| "Different Circumstances" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 15:32 EDT
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Damn. The interaction between Ran and Rukia really did it for me on this chapter. It was interesting to see Rukia's view on Byakuya impending marriage and finally Ran pushing Rukia's buttons. It was nice to see her doing it to someone other than Zaraki or Toshiro. Now what shenanigans is Zaraki up to? (oh yeah and write more Friend ;P)
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 13:10 EDT
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Good character development for Rukia. Hope it goes well with Byakuya. I'm sure Zaraki is getting into trouble one way or another... sigh. Can't wait to see the next chap.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 03:41 EDT
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yeah...simple is boring so we all lve oyu for taking on the challenge...nice chapter though...hopefully it works out btwn the kuchikis and everyone else...lots of drama to fix but i loved it and cant wait for my angst...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: March 18, 2010 01:03 EDT
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ahhh another great chapter to this story! And it would be a scary thought of her memory loss set backs!!! I hope she doesn't lose her memory again!! Anyway, I wonder what he's going to do about the info he just received and girl...I know it's a oneshot but it would be nice to get what happens with 'those two' sigh...anywho, looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 21:40 EST
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Huh. It was kinda interesting to see Ran do the whole 'falling in love with a stranger' deal. I'd seen in other fics where two random characters would fall into each other's arms but this is a really cool twist on it. Plus having Ran reflect over her emotions about it really made it even better showing how in those other stories the lack of doubt of the characters' conviction they're in love despite the fact they don't really know the other character. Nice job but man the mystery continues. What's the deal with Zaraki's zan? Hmmmm...
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: March 02, 2010 01:54 EST
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Sorry it took so long for me to make a comment, time has been hectic, but, it was a terrific read. Matsumoto truly showing signs of her condition. One moment like this and the next moment...lol. I was told I was like that. lol. And...I love the name! Momento Mori! I think it fits him too! Til the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2010 12:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! I like how you made seperate stories for the different pairings (love the Soi Fong and Toushiro story)!! I wonder how you can keep track though of all that's going on without us or the main characters knowing. I would be so confused or I would write everything down in a journal or something. I really liked the part where Zaraki finds out his zanpakutou's name, very cool and well done. Anyways, keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow and can i say agian wow. so so so happy zaraki has communicated with his zan and he asks ran what to expect for som guidance love it. i shows that there is more of a basis to their relationship besides the physical. very well informed chap. looking forward to the future. as always a pleasure to read
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 09:34 EST
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YAYYYYY thanks for updating...nice little info session and its good to have their relationship back a little bit...cant wait for the next chapter...more angst? drama? dun dun DUN cant wait...keep it up XD
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 23:02 EST
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A skull eh? Hmmm, I sense a theme here. ;) Zaraki's Zan kinda reminds me of Barragan's released form. More intriguing character development between Ran and Zaraki. I really like how you show despite the fact the relationship is imperfect, they still find the strength to continue on together. That my friend is true romance. ... Or is that bromance?
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 23, 2009 22:06 EST
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Ok can I say wow! I enjoyed reading this chapter and I don't want to give too much away just in case other readers haven't gotten this far...but...what are the chances of that!!! you know what I'm talking about! lol. Can't wait for the detailed description of what is really going on with that right there.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 23, 2009 21:09 EST
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I am soooo sorry I didn't realize you updated on this story and now I have 3 chapters to read, so far, you have me feeling scary on this one, will she be alright?? I know she will cuz she is the main person in this story, but still, it's exciting to wonder I'm off to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 11:31 EST
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I really like the interactions between Ran and Haneko and later with Zaraki especially that little moment they had there near the end. Sometimes Ran can be too cute when she has doubts. Zaraki's comment about his Berseker personality vs Ichigo's Hollow was interesting. However if Zaraki at point dawns a cape and X-ray eyes then I'm gonna groan. ;) I'm excited, I can't wait to see what the deal is Memento Mori.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 01:29 EST
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oooooo well worth the wait and I cant wait for the briefing on what Memento Mori is....so update sooooonnnnn XD
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Reviewed By: hollowwithin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 08:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ask only that you keep updating. I love Zaraki and there are very few fics about him besides the 12 i wrote and never posted. your awesome. you are the only person who i have marked as a favorite. thank you.
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