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Title: weooooooooo
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ur not dead! u updated! im happy! hmmm hum. yeah liked this chapter. erm...yeah.looking forward to ur next update!dont sstay away for 2 long! sorry i suck at writing reviews, im retarded (erm im not actually retarded-retarded, just in case u think i am, im just stupid) :o
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Title: an update!!!!!
Reviewed By: me! On: June 30, 2008 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh joyous day! I am so glad to have something to read -this chapter was great! can't wait for next. should make for an akward time w/ Lore tagging along and Raijin trying to get his point accross to Squall - ha! looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: June 27, 2008 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it as always---I'm amazed how you managed to do a 180 with the situation. I consider this the most fruitful hour that I've spent. (It took me an hour to read this chapter three times so that the wait time until the next chapter seems shorter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Takayu (didn't log in) On: June 27, 2008 11:00 EDT
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^_^ Another chapter, another 20 or so minutes of my life I couldn't have spent better. Ugh...time does go by fast, too fast. It seems like only a month ago I was a new little freshman...and now...now I'm gonna be a senior. I can't say I'm not excited though. And have I ever told you how much I love your battle scenes? Always awaiting your next chapter -Taka
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was long? X3 Well I suppose so but it goes by so quickly I never notice if it's only been ten minutes or thirty.... :) Your stories and updates always inspire me to write too and I always have something that needs updating. Despite how all the drama makes me cringe sometimes, I'm glad it's there to make the story more plausible and realistic. I'm still annoyed that Squall has to appease Lore :/ It all works out with their characters, but it's still annoying X3 I'm sure you'll make up for it though
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Title: To lazy! Bleh >,
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny1 On: May 19, 2008 06:53 EDT
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Omg I'm so happy you came out with a new chapter!*rolls around in joy* Errors...? There where errors? Cause I didn't see any *looks for them* Thanks for a another kick-ass-tasic chapter >,
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Reviewed By: me On: May 18, 2008 16:01 EDT
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loving it! can't wait for more! congrats for surviving another semester :)
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Reviewed By: SeYa On: April 23, 2008 20:41 EDT
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I think your whole story is great......fantastic even, I come back time and time again to see if you have updated and giving your busy schedule I understand why. I want to see where this ends up so I will continue to wait patiently. Thank you for this...I Love it.
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Reviewed By: me On: April 14, 2008 22:20 EDT
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Can't wait for more!
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Title: Ganbatte!
Reviewed By: Natashi On: April 09, 2008 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job with the chapter! Every chapter almost seems like a cliffie as I hang precariously off my seat. Good luck with school and hopefully we'll see another chapter soon!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked ur latest chapter, and was real glad to see you had updated. nice work
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Title: I Squeee
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could I'd give you a 5,000 >,< OMG this chapter is still up to par with all the others! Don't fret it was awesome and I loved Alex(one of the few OC's I will ever like). But yeah it's okay if life is kickin' you in the nads ^_^ It does that to everyone. I just hope you sleep, keep hydrated and fed ^_^ Don't want you to keel over. Ja and can't wait for teh next one!
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Title: Hilarious X3
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was hilarious you named Seifer's arm candy Alex Bell.... there's a guy in my class named that. Lesse.... In this sentence 'He wasn't beautiful in a feminine sort of way, and was actually rather handsome if she considered it.' Is that supposed to be wasn't? I wasn't entirely sure considering how often Squall has been described as being somewhat feminine. ^ ^; As for updates, I don't think asking for one every week or even every other week is very fair. You need to live life too! And you keep me very happy :) I'm glad that you don't rush to finish stories either, so even if you do want to finish that quickly, I can be assured that it will be well done and not rushed to tie up loose ends. Bravo! ^________________^
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Title: Nomnomnom
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm You know I was just thinking when you might update, and suddenly you did =D It gets better and better ^ ^ but I like their interactions and how everything works, and although the teasing can be insane sometimes, it's well worth it :3 I'm not sure what to say other than it's awesome and I look very forward to the next chapter! I have my own comments about Irvine, and to me Lore's just a little pesky, but it's reasonable; Squall has his time alone with Seifer, and he has his time where he has to put up with his kid so it's well balanced. It's kind of annoying that, why can't Squall just make his own decisions and do things for himself ;_; why does he need everyone else's permission? It's just not fair X3 But you present it logically and you write very well =D Can't wait to read what happens next, but don't feel rushed :)
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 03:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That enjoyment factor should be raised to like a billion. I love your work and I look forward to reading every single one d(^_^)b. Crazy-fangirl 1.5 million!!
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