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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay i love your story keep up dating
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Title: cant wait!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMYG! I can't wait! WOO!*runs around room like a ninny* *trips* ow, that didn't feel so good, but I bet I would feel better if you wrote a new chapter right away! ^^ Sorry, just had to say it! *Hey, look, it's 40 doller bill! hehe ^^ update peas!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, he went from hard to limp to swollen in a matter of seconds. Lol!! A party so soon?? Man, I can smell the drama coming. And yes I am pretty imaginitive, and quite dramatic at times..lol. I'm glad to see you had updated. Your story is fun and it gives me something to look forward to day to day! Keep 'em coming and I will keep reading and reviewing. Somehow, I dont think you're getting the fair end of that deal though....lol! Thanks a bunch, enjoy your weekend.
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 22:54 EDT
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HAHAHAH finally she showed inuyasha what she's made of. But I 'm guessing there are some dark days ahead for her.
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Title: gasp
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-gasp- yes yes YES u updated i so happy u made my day this chappie was GREAT lol inu deserved the pain lol so damn rude csllin her a pet even if she is i love ur fanfic absolutely positively LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it I havent be able to stop think about it!!! PLZ update soon u really r a grat writer with pefect description n all lol PLZ n thank u!!!
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: August 01, 2007 17:18 EDT
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You just totally made my day ^_^ I checked in on the off chance that you had updated since i checked last night....>.> I know I'm obsessed lol but OMG I LOVE THIS STORY. lol I swear I'd kill to be kags in this lol Keep up the good work Major kudos can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 16:19 EDT
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And thank you whitterstitters for making her update...
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 16:18 EDT
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Thanks again. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha's gonna do to her. Funny stuff. And I'll continue to love this story forever... and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever. And ever. So... Sango's the bodyguard? Iteresting... where's Miroku? Hm... guess I'll wait and find out.... Update!!!!!!
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Title: gasp
Reviewed By: Lola-la la la On: August 01, 2007 14:21 EDT
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I love this story.It is fantastic only thing is that it needs more lime and lemon and needs to have longer chaps and there should be uqdates daily!.
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhhhhh this is sooooo addicting how do u do it? all well please update soon
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Reviewed By: red1246 On: August 01, 2007 11:45 EDT
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OMG you have to update soon I want to know what happens next :P
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 09:54 EDT
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love the way you think. wonder if his inner beast is in love yet? LOL!! love to see that youkai in love/lust for his fiesty miko
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 07:23 EDT
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hahaha! i was laughing so much when kagome kicked inuyasha in the balls... i once did that to my friend but he just laid on the floor for a few minutes before getting up and walking weirdly, the bastard deserved that... really good update and i hope you keep up that good work you are doing with all your chapters and please, please, PLEASE update really soon! =)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 04:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... seems that kagome is causing so much trouble... she's very rebellious too... why is inuyasha the way he is now... maybe at some point inuyasha & kagome will love each other and not be master & pet... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Wipes sweat off brow!!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok,this story is really good. You write very well. As for what is happening to her, Im kinda in shock. I mean yeah, its Yash, enough said right?? But it is rape, well a forced consent rape. I think that if he treats her like a whore, she may loose her spirit. Or hell, maybe find her fire. Will he ever see her as a woman, or will he always see her as a posession he cares nothing for other than to live out his fantasies? So many things can happen with this, she could loose her spirit, self worth, and even blame herself and be ashamed for enjoying it, or she could become just as obsessed with sex as he is, and maybe just maybe you have a twist to the end of your story that will teach lil Yash, not to underestimate the power of a woman....hmmm. Well I am here for the ride, I cant wait to see what you write next. Thanx for writing it..
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