| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason I gave this chapter an eight all around is that there was hardly any mention of Bastion(I know I'm obssessed). But other than that it was a good chapter. I was wondering though when are you going to update Sailor Moon GX: Destiny Stars because I'm really into that fic. Well keep up the good work for both fics.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: April 20, 2007 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The word brutal doesn't begin to describe these duels! But then again you can't say the SOL doesn't deserve it. Sartorius created Hell Kaiser Zane so it's fitting that it backfires so badly on him like that. Make sure the SOL keeps feeling the pain, there's nothing i like more!
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Title: Beautifully done
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, just gotta say I read this chapter and I enjoyed the tag team duel between Zane, Syrus, Danelle and Hotaru. I have an idea for the next time you decide to do a Good scout vs. Brainwashed SOL scout. Amy vs. Serena. I got this idea in my head after finishing this current chapter. It could be the day that Amy became Sailor Mercury and although Amy is brainwashed, both she and Serena could be remebering that day and decided that it is time to either frre the scout of knowledge and ice or bring the Moon Princess into the light. You could also have Hotaru go up against one of the other outer scouts but thats up to you. Well can't wait for the next chapter. Until then keep writing.
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Reviewed By: MASmaster On: April 17, 2007 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grat update! The duels rule as usualy, aswell as the new comer Yeshua. I like the fact Jaden,Serena,and Co. are kicking ass, and I hope to see more of it soon, PEACE!
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way the story is heading. Could you Bastion get beaten and freed sometime soon and give him a Millenum Item. I was thinking the Millenum Ring for Bastion(My favorite GX character having the item my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh evil bad guy had. All hail Yami Bakura! ^_^). Are you going to give Jaden his own court like you're doing in Destiny Stars? I'd like to know. If you are, is it still going to be the same group of his friends? Also is Bastion gonna be Ami's boyfriend in this fic like she is in Destiny Stars? Could you email me with your answers?
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, nice story. However, in the future is it okay with you if I can use some of the parts in my 'The Demon' fic.
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Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truely enjoyed reading this story so far. I hope you intend to update it again real soon as I have become one of your loyal readers. I never imagined Serena going so hard core like that. I was wondering who fo the brainwashed scouts you were planning to return to Serena's side first. I'll bewaiting for the next chapter to come around soon.
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Title: Here's an idea
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about you also have Zane and Hikari tag duel some of the those Society fucktards. Also where did Kari get the Underworld cards?
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, awesome chapter man!
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Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: April 05, 2007 15:08 CDT
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Ouch! Painful for the SOL which is just the way I like it! I love it that no matter what they do it just seems to make things worse for them. Good thing Jaedite and the other negaverse warriors aren't around, they'd love this new Sailor Moon! Keep going and make the next one another chapter of agony for the white freaks!
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Neat chapter and the next chapter, where Jaden forces Alexis to duel or he'll send nightmares into Atticus's mind. That's pretty harsh, but she did has it coming to her, when she did the same thing, except to get Jaden expelled if he didn't accept. Oh and by the way, in one of the insults that Jaden yells at Alexis, please add this one. Jaden: When you accused me of spying on you, I was insulted that I would waste my time spying on some pathetic white trash like you!
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Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: March 25, 2007 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Gallantmon! Just found your fics thru inu-ysukekaiba's fics back on ff.net. Three words: I LOVE THEM! They even beat Marik as Shadow duelists (and he was the most evil of the lot). All that's missing is a set of red lightsabers for all of them! Keep writing! I only ask one thing...in Cyberman language make sure the SOL is DELETED!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool, I like it. Keep the good work. But when are you going to update Sailor Moon GX: Destiny Stars?
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 22:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome, chapter, man! I hope that I get to see the next chapter, sooner
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