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Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 18:16 CDT
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Yay, you updated! Glad you took time to regroup--the wait was well worth it. This was a great chapter, can't wait to read more whenver you have the chance to update!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:57 CDT
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Hey, thanks for posting this chapter--it was excellent as usual! What on earth could have broken your confidence like that? It couldn't have been in response to THIS story, in my opinion--I don't know what anyone could have found to complain about. I like how the give and take between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is progressing, and it was fun to see them put their heads together over the diary in this chapter. I'm impressed by how you manage to let their personalities shine through in their interactions without seeming heavy-handed. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Don't lose your confidence or let anyone else tell you that you can't do it. Your writing ability speaks volumes. Good job.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 07:50 CDT
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this is a great story, dont lose your confidence. i just found it and i really would like more...somehow i dont think you'll do a chapter a day but why dont you try for one a week?
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Reviewed By: anonymousme On: July 16, 2008 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!!! You have a fabulous story and there is no way I'd give up on it! Your writing is amazing and the chapter was so moving. Thank you for coming back to us, and I hope you stay! Lots and lots of love for you and this story.
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Reviewed By: puppylover27 On: July 15, 2008 23:43 CDT
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I just wanted to tell you that I've just finished reading all 6 chapters of your story. Please don't give up hope. Your story is amazing. I could actually feel myself blushing from their kiss. I've just started to write fan fiction myself and I find that when I'm not focused on the story to intensely it tends to find me and then I just write it as it comes. I'm sure the rest of your story will find its way to you. You need not lack confidence either, because your story has depth and feeling where I've found some stories to be sorely lacking of both. Please don't give up. You owe it to yourself and your story to finish. Thank you for what you've written so far. :0)
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 19:24 CDT
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This was a VERY well written chanter. Please keep writing. If for no other reason than you like to write.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy's Angel On: May 22, 2008 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh!!! I love this sooo much! I know you haven't updated in a while and all, but can you update please? This is really an interesting story that will forever stay in my mind. PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: anonymousme On: April 25, 2008 16:02 CDT
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Hey just letting you know there are still people waiting for the rest of this story! Please please don't forget us. Or let us know what's going on? Please and thank you! Still love the story.
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Title: We're Still Here
Reviewed By: Fans On: April 15, 2008 22:08 CDT
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We're still here, we still love your story. Update soon, please, or post a comment that tells us your status.
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Reviewed By: anonymousme On: February 20, 2008 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I know you get busy and all and have a life, but I just wanted to let you know there are those of us out here still reading this story and waiting on a new chapter. No pressure, but don't give up on us please!!! I still love this story, and can't wait to read more. Thank you in advance!
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Title: Please!
Reviewed By: Jinn Ryu On: February 19, 2008 16:07 CST
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C'mon, I know your busy, but we loyal fans are dying!! And I quote from the heading of chapter 4: "However, a lot of you may be new to it, enjoy it, and can only accept that I will not let 3+ months go by without updating again. I don't want to pressure you, but you did make a promise...
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Reviewed By: Jin Ryuu On: January 25, 2008 19:59 CST
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PLEASE!! I'm going to die!!
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Title: Please?...
Reviewed By: Jin Ryuu On: January 16, 2008 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update? It's such a wonderful story! I really miss it!! Every time I get on the computer, I come here just to check if you've updated! I do realize you have a life, however, so just update as soon as you can...Love much!
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Title: Wow. *_*
Reviewed By: linen_straps [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've stumbled upon this little gem of a story by chance - and I enjoy it immensely! :D I'm on the edge of my seat, anticipating what might happen next. And don't worry about a little OOC-ness, it's supposed to be a feel-good-fic, no? And indeed, it is! I love how you pile up all that UST over the course of several chapters *fans self* XD Your description in general is very vivid, makes me feel like I'm inside the story - I can actually see it in my head. All of it. *cringes during the visions* So, thank you very much for writing and sharing this lovely and most imaginative story. It deserves 10 out of 10 for sure. I'll wait patiently for any updates you might pop out - with your heavy work-schedule and all. Thanks again, and keep up the great work! ::hugs:: (And now I'm off to read all of your other works, too. :D )
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