| "Defining Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: November 24, 2007 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! The story is going great, I think the plot is a bit slower in this new chapter but its nice to develop Squall and Lore's relationship also!
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in On: October 16, 2007 08:32 EDT
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*gasp* Rinoa! *grabs a stick* back! back, you foul beast! Always a good chapter when you're the author DB! -taka
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in On: October 09, 2007 16:52 EDT
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phew! I almost was gonna pm you to see if you'd died or not! If you had, I would've cried. T-T But you're not so everything's okay! ^_^
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Title: First in September
Reviewed By: Natashi On: September 02, 2007 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep on going, you're doing a great job!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great! i was totally hooked since the beginning, and i'm almost glad i had 30 chapters to catch up with. i can't wait for more. :)
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is more in answer to your note, that, yes sometimes when I think I do horrible, it turns out well. Unless it's Chemistry, which in that case, no matter what I think, I do horrible XD Other than a couple misspellings here or there, it's as wonderful as always :) I only wish I were like you in that fact that I wish I could write as much (and revise and edit as much) as you do. I can be so lazy sometimes XP I look forward to the next chapter(s) as well as new work(s) you create!!!
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in... On: July 18, 2007 13:11 EDT
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^____^ A new chapter! But...poor Cale T-T Poor guy... Ah...but shit happens, y'know? XD
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Title: update?
Reviewed By: me again On: July 10, 2007 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
and then............?
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Title: NEED AN UPDATE!
Reviewed By: me On: June 24, 2007 23:52 EDT
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ohmigosh! what happens next? i can only be on the edge of my seat for so long!
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Reviewed By: eek! On: June 21, 2007 01:04 EDT
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(gasp!) Oh no! poor Squally - what happens next?
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Reviewed By: losteternity On: June 10, 2007 12:08 EDT
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Thank you for updating!!! Stalking mediaminer is not very much fun. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww I liked Cale :( But as far as writing goes, you left it at a good spot. All the drama and confusion and confessions keeps one absorbed and leave 'em hanging on every word. Or at least, I was....! I can't wait for the next chapter, but it also makes me wonder about Lore's response. He finally sorta mostly kinda accepted Cale, but I don't doubt that he might feel some guilty relief. Ahh, love is so hard, isn't it? I particularly like how you can take your time to explain and portray everything, because life and relationships are complicated, and just giving mundane reasons or logics is too commonplace and unconvincing. You do a very good job, and it's not often I would give anything a 10, but you do a very good job. If only I could find more motivation to type ^ ^;; but I will, if only because your updates inspire me too XD :)
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Title: tsk tsk tsk
Reviewed By: me On: May 26, 2007 22:28 EDT
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so very curious what to will happen now. lookign forward to an update
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Takayu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 15:17 EDT
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I kind of torn here. The yaoi fan in me is like "oh, it'll turn out ok and everything" but the mature person in me is like "now Seifer should have known better than that and should've had more control". Anyways, it was a good chapter. Ever waiting for the next one, Tak
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Title: ^_____^
Reviewed By: Takayu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 13:08 EST
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I'm not even gonna do the rating thing, I give you a perfect 10! ^____^ Now to get to the other stories...xD
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