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| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 00:12 CDT
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Nicely done chapter as always.
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 14:23 CDT
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So long to wait, but well rewarded for my very tiny patience with this excellent chappie. (sqeuals) TYRANNO!!!!!! (clears throat) Ahem, I mean, I'm done. Well done on this chappie, hoping for more soon!!!
| Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the new chapter is awsome can ya hurry up and keep writing and update soon
| Title: Question
Reviewed By: matn90 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 20:41 CDT
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When are you going to update any of your Digimon fic?
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Major pain for the gruesome twosome! Loved it. Keep the good work, and could you give a hint about what's gonna happen to Bastion in the next chapter? Anyway I'll be lloking forward to more great chapter's from you.
| Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word update hurry up and finish the stories already as in darkness moon and destiny stars and start workingon destiny's sequal ya hear me
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 13:20 CDT
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I spy Tyranno!!!!! *squeals* lesse, I liked the length and duels in this chappie. I love your characterization, but most of all . . . I hope you update again soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: June 16, 2007 16:22 CDT
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GREAT!! i get back from vacation to read 2 ace parts! Jaden matched better than i thought against Marik's deck. Wish that could have been on screen!! And the second part, well what can i say? The SOL just NEVER learns, does it? By the way, Inu-yusuke Kaiba's 100% right for next part. Make sure Iwamoto and Akashi learn the meaning of the word PAIN!!
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 22:55 CDT
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Typical of Iwamoto and Akashi planning that on Yusuke and Kuwabara. Please have Yusuke and Kuwabara give them a really harsh duel and blasts them in the end!!!
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Keep up the good work. I hope the site I sent you helps.
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love this story, and I finally finished it!!!!!!! Let me see . . . ittle to no spelling or grammer errors, so that increases the quality of the story, and an interesting plot as well. I notice that it seems like alll are going to be paired . . . And if so, does that mean Tyranno will be paired with someone? I'm sorry he's my fave character and I'd like to know, lol. But seriously, great idea here, with wonderful character developement and whatnot. Keep it up!!!! By the way, my enjoyment factor should've been 10+, not ten, lol.
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:55 CDT
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Here's an idea, someone going after the Pharaoh's power revives Tanyia. Then Tanyia and Ami fight over Bastion. I've always wanted something like that to happen to Bastion.
| Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Wow, I love this story, not only does it flow wonderfully, but it's not one of those short stories that leave you hanging!... I must say, this must be THE longest story I have ever read! :] Good job!
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 18:21 CDT
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Nice chapter as usual, especially this scene from the story: Yusuke and Hikari giggle at Atticus' `pet name' for his sister and Yusuke and Hikari say with a sly smile, "Sissy?" Alexis yells out, embarrassed, "Atticus! I told you to stop calling me that!" Yusuke gets a wide sly grin on his lips while both Hikari and Yusuke gave a few chuckles and Alexis gets an annoyed look causing her to plaster him on his head, which hurt because she is getting up to strength to match Yusuke and Hikari, thanks to her Sailor Scouts, demonic, and some spiritual powers from her human side of her blood. Yusuke holds his head and exclaims, "Yow! What was that for?!" Alexis retorts, in a serious tone, "For being a wiseass, Yusuke!" Yusuke yells at Alexis, annoyed, "Hey, Kari, chuckled at that `pet name' that your bro gave you, too!" Alexis replies, with a sly smile and tone, "Well, Kari is an older sibling and plus, she is a girl like me!" Yusuke yells out, angrily, "That's not fair!" Hikari replies, with a sly grin, "Sorry, bro, but out of Alexis, you, and me, you are the youngest twin sibling. Alexis and I were born before you. I was born five seconds before Alexis and she was born four seconds before you." Alexis tells Yusuke, with a sly smile, "That's what big sisters do, Yusuke." Yusuke mutters under his breath, annoyed, "Yeah, be bossy bitches." However, Alexis and Hikari heard that, they gain very annoyed looks at him, and both of them slam their fists into Yusuke's head. Hikari yells out, annoyed tone in her voice, "And that one was for your mouth, bro!" Kuwabara laughs at this and yells out, in a sly excited tone, "Looks like Kari got your number, Urameshi! Serve you right since you are the little baby of the `royal family tree'!" Kuwabara laughs at Yusuke, Yusuke gets pissed off, and before anyone could say or do anything, Yusuke roars out and knocks Kuwabara to the ground and temporary senseless with anime-spirals in his eyes. Yusuke cracks his knuckles and tells Kuwabara, in his typical annoyed tone, "Oh, yeah, big mouth! Remember, even through I'm trying to get rid of the `street punk' rep, that doesn't mean that I can't kick your butt into next Tuesday, Kuwabara! Remember that!" Keiko, Botan, and Koemna sigh and sweatdrop and Keiko says, with a weak smile, "Some things will never change . . . including Yusuke's temper." Ami, Rei, Mina, Lita, Hotaru, and Serena sweatdrop at this and Mina says, nervously, "Wow. And I thought that Rei and Serena arguments and fights was bad." Ami nods her head and says, nervously and amazed, "I'll say, Mina." Serena says, nervously, "And I thought that I had gained one nasty temper." Kagome gives a sigh and says, "I come from one weird family tree." Inuyasha tells Kagome, "I'll say." Kagome gives Inuyasha an annoyed stare and he yells out, in his usual defensive tone, "What?! I was just agreeing with you!" At that point, I thought Kagome's will 'sit' Inuyasha for that comment and I have a request for the next chapter, you know about Kagome 'weird illiness' that her grandfather has told her friends, can you make it that Kagome's is rumored as the 'sick girl', much like Yusuke's 'Great Urameshi' rep.
| Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO COOL! Loved the chapter. But I got to ask, when is Bastion gonna duel? I'm going stir crazy. If you're having trouble making a Light deck for Bastion let me know. Patinator from ff.net is making a deck for my fics and if it gets done soon and you still are having trouble you can use my Bastion Light Deck. Other than that good chapter.
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