| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 03:27 CST
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Nice new chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 09:23 CST
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Wowwiieee wow wow wow!!!!! that was AMAZING!!!!! No seriously Gallantmon, you've reall outdone yourself this time. It was well written, driven, and it made me laugh at odd points (that's a GOOD thing I swear) so it was good. Thanks for updating so quickly!!! please update soon and maybe, just maybe, you might out do yourself again lol.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 00:06 CST
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I have to be honest. I don't really like the mind control. Also how about Sesshomaru shows up.
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Title: Way to go!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go! I loved every minute of it. I was wondering if you're going to give Rebecca to Yugi? I will wait and see. Until later, bye.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! I bit on the grammar mistakes, but it's fine, just as long as nothing that interferes with the couples with true love. However, in your 'Twilight Wars' fic, you need to do a part where Yusuke and Keiko finds the white geek that got them into the SOL in first place, by forcing himself onto Keiko. Maybe, in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: November 28, 2007 14:11 CST
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I just can't get enough of your fics! Love it when the 'upgraded' Hotaru took Missy out (she was a pitiful loser even before Syrus beat her.)Since chopping Beryl's arm off wasn't enough, perhaps Serena should dismember her next time? (as you've figured out i'm the one with the sick imagination!)
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 20:57 CST
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Wow An update that was chock full of awesome-ness!!! Woot!!! And hey, it was really good, and I'm alreayd looking forward to your next chappie Gallantmon!!! Keep it up!!! Oh, and hey, keep your eyes peeled for an update tot he Treasured Era sometime soon . . . ~_^ Hint hint.
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Reviewed By: Princess Lena aka Lady Kittuna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 08:42 CST
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Nice chapter. I like it. But could you give Bastion more scene time in the next couple of chapters? In the last few chapters Bastion hardly appears in the scenes. But other than that I like. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapter of this and 'Twilight Wars'.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:44 CST
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The next chapter will certainly be a change of pace. It will probably cause me to bust my gut.
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Title: Kinky!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that was one heck of a hot chapter! I couldn't believe you turned Tea into a sex slave seeing as she loved Atem freely. My god what a kinky mind we have don't we? lol! I still loved the chapter ad can't wait for the next one to come out.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:23 CST
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I have to be honest with your newest chapter. It was good, however, I'm beginning to think that what you had Zane do to Hikari was pretty sick and wrong. I may be wrong with this, but I think that love and intiamincy should take time to develop. It seemed that Hikari was getting weak when Zane 'influenced' her mind and that seemed to disturb me. I may be confused, but was Zane brainwash her or not?
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
freat job i can't wait til u get the next chapter up. i see u took my idea of giving serena the crystal beasts but don't u think she should have the advanced crystal beasts too. if u read the first real chapter of eternity wars you'll see my fusions i'll schow u them.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 10:53 CST
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HOLY SHIT MAN!!!! I didn't even know you updated this! But now that I do . . . That was freaking incredible. Now I'm really pumped to see what Zane's gonna do to Kari!!!!! WOOT!!!! Excellent and keep it up and update ASAP!!!!
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Title: This is very good!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I already told you before, I noticed a few wording mistakes; however, other than that you did a really great job. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Matt (from ff.net) On: November 12, 2007 15:00 CST
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Nice chapter again! And as for your new mind control idea, im all for it 200%! Can't wait to see Zane get closer to Hikari and give some confidence boost to Syrus and Hotaru. And you're certainly not sick. My imagination usually is...but then i play too much resident evil 4!
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