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Reviewed By: dogdemon ri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 21:15 EDT
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its good. and i think you should continue your story as you wish it to be and not what others want it to be. it defeats the purpose of writing for yourself and you wont enjoy it as much
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Im going to try my hardest of how I see this story. lol That sounds like Im about to bash it. HA! Like I would. Your story is very unique. Though there are stories about slavery. This is different. Though Inuyasha is suppose to be ruthless, I think he is getting a little to far out of character. Well at least not yet he has to be ruthless alittle longer. Because you know he ddint like her really til after the Yura battle and the sword time in the grave. But this story is great though tome some thing is missing. Something that good make it so m uch better. Though I am still trying to determine what that is. I wanted to ask i fyou planned on putting Inuyasha's night into the mix. Because tha was a major point in the series and could bring slim fluff into story if you wanted it. In the end .. I love this story..is one of the best. Heyy since its so chop full of hentai moments soon to come and angst you shuld put it up on Eternal Destiny. Its a site for Inu/KAg and their looking for angst stories like yours. Well hope you do update soon. Once again.. I love it . =D
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: October 15, 2007 01:24 EDT
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As far as people saying your making inuyasha too mean or too nice screw it I mean i love what YOU have done with the story and I check daily to see what YOU have come up with not anyone else so dont let them confuse you do what you gotta do to get it done but its your choice how he is I think its perfect just how it is. with any dom there are nice as well as mean and any good one will switch between the two depending on the situation so you do it as you've been doin it Its perfect just how it is....and now with that said..you make me cry *whimpers* i need an update..
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Reviewed By: mic_check On: October 14, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is a really good story. i think you contrasted kagome and inuyasha perfectly, they play off one another very dangerously and keeps me on edge about how far kagome can push inuyasha and how much inuyasha really cares for kagome as a human, pet, or something else? i'm interested in seeing how their realtionship changes/grows, or if there is any room for growth at all. looking forward to the next chapter =)
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Reviewed By: shei On: October 08, 2007 09:35 EDT
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no i think inuyasha is just fine....if u make him meaner its just gna ruin the connection that they clearly have...the only thing i HOPE u dnt do is make her sleep w/ that grl n have him watch...i cant c her bein in love w/ him after that...but hey its ur story plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: 2hot4u On: October 01, 2007 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Lovey On: September 15, 2007 03:13 EDT
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really good, other than the fact that it makes Inuyasha sound like a complete and utter dickwad. You're doing a great job of Kagome's stubborn personality, though I hope later her and Inuyasha get along a little better.
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Reviewed By: JJ On: September 10, 2007 21:37 EDT
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I love your story! please hurry and continue update asap. its a great story and i llllloooovvveeee iiiittt! please hurry and update.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 16:46 EDT
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Pretty nicely done, though a bit OOC as Kagome is way too disobedient for a pet. And knowing Inuyasha's character, he would never be so lenient. It appears as though they are equals rather then master/pet relationship.Well, I'll be looking forward to reading Kagome's punishment.
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Reviewed By: GummiPanda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 19:32 EDT
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This is a pretty entertaining story. I'm very pleased with it, and am overjoyed Kagome hasn't broken yet! GO KAGOME! :] Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 04, 2007 11:42 EDT
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yay guess what i wrote more and it deleted. But i was saying that although going back to skool sux ur story is making it better... anyways i start tomorrow so i gtg... good luck and update soon! Geez fr me that was a weird review... guess i'm still tired from last night..
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 04, 2007 11:40 EDT
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Great job... I can't wait to see what happens... I know it'll be great! Now i gotta go tough gotta do stuff fr skool...>-
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Reviewed By: HunniBunn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi hi Im a new reader i just have a question umm why did you choose Yura to be his pet that he bought and not Kikyo? other than that question I love the story... Plz update
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 05:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! I absolutely loved the line where Sango said that Kagome can take it as well as she dishes it. Nice! the fight with Yura? A-class lol.
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: September 03, 2007 02:22 EDT
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Ok you got me there. not so much for the beating but for everything else i would kill to be in her position lol i don't blame her for beating on Yura either I'd have knocked the ***** into the next century lol you can fill in a word for the * lol i know a few that would fit. I love the new chapter can't wait for the next one. as always you've made my day ^_^ keep up the good work
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