| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great great great chapter i can't wait until the next chapter now when will u put in the sequel to destiny starsm and when will u update twilight wars as well as if you should add in serena's crystal beast deck in as well great chapter can't wait til next time keep on writing
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Title: Great Work!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say it was worth the wait! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: September 09, 2007 08:30 CDT
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Great as usual. But inuyusukekaiba has a point for the next part, if Kaiba knew the whole truth it'd be the SOL in trouble as he'd go to town on them. Even Sartorius' legal dealing couldn't protect him form KaibaCorp. Not to mention Kaiba would have Bonaparte and Crowler's guts on a plate for allowing all of this in the first place! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. But will Jaden's court be getting their memories back anytime soon? Just wondering. Keep up the good work though.
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 20:48 CDT
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great great great chapter and can u upload some more chapters for your incomplete stories
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 18:25 CDT
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Great job! But Kaiba needs to hear the whole story, why a student is having the 'Vice-Chancellor' position and understand that if it was given into one of the members of the SOL, then Yusuke, Hikari, Kuwabara and Kurama would be wearing white considering that it was that power that got those four away in the first place. And I'd doubt Kaiba would like having his school turned to a weird cult.
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Reviewed By: ovidkid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 10:06 CDT
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dukemon I just found sumthing out about the creater of light it can only be summed by The Pharaoh's Name - Atem spell card effect (Activate only by removing 1 each of "Obelisk the Tormentor", "Slifer the Sky Dragon" and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" on your side of the field from play. Special Summon 1 "Horakhti the Creator of Light" from your Fusion Deck. The activation and effect of this card cannot be negated.) and here the cretor's effect- This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Pharaoh's Name - Atemu". This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Effect Monsters, Spell and Trap Cards and is unaffected by them. When this card attacks your opponent's monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying Damage Calculation and its stats are ‡/‡ if you don't belive me here is the link http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Horakhti_the_Creator_of_Light
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 21:15 CDT
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HAha, funny, you updated on my b-day . . . this was a cool chappie me likey!!! The Amazons huh? Interesting . . . *sighs* Dear goddess the plot just can't stay simple huh? OH!!!! I SPY ZANE/KARI FLUFF!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! Ahem. Yeay!!! I saw Tyranno!!!!! *glomps Tyranno* I'm going to kidnap him for a while, let Sailor Heavenstar and Sailor Hellstar have him for a while . . . Toodles!!! Til next time!!! *kidnps Tyranno and takes him away from your story so her Sailor Scouts Heaven and Hellstar can have him*
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your newest chapter can't wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: Tri-Edge of the Azure Flames On: August 14, 2007 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the newest chapter. I do hope you got Yeshua's upgraded deck though. I hope to see him in action soon. He can't really be the first chosen duelist if he doesn't duel now can he?
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. But Bastion was barely in so I give the chapter 8 out of 10. But I really like the part where Sailor Moon freaked Crowler out, that was funny. Is Bastion gonna get his revenge against the Light of Ruin soon? Just want to know.
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Reviewed By: gmredninja25 On: August 12, 2007 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am liking this fic, well done so far. As I read the preview for next time, I wondered, what if Nephlite came back, and tried to help Serena get Molly back, so I'm just going to present it as a suggestion. Weather it's used or not, I can say that I look forward to the continuation of this fic, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: August 09, 2007 14:53 CDT
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Talk about a battle royale! Love to see Yeshua duel as well plus can the Negaverse/Negamoon forces clash with the SOL too? Can't see Sartorius standing up to true dark side fighters! Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Tri-Edge of the Azure Flames On: August 06, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your story. It is truely a work of art but the second season is coming to a close and you still have not allowed Yeshua a single duel. I took great pride in designing every one of his angelic cards and would love to see them in action before I retire the character for another one.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 12:28 CDT
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Nice work, but you said in the next chapter that Serena will duel with the powers of the Shadow Games without her Millennium Necklace. How will she do that?
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