| "Inside Out" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: :DDD
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 17:55 EDT
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Eeeeee! < 33333333333...... That's all I have to say o.o.-Metalic (Pebbles56@gmail.com)
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Reviewed By: good job On: May 28, 2007 13:42 EDT
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can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you can post soon :)
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Title: Please update again
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 18:15 EDT
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I really like how things are turning up ^ ~ I hope that you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: unexpected On: May 24, 2007 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. You've kept it realistic and have had alot of suspense! I have enjoyed reading it and will check back frequently for (hopefully) updates! Please continue with the story, I am very interested! Might I suggest though, if youre headed for a mature approach on things, when you write scenes that involve sexual content, you be a bit less... vague about things? I can see you pay attention to detail and youre very descriptive, so i dont think it should be a problem! Thanks. :] and ps i like the lucasxelias pairing alot! sheekxlucas is cute, though.
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Title: Inside Out
Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it may seem low but thats what I rate everyone on there first story I read. But I did enjoy it very much and I do hope you write more stories. I as a gay guy tend to see some of these type of relations in stories I read that have brothers and it makes me wonder are all gay guys lives similar to these stories as mine is? I know its practically hard to believe but me and my aniue pretty much loved each other before he was killed in an accident. So I tend to like stories like this one here.
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 13:33 EDT
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Poor Elias! Loves his Lucas...Thanks for updating!! I've been waiting ever so long. Can't wait for you to get another chapter up! :)
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:34 EDT
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Quality over quantity, any day! That was a really good chapter! the whole story is so..so..Dramatic! Great! Well written! Keep up the good work because you rock!
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: May 21, 2007 23:44 EDT
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don't listen to the others lucasXelias is WAY better! and update soon, kay?
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Title: WRITE MORE IT WAS REALLY GOOD
Reviewed By: ITS ME NEWDKIDT i just didn't feel like loging in On: May 17, 2007 19:11 EDT
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i think your friend is right i want sheek and lucas to be together PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP. i really don't like the mom so much and where the hell is that good for nothing father of theirs. but i so like the pairing of sheek and lucas.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 14:18 EDT
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i like lucasXsheek pairing better. Nothing personal but the incest thing was kinda awkward...but nevermind that. besides, it has to end with the state Elias is in and the last thing Lucas needs is to put the spotlight back on him and his brother. It's time that the both of them were to move on. But none the less i do hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: May 10, 2007 23:50 EDT
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please go back to the lucasxelias pairing! i don't like sheek at all
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Title: Tanjobi Omedetou
Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:46 EDT
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thank you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 15:09 EDT
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BADSHEEK. Ishoothim. Nothing personal, I just like LucasXElias better. Honest to god I can't wait until what happens, I'll probably check back for an update every fifteen minutes... but that's how obsession works X3.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 15:11 EDT
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Duh duh duh!!! I cannot wait till the next chapter! Clearly I'll have to, so please hurry! I Absolutley love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 10:50 EDT
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OMGOSH whats going to happen i need to know please write more PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE
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