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Title: Ekaterina1313
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2012 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see the loving Zaraki back to his wife and them trying to escape. i almost had a heart attack when i saw that a new chapter was posted, that i dropped everything and began to read. i dnt know how you do it but you keep making of lust for more of this story. keep writing and much love Ekaterina1313 |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2012 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck? Man, the suspense is killing me here. What the heck happened outside of Ran's room? Either way, this is beginning to reach a final climax though I'm not sure exactly what's real and what's an Aizen illusion. |
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2012 09:11 EDT
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I havent evan read the new chapter yet and im overly excited thank you thank you thank you fot updating I have been following this story for 2 years and im still watching |
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a long time! But glad to see this chap once more! Thank you! Also, can't wait for more Kenpachi and Rangiku! Whoo~ |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2011 09:01 EDT
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Ugh, sorry for taking so long to comment, my hands are kinda full of baby at the moment. ;p Anyway, I really like how you've developed this scene with Gin. Now Gin's and the Maggot Nester's role take on greater complexity and I like it. Hopefully, the next few chapters answer a few more of the plot's mysteries. Keep up the good work Orion! |
Title: Zakirya
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! You are FIERCE! This story is FIERCE! Although, sometimes when you start with Matsumoto forgetting things, it gets confusing on where the story left off from the previous chap. Oh, wouldn't it be funny if after all that sex, Zaraki and Ran have triplets!? Lord help Soul Society for those trouble makers! And Soifon and Toshiro are so cute together! Never thought of them as a couple, now I have something to look forward to on my hunt for awesome Bleach fics! |
Title: chapter 41 dance
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 On: January 18, 2011 06:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok first i love this story and this pairing and i would have never thought to put these 2 together anyway plz plz plz write another chapter b4 i die of of constant waiting lol |
Reviewed By: iluvsasuke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 22:39 EST
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I like the story but think there might be a little to mich sex |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2011 16:16 EST
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Argh, sorry for the delay. Kinda out in the middle of nowhere when you posted this. What to say, what to say? I think you entered Great Lebowski territory here especially with that impromptu dance (very nice BTW). But at the end I'm left wondering, what the hell is going on? God I hate bad guys who have hypnosis powers. |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2010 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez. The plot thickens but man following Ran's thoughts is like herding cats. I take it the drug Gin gave Ran is making her paranoid like this and the kiss Gin wants is intended to be used as leverage against Zaraki. Hmmmm, let's see how this plays out. Personally I'm hoping Zaraki busts out the Mario cap and stomps some Goombas. ;p |
Reviewed By: Ya-u On: August 16, 2010 03:49 EDT
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This is really good. At first I was questioning how well the first chapter would turn out, but you pulled it off quite nicely. I'm very excited to read more of it. =D
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2010 15:09 EDT
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Gin in this chapter is... interesting. Even in the manga his motives seem odd. Gin is beginning to look like your typical ex that doesn't want to let go. Or the second coming of Jack Nicholson from the Shining. Anyway, where this leads to I have no idea but it certainly is exciting. Once again Orion you're leaving me on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: Fatal Mars On: July 26, 2010 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the best bleach stories I have ever read period. You have an amazing feel for keeping the characters true to themselves as well as keeping the flow of the story smooth. I love the pairing even though I would have never thought of it in a million years. I am now going to do my best and read as much of this as I can today. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kyon On: July 11, 2010 14:36 EDT
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Please, please, keep updating your fanfics!!!!!!! I love them and their pairings, and don't give up!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 17:45 EDT
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No matter what you say about the Maggot Nester, he certainly doesn't know when to give up does he? Anyway, more wholesome bonding between Rukia and Ran. Interesting little interaction with the lil' squirt and Chad. Makes me wonder if you got something up your sleeve. Hmmmm. Well as I always say, great job and MORE! ;)
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