| "Different Circumstances" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: ldymoon(nsi) On: October 03, 2008 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I've read chapters 1-26 in two days straight going to bed at 2-3 in the morning since it's at night that I have time to do anything and now I'm ready for you to give me more! It's October already give me another chapter I love this story and...I want to know what the hells going on in Seireiti. That damn old man that's right someone gotta knock him down! he gets on my nerves always saying no to help Ichigo damn old man after all our hero's done for them!!! ok, yeah, old man yamamato needs to go down!!! lol. thanks for writing this story and please finish it ok.
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 15:59 EDT
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Hi!! LOVE the story, I started 'For Love' first (I LOVE Shiro, and this quickly second even though I know this occurs first. I'm.... slighty confused. How far is the time gap between the two stories? You can answer on either story, I'll see it. Hot lemon! :>
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 15:56 EDT
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Whoa, whoa, whoa. Wait a minute. So how can Zaraki know she's pregnant if it's been only a few days? Unless I understood something you said incorrectly *ahem*virginity*ahem* how is there enough time for him to know unless his ability to sense these things suddenly improved? Otherwise, this one was... randy which considering Ran and Zaraki isn't terribly surprising. Though I hate to say it I'm beginning to crave the plot point elements more than the smut. Is there something wrong with me?
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 20:45 EDT
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Hmmmm, now the story moves to Los Noches. For awhile there I was wondering what you were going to do next. With things coming to terms with Toshiro, me thinks we've closed the door on one arc and begun another. Nice fight scene BTW and nice job incorporating Ran's zan spirit. So what do you have up your sleeve Orion?
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 04:54 EDT
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Ack! I nearly missed this update since I've been so busy the last few days. Hmmm, damn it, so many clues yet things are bubbling underneath the surface. Soi appears to still have some issues with Toshiro. Though I did chuckle at Ran's unintentional double entendre. Anyway so many wisps and clues, am I just not reading close enough? It's frustrating yet satisfying. Let's continue shall we? BTW I promise to finish this next chapter of TTTW soon. Soon. Maybe. ;P
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Title: PLZ continue
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I was wondering if how were u going to continue. But love it anyway. I cant stresss this anymore but plz continue both these stories they grab hold of you and when u stop u think many different scenarios until the next chapter. i know i cant spell so bear with me lol. oh oh maybe you can set rukia with ikkaku or kira that will be intresting as for ichigo well idk umm nemu or that Tatsuki even chizuri. A little out of my leauge. always a pleasure to read
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 12:59 EDT
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I can reverse Captain Shihoin's decision regarding my Division Buh? What decision was that? Anyway, yeah you kinda caught me there, I was expecting the cat. Haha, sex and bankai. I think I'll be the only one amused by that. There's some much going on here, I'm beginning to get lost. You're hinting at alot of things here and it comes at you fast. I think this one will require several re-readings. :)
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Title: what a ride
Reviewed By: froglily13 On: June 04, 2008 03:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading your fic, but I can't wait for your next update (the suspense is killing me >.
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Title: Never thought you'd write so much did ya?
Reviewed By: luna_spellsprite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 08:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know for someone who thought this was only going to be a 6-7 chap story you are doing an excellent job with it. This is one story I am always pleased to see have an update arrive in my favorites. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 11:46 EDT
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Er, Orion, you uploaded The Meal in place of The Confession. Might want to fix that...
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Reviewed By: Talmage On: May 06, 2008 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! so happy to see an update!!! excellent job as always. Just waiting with bated breath for the return of Zaraki!
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Reviewed By: ElizzzaBear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your work. I love alternative pairings, and I believe you have made these two may favorite of all time. I do hope you will continue to write, it is not often that I find stories with actual thought and effort put into them, and yours has both with a great plot to boot!
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Reviewed By: Edwardthe5th On: April 16, 2008 20:59 EDT
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First off, way to think outside the box with this pairing! I can't imagine her with anyone else now! This is an incredibly well written story. I do hope Momo snaps out of it and I am disappointed that Toshiro says he doesn't love her ( hitsu/hina fan ). It's amazaing the way you've brought depth to Zaraki. From what I've seen of the series he likes to fight and has an obvious soft spot for Yachiru but you made him an dimensional character! I've thoroughly enjoyed all 21 chapters and I'll be anxiously awaiting the next one!
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Reviewed By: Talmage On: April 05, 2008 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Normally I shy away from first person writing, but you have done awesome with this. can't wait for more Zaraki ^_^
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Title: Can't wait!
Reviewed By: banryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back again! Actauly I read all the chapters several time in between posts. Letting you know that the fan art I told you about in finaly up! The title is Odd Couple. (Cause anyone who doesn't read this story would think so.) I hope that the picture is good enough... it is one of the many ideas I have. I hope you don't mind. Everytime you post a new chapter it makes my day!
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