| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: November 28, 2007 14:11 CST
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I just can't get enough of your fics! Love it when the 'upgraded' Hotaru took Missy out (she was a pitiful loser even before Syrus beat her.)Since chopping Beryl's arm off wasn't enough, perhaps Serena should dismember her next time? (as you've figured out i'm the one with the sick imagination!)
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 20:57 CST
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Wow An update that was chock full of awesome-ness!!! Woot!!! And hey, it was really good, and I'm alreayd looking forward to your next chappie Gallantmon!!! Keep it up!!! Oh, and hey, keep your eyes peeled for an update tot he Treasured Era sometime soon . . . ~_^ Hint hint.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 08:42 CST
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Nice chapter. I like it. But could you give Bastion more scene time in the next couple of chapters? In the last few chapters Bastion hardly appears in the scenes. But other than that I like. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapter of this and 'Twilight Wars'.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:44 CST
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The next chapter will certainly be a change of pace. It will probably cause me to bust my gut.
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Title: Kinky!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that was one heck of a hot chapter! I couldn't believe you turned Tea into a sex slave seeing as she loved Atem freely. My god what a kinky mind we have don't we? lol! I still loved the chapter ad can't wait for the next one to come out.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:23 CST
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I have to be honest with your newest chapter. It was good, however, I'm beginning to think that what you had Zane do to Hikari was pretty sick and wrong. I may be wrong with this, but I think that love and intiamincy should take time to develop. It seemed that Hikari was getting weak when Zane 'influenced' her mind and that seemed to disturb me. I may be confused, but was Zane brainwash her or not?
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
freat job i can't wait til u get the next chapter up. i see u took my idea of giving serena the crystal beasts but don't u think she should have the advanced crystal beasts too. if u read the first real chapter of eternity wars you'll see my fusions i'll schow u them.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 10:53 CST
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HOLY SHIT MAN!!!! I didn't even know you updated this! But now that I do . . . That was freaking incredible. Now I'm really pumped to see what Zane's gonna do to Kari!!!!! WOOT!!!! Excellent and keep it up and update ASAP!!!!
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Title: This is very good!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I already told you before, I noticed a few wording mistakes; however, other than that you did a really great job. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: November 12, 2007 15:00 CST
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Nice chapter again! And as for your new mind control idea, im all for it 200%! Can't wait to see Zane get closer to Hikari and give some confidence boost to Syrus and Hotaru. And you're certainly not sick. My imagination usually is...but then i play too much resident evil 4!
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I just wish I had seen more of Bastion. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future updates.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 23:20 CST
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Personally I don't think you are sick. If anything some of the ways that I come up with to kill people I hate is sick. Also I can really understand the whole having to deal with tests. Plus something tells me that Zane and Hikari are going to get more intimate in the next few chapters.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! With Serena dueling other 'ghost' opponents, I was going to do the same thing in my 'All's Fair in Love and War'. However, if you want to hear more of it, just PM me!!!!
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 19:28 CST
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please hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: October 17, 2007 15:35 CDT
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Man, I'm sorry ive not been reviewing much lately. Been away for awhile but it's great to be back and reading again! Yami Marik's still a good favorite and it sounds like Beryl needs a new helping hand (sorry couldnt resist it!). In all honesty im running out of good things to say. Just KEEP WRITING!! When it comes to anime crossover, youre the best!
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