| "Defining Love" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: BabaBlackSheep On: July 14, 2009 15:28 EDT
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I was waiting for this to come out! Oh how happy this chappie makes me >,
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Koji_Nokemono On: July 14, 2009 15:25 EDT
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yay ^W^ *giggles at Diablo snuffling Squall* I know I've said it before but I love your character devleopment :) Every update keeps me just as interested, and while yes, smut is/can be good, I like your stories just as much for playing hard to get and adding new twists ^ ^ I look very much forward to your next chapter :B :)
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Title: hurray!
Reviewed By: me On: June 03, 2009 20:52 EDT
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oh my gosh! what a camp fire conversation. lol - oh that Dannis - he's a troublemaker! i am excited to read more!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING :)
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Reviewed By: me too On: May 24, 2009 18:49 EDT
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update soon please!!! love this story - can't wait to read what happens next
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Title: an update! yay!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: me On: April 27, 2009 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story - and this chapter has me so excited to read more. Dannis sounds like a good bad boy! doncha hate it when Seifer is right? ;) lol CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BIT!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Koji_Nokemono On: April 14, 2009 16:58 EDT
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I think I've rated you enough times to let you know I look very forward to your updates :) As always I am glad that they're both so stubborn XD it's nice to have human elements in the fiction, and no matter how much you might want it to be finished, I am glad too that you take the time to consider all the little details that matter and make it such a good story. I commend you on your work and hope that spring doesn't make you too lazy, or your work/classes etc make you too busy :3 Take care and I look forward to your updates ^ ^
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Reviewed By: BeccaBear3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 22:41 EDT
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This is one of my most favorite stories on this site. Please put up more! *lip quiver* I can't get no satisfaction until you finish it. Then I'll be sad cause it's over. XD
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Reviewed By: me On: February 26, 2009 20:23 EST
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faithfully waiting for an update :)
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me tell this first!! I only just finished reading chapter 24 right now! but I thought it would be a good idea to write a review now (you'll get another one when I reach the newest chapter ^_^). I love this story so far! even if it goes awfully slow sometimes I actually enjoy exactly that fact. It's really nice that you don't seem to rush into getting squall and seifer together. even though it's frustrating sometimes ^^' And I actually like Cale (I normally don't like characters that don't belong to the original story). Lore is a bit too obsessed with his father. I know it's his role so it's fine (of course), it's just that if I ever met someone like him I just know he would annoy the crap outa me... but he's fun while he's in the same room with seifer :D Another thing that I like about your story is that a lot of things don't go as expected (in a good way... I'm just not so good at explaining such things... let's just say I love stories that hold surprises and unexpected scenes). Enough of my babbling... I hope to read much more of this!! ^__^ keep up the great work, will you?!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: January 12, 2009 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the chapter, its good ^.^. It looks like there is some new rising action to throw in some suspense/action along with the romance. I think it'll be an interesting turn of events. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: January 12, 2009 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I read this new chapter - I just want to say THANK YOU for updating. I really look forward to this chapter and I'll leave some feedback after I'm done reading. Thanks and good luck!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aah i always look forward to your updates. :) they're both so adorable and awkward.
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Title: thank god!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare not logg in On: October 26, 2008 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wohoo u updated again! im so glad! no one seems to be updating anything anymore, guess its exams and stuff. anyway i enjoyed reading this chapter, even though there was no man loving 0.o ur writing is a jooooy to read, so please update again soon. and good luck with all ur university stuff or wateva.
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Title: i really need an update!!
Reviewed By: update!!!! On: September 30, 2008 21:14 EDT
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i keep hoping there is a new installment - want more! i am not usually into mpreg but this is well done! (especially since you skipped over the preg years - wee!) more please!!!
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Reviewed By: gracespradlin On: July 27, 2008 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. :) I must admit I've never played FF8, but I was able to follow this story easily. I'm a hardcore FF7 fan, and this has piqued my interest in checking out FF8. You deal with the idea of male pregnancy very delicately. I love this story.
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