a hardcore FF7 fan, and this has piqued my interest in checking out FF8. You deal with the idea of male pregnancy very delicately. I love this story.
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Title: weooooooooo
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ur not dead! u updated! im happy! hmmm hum. yeah liked this chapter. erm...yeah.looking forward to ur next update!dont sstay away for 2 long! sorry i suck at writing reviews, im retarded (erm im not actually retarded-retarded, just in case u think i am, im just stupid) :o
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Title: an update!!!!!
Reviewed By: me! On: June 30, 2008 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh joyous day! I am so glad to have something to read -this chapter was great! can't wait for next. should make for an akward time w/ Lore tagging along and Raijin trying to get his point accross to Squall - ha! looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: June 27, 2008 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it as always---I'm amazed how you managed to do a 180 with the situation. I consider this the most fruitful hour that I've spent. (It took me an hour to read this chapter three times so that the wait time until the next chapter seems shorter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Takayu (didn't log in) On: June 27, 2008 11:00 EDT
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^_^ Another chapter, another 20 or so minutes of my life I couldn't have spent better. Ugh...time does go by fast, too fast. It seems like only a month ago I was a new little freshman...and now...now I'm gonna be a senior. I can't say I'm not excited though. And have I ever told you how much I love your battle scenes? Always awaiting your next chapter -Taka
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was long? X3 Well I suppose so but it goes by so quickly I never notice if it's only been ten minutes or thirty.... :) Your stories and updates always inspire me to write too and I always have something that needs updating. Despite how all the drama makes me cringe sometimes, I'm glad it's there to make the story more plausible and realistic. I'm still annoyed that Squall has to appease Lore :/ It all works out with their characters, but it's still annoying X3 I'm sure you'll make up for it though
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Title: To lazy! Bleh >,
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny1 On: May 19, 2008 06:53 EDT
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Omg I'm so happy you came out with a new chapter!*rolls around in joy* Errors...? There where errors? Cause I didn't see any *looks for them* Thanks for a another kick-ass-tasic chapter >,
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Reviewed By: me On: May 18, 2008 16:01 EDT
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loving it! can't wait for more! congrats for surviving another semester :)
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Reviewed By: SeYa On: April 23, 2008 20:41 EDT
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I think your whole story is great......fantastic even, I come back time and time again to see if you have updated and giving your busy schedule I understand why. I want to see where this ends up so I will continue to wait patiently. Thank you for this...I Love it.
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Reviewed By: me On: April 14, 2008 22:20 EDT
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Can't wait for more!
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Title: Ganbatte!
Reviewed By: Natashi On: April 09, 2008 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job with the chapter! Every chapter almost seems like a cliffie as I hang precariously off my seat. Good luck with school and hopefully we'll see another chapter soon!
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