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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:54 EDT
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I can't wait to see what happens next!! Afer all, you ended the chapter at a pretty intense ponit. Way to leave us at the edge of our seats! :)
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 18:45 EDT
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love how things are turning out so far in the story ^ ~ keep up the good work and update soon please
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Title: Puh...
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to god if Elias doesn't tell the truth about what he was doing to himself I'll kick his ass. Love it XD, Can't wait for more.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with this story, I'm going to scream if there isn't an update soon XD. I love Lucas... he's so... cool. -Looks at own brother.- Puh. Anyway, great storyline, great writing style, great everything.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:33 EDT
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i really loved it and i can't wait til you put up mthe pics and the next chapter. i hope he remembers because i really want lucas to beat the ccrap out of those kids.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 12:05 EDT
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Wow. I actually don't now what to say.....except for that your work is amazing! Gahh! it's so....great! I mean i'm hardly even creeped out about the fact that they're brothers cuz it's so, well I really don't know. Anyway, keep up the Great work, and please try to update soon! I hanging on the edge here, i want to read more!!!!! OK, so I've ranted at you long enough. Thanks for making my Day!!!!!
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Title: u need more
Reviewed By: omg omg omg On: May 01, 2007 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 10 10 10 10~!!!!!!!! i love it so far! i like the way u wright. u have a god way w/words. :] can i make a rquest tho? u need more smut! ur good at writing it b/c when u do, u kep it clean u no what i mean? aniwya MORE MORE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Light_Red_Harpy_001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 17:53 EDT
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Light: This is so awesome! Update soon, okies?? *Gives you puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: good job On: April 24, 2007 13:31 EDT
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More more more!! I hope you can figure out what to do next...
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 17:56 EDT
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OMGosh that was a awsome chapter you judt have to write more kay.
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Reviewed By: iluuvtiread On: April 19, 2007 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dno't know what to say. Except AMAZING. I love it!!!!!!! Please update more, your characters and storyline/plot are reslly great!!
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Reviewed By: More more On: April 18, 2007 10:58 EDT
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Oooo! I can't wiat to see what happens next!! Hope you can upload some more very soon, as I am left hanging for more.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 16:52 EDT
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yay another chapter now write another please this story is really getting good
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Reviewed By: JuJuBean On: April 17, 2007 16:50 EDT
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i loved it so keep writting okay
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Reviewed By: Hurry and update On: April 10, 2007 13:49 EDT
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More more mjore more! I am on the edge of my seat here. You are leaving us hanging...
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