| "Forced Beginnings - Black Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more mopre more more please up date this fast I'm lost into this story |
Reviewed By: carrola On: November 15, 2002 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOODDD!!!! please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!
I can't BELIEVE how wonderful this story is!!!!
Normally stories with original characters totally bore me. I'm like "Yeah, yeah, who gives a fuck?" It takes a damn good talented mind to make me fall in love with their made-up characters, and besides you, only ONE other person was able to do that!!!!
Also, I hate fictions that break up my classical favorite parings, like T/P and G/B and all that. This one has so many different pairings and everything, it's like, I can't even explain it...It was disturbing in it's own and obvious ways, but I just can't stop thinking about how cool and totally original this story is!!!! O_O OMG!!! Pat yourself on the back, dammit!!!! *clings to* YOU DONE GOOD!!!! =D WAAYYY TOO GOOD!!! I'm JEALOUS!! O_O;;
I feel stupid asking this, but what's that whole thing mean with the "locker talk"?? I feel so stupid...but I just don't get it. I'm very much like Gokou-san, and I'm incredibly ditzy and oblivious most of the time like him. Could you please tell me? ^_^;;;
Oh, and are you gonna re-write that whole scene thing with the chapter that you wrote with the computer room and Videl telling Bulma to shut up? That kind of confused me too...but I'd really like to know what happened!!!! O_o DO tell!!!
AND OMG!!! Goten and Pan??!? What is this?!? Is everything happening all over again?!?! OMG!!! *pulls at her hair* I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!!! GAAAHHAAAHHH!!!!! O_O;;;;
Anywho...I can't wait until you update!!! This is gotta be one of my most favorite stories of all time!!!! You are the BEST of the BEST!!!! *feels ashamed to be in your presence...* u_u;; *sniffles* I hope someday I'll be able to make an original story that's as extremely great as this...Heehee!!!
Lotsa Love 'N' Luck To Ya!!! Can't wait 'till you update!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: indira On: November 14, 2002 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is oooooo fucking gooooood!!!!!! I love this story so much, I'm addicted to it... I love it, I love it, I love it....etc....please update soon!!!!!! and make me happy :D:D:D:D:D:D |
Reviewed By: Vegeta'sgrl On: April 06, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it! Keep writing. Can't wait to see wat happens next!
:D |
Reviewed By: Shienn On: November 09, 2002 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories, I can't tell you how great it is.
I'm lucky I found it here at mm.org, it's unlisted!
Anyway, when's chapter 26 coming? I hate to rush people, but I feel like I should stop checking because it's never going to come out.
But thanks for updating the last chapter, it gave me hope! |
Reviewed By: MarronBriefs [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,my god I spent a few hours reading this fic and it was worth every minute!The scene of Bra/Goku it made me cry where Goku was remebering Earth.This one of the rare fics that I like the fan made characters.I wish you gave the Marron/Rhiamon lemon parts but oh well.Incest is hot and one of my favorite couples is Pan/Goten.You should through some Marron/Seventeen in there too.It would be cool and help me out if you made a graphic of which kid belongs to which parent. |
Reviewed By: Piper023 On: November 04, 2002 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story to death u have got to put the next chapter up!! I am addicted to this!!! Oh I also love all of your pics and KimBall is cutie!! When are u going to do that story with AMCM74!!!! |
Reviewed By: KalphaKomega On: November 03, 2002 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. Your an excelent writer the only thing is that you made the characters give up to easily and that Bra shouldnt go out with Tobiasly dude pans and gotens son thats just wierd but hey your the writer and that dude is awesome he is a ladies man. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading all of the chapters and I have lefta commet so long ago and this is the best writen fan fic i have seen and me myself have writen keep up the good work and Ill try to read it more aften |
Reviewed By: Ryomi On: October 28, 2002 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing piece of psychological art. I am enthralled, amazed, and left hanging. I am an honest reviewer, so let me honestly tell you that your fanfic is incredible and really inspires me and, I'm sure, many others.
One thing I would like to ask is why it isn't classified under any anime. I tried searching for it and it didn't turn up, so I had to browse through author names for your name. I think if you classified it under DBZ or DBGT you'd have a lot more reviews. Is the reason you haven't done so because you don't want flames?
Anyway, I hope to see the next chapter soon! I'll be checking frequently, this fanfic is worth it!
Thanks!!
-Ryomi |
Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
holy crap!! pan and goten... i was not expecting that. god i love this story. i cant wait for more of it!! if i was pan i would let vegeta do what ever he wanted to me. *drools* mmmmmm |
Reviewed By: Loaf of Pan On: October 24, 2002 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm so glad I finally found you again!!! You're one of my fave authors, and I had a lot of catching up to do, lol. Woo!! Goten and Pan are awesome together. You always make me a fan of new pairings! I can't wait until the next part!!! Now I'm on a Gt/P rush with no real fix! :( |
Reviewed By: LadyoftheLake On: October 12, 2002 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! Major plot twists. Trunks and Trissy over did their little competition a bit. lol, just a bit. It was really funny though. You make it sound like Pan and Goten are made for eachother. I like that. |
Reviewed By: Gothic Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
WWWAAAAAAAAHOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Great chapter love! P/Gt goodness! *drools* Ah, yes, Trissy-chan of course is a double bonus! ^^ You know my obsession with that kid. Oh well. I really loved this chapter. The whole bet thing was hilarious. ^^ *hugs* I'm alive still as you can see. Oo;; Well, I'm not sure what to say. My brain is kinda fried. So as I am talking to you right now, I'll bid you adieu and return to the convo.
Lots of love to you,
Gothic Trunks |
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