| "Different Circumstances" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: OOOOOOHHHHH
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH This was such a supensefull chapter love it. OMG cant't wait for th next chapters cliff hangers drive me insane gotta know ho this fight ends.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 10:40 EDT
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"Memento Mori" Oh shi- ;)
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: September 18, 2009 15:47 EDT
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Holy Crap that was intense and i wasnt expecting that at all...WOW O~O Cant wait for the net chapter so post soon cause i need to know what happens XD
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 14:37 EDT
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Huh, so Zaraki has some kind of pseudo-Vizard state but it's driven by blood and he's more of a Berserker. Awesome. Poor Ran, looks like she's a goner. I wonder what kind of conversation she had with her Zan, "Welp, it's been nice thanks for nothing you useless fleabag." Heh. Good job. BTW, I'm still alive and writing. I'm just... slow is all.
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Title: ldymoon (nsi)
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 17:29 EDT
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ooooohhhhh the plot thickens and she finally stands up for herself and i can't wait for the next chapter and i'm going to read that one shot and yeah can't wait for that next chapter!!! such a great story!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 09:51 EDT
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Man, I think Mayuri wins the Douche of the Year award hands down. Geez, I'm beginning to wonder what he hopes to accomplish by being a jackass to everyone. I also like how you've got some of the other characters coming into their own, the most surprising being Yachiru. What are you planning to do with her I wonder. And is it my imagination or are you hinting at a Renji x Nel pairing now? Finally, yay, I was hoping you'd do some oneshots on some of the other couples. I'm especially looking forward to the Byakuya X Kiyone one. That's gotta be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 06:07 EDT
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Man i hope Kuroshichi (sp?) gets his ass whooped...totally evil...but I loved the chapter anyway and I think you got the emotions down great...XD cant wait for the next chapter...update soon XD
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Title: review- chapter 3
Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 11:29 EDT
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i love it! I like how u make rangiku kinda stutter over her emotions. it fits her character really good. ^,^ great job! ~Winter051094~
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Title: review- chapter 3
Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 11:29 EDT
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i love it! I like how u make rangiku kinda stutter over her emotions. it fits her character really good. ^,^ great job! ~Winter051094~
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Title: review- chapter 2
Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 10:58 EDT
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wow, once again this is a great chapter. I love the way u capture them both in the story (keep in mind that I have read all 30 chapters and im just goin back to review em for ya) -.^ but anyways, I love how u dont push their relationship (romanticly) too fast but take it at a good pase. great job!!! ~Winter051094~
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Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 10:26 EDT
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I just reread the first chapter...wow...i loved it. great job on it!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: winter051094 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok. first off, the raitings asked me if it was fun to read. well let me put it this way...I stayed up all last night until 4 in the morning to read this story (I started reading it that night) and finished it a few minutes ago. Ill tell yeah wat, u keep asking for reviews and cuz ur story was so dang awsome, im gonna start with chapter 1 and review EVERY SINGLE chapter u write. -.^ man and just another fyi, I used to b a Matusmoto X Gin fan, but u have TOTALY changed my oppenion. ^,^ well, onto the nxt chapter!!! ~Winter051094~
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 10:36 EDT
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OMG so good...I am finally caught up so you have to update soon...abolsutely love how you have this working and I am loking forward to how you are going to develop relationships and issues inthe story...please update soon XD
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Title: Decent
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 09:18 EDT
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Another good chapter of course. Well I have to say the way you have written Ran is great so close to the manga. Well the Rukia/Yamachika pairing mention was interesting I guess. If you keep posting i will keep reviewing have fun and update soon.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: May 29, 2009 23:09 EDT
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ooh another good chapter! i love the rukia/yamachika pair. would love to read that story!! hint hint!! wink wink!! lol. It's sad she lost his baby and hopefully, Renji will forgive her and understand, i hope he's a man about it! He should be happy for his friend and happy his friend isn't gay right? lol. looking forward to the next chatper!
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