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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 19:41 EDT
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Love it!! I promise to share Kenshin really i will. Sooo can I have him please??? I almost expect Kaoru to be pregnant from all this ...ahem...activity. Can't wait for hte next update either. Keep up the good work. Even if they have to go to Tokyo sometime.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was considerate of you to have a lemon warning. when i beta for my adult-fan-fic authors i usually seperate as follows: first and second base ~lemon warning~ third base and home ~fini~ ... - - good chapters, very nice to have misao and aoshi witness the wedding, and a few jabs at aoshi for amusement. ~ much gratitude ~ ginny
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Reviewed By: freaky-hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 01:36 EDT
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I love it! I normally don't review on Media-miner *is lazy ^-^* but two chapters in one day! Yay! And such amazing ones at that! *confetti* I'm currently on a Kenshin streak, and i love your stories! ~Rosie
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 17:19 EDT
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Finally married and Kaoru dowsn't look like she knows what hit her. Now we just need Misao and Aoshi! hehehe. Love it
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 03:05 EDT
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i'm pretty surprised that he wasn't the one to bring up the subject of marriage... he is such an honorable and old fashioned guy that i woulda thunk he would've dragged her to the nearest temple or shrine and married her the next morning. ~ happy healthy update reward: ::chocolate coma:: ~ 12 oz silken tofu ~ 12 oz melted chocolate chips ~ whip to a fluffy froth ~ refrigerate till cold ~ yummy! ~ a pleasure, ginny ~ ~ i could offer to beta for you but i have to warn you that i don't do lemons... i skip over them.
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:16 EDT
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please let me hit Kaoru over hte head and marry Kenshin in her stead. PLease!!!So is Kaoru going to have any more panic attacks or are we going to wait until Tokyo where there is the possibility Mavis will show up??? I can't wait to see if Kenshin acts different in Tokyo with everyone around. Keep up the good work. This is my favorite story sooo please update soon.
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 16:59 EDT
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God I would love for Kenshin to do that to me. I loved this chapter. I can't see what step u take with there relationship now. Who knows maybe she will even become pg.
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Reviewed By: DianWei On: March 27, 2007 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Keep up the good work. However, it says that the 6th chapter is avaiable, but there are still only 5 chapters in the story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wouldn't have said it if i didn't mean it. >=P ...there will be a wedding now, ne? ~ good job! ~ ginny
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The scenes between Kenshin and Kaoru are so cute!!! Update soon please and keep up the awesome work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 00:46 EDT
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I swear you outdo yourself everytime wiht each chapter. I am bowing to your greatness. i have an idea about Kaoru and her maintaining her innocence and i can't wait to see if i am correct. Keep up the good work and definately can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
post traumatic stress does a real number on a person and you have portrayed it realistically; nightmares, panic attacks... this is an enaging story, you make the reader sympathise with the characters, empathizing with their struggles. ~ a truely gifted and talented artist can elicit strong emotion from those who view his/her work, in this, you have succeeded. thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! I really can't wait for more. So far Kaoru is ok with Kenshin but atleast he is starting to notice that the -dono is really ticking her off. Love Kaoru's idea to plant a garden. I wonder if i plant one would Kenshin come and live with me. I can but hope. I have a suspicion that Kenshin is going to start training with Kaoru or Yahiko will come to visit. Woo Hoo I look forward to your update :O)
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Title: from horror to fluff in 4 easy chapters
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a a problem with the sad and scary stuff unless it's got the little sparks of humor and light to ease my trauma... this is a really good story. you have done a wonderful job of portraying both light and dark. ~thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: jenniebennie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is good. i can't wait to see if Kaoru gets over her anxiety or even how Kenshin goes about it. Very good story please update often.
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