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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked ur latest chapter, and was real glad to see you had updated. nice work
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Title: I Squeee
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could I'd give you a 5,000 >,< OMG this chapter is still up to par with all the others! Don't fret it was awesome and I loved Alex(one of the few OC's I will ever like). But yeah it's okay if life is kickin' you in the nads ^_^ It does that to everyone. I just hope you sleep, keep hydrated and fed ^_^ Don't want you to keel over. Ja and can't wait for teh next one!
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Title: Hilarious X3
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was hilarious you named Seifer's arm candy Alex Bell.... there's a guy in my class named that. Lesse.... In this sentence 'He wasn't beautiful in a feminine sort of way, and was actually rather handsome if she considered it.' Is that supposed to be wasn't? I wasn't entirely sure considering how often Squall has been described as being somewhat feminine. ^ ^; As for updates, I don't think asking for one every week or even every other week is very fair. You need to live life too! And you keep me very happy :) I'm glad that you don't rush to finish stories either, so even if you do want to finish that quickly, I can be assured that it will be well done and not rushed to tie up loose ends. Bravo! ^________________^
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Title: Nomnomnom
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm You know I was just thinking when you might update, and suddenly you did =D It gets better and better ^ ^ but I like their interactions and how everything works, and although the teasing can be insane sometimes, it's well worth it :3 I'm not sure what to say other than it's awesome and I look very forward to the next chapter! I have my own comments about Irvine, and to me Lore's just a little pesky, but it's reasonable; Squall has his time alone with Seifer, and he has his time where he has to put up with his kid so it's well balanced. It's kind of annoying that, why can't Squall just make his own decisions and do things for himself ;_; why does he need everyone else's permission? It's just not fair X3 But you present it logically and you write very well =D Can't wait to read what happens next, but don't feel rushed :)
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: LuvaBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 03:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That enjoyment factor should be raised to like a billion. I love your work and I look forward to reading every single one d(^_^)b. Crazy-fangirl 1.5 million!!
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Reviewed By: Natashi On: November 24, 2007 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! The story is going great, I think the plot is a bit slower in this new chapter but its nice to develop Squall and Lore's relationship also!
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in On: October 16, 2007 08:32 EDT
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*gasp* Rinoa! *grabs a stick* back! back, you foul beast! Always a good chapter when you're the author DB! -taka
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in On: October 09, 2007 16:52 EDT
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phew! I almost was gonna pm you to see if you'd died or not! If you had, I would've cried. T-T But you're not so everything's okay! ^_^
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Title: First in September
Reviewed By: Natashi On: September 02, 2007 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep on going, you're doing a great job!
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great! i was totally hooked since the beginning, and i'm almost glad i had 30 chapters to catch up with. i can't wait for more. :)
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Koji Nokemono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is more in answer to your note, that, yes sometimes when I think I do horrible, it turns out well. Unless it's Chemistry, which in that case, no matter what I think, I do horrible XD Other than a couple misspellings here or there, it's as wonderful as always :) I only wish I were like you in that fact that I wish I could write as much (and revise and edit as much) as you do. I can be so lazy sometimes XP I look forward to the next chapter(s) as well as new work(s) you create!!!
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Reviewed By: taka-too lazy to log in... On: July 18, 2007 13:11 EDT
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^____^ A new chapter! But...poor Cale T-T Poor guy... Ah...but shit happens, y'know? XD
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Title: update?
Reviewed By: me again On: July 10, 2007 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
and then............?
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Title: NEED AN UPDATE!
Reviewed By: me On: June 24, 2007 23:52 EDT
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ohmigosh! what happens next? i can only be on the edge of my seat for so long!
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Reviewed By: eek! On: June 21, 2007 01:04 EDT
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(gasp!) Oh no! poor Squally - what happens next?
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