| "My Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Willowstar14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! You updated!^^ I was so happy when I saw this chapter alert on my email and stopped everything I was doing to read it. I glad that you finally updated but this was a really short chapter and seemed like a filler chapter. Oh well, it's still an update and at least now I know you'll continue the story. Btw, I will e-mail you again if you take too long to update^^ Well, Ja Ne for now and update soon! ~Willowstar(=^-^=)
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: June 24, 2008 14:57 EDT
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omg my heart nearly stopped when i saw a new chapter was up....I hope more will be coming soon...I love this story and have since chapter one. I can't wait to see what happens....I will admit I'm hoping Kags pulls out Yura's o so precious hair soon though that chickie annoys the hell outta me.. lol
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:43 EDT
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Yea well i'll live but be carefull i'll beg you till you update. and don't think i won't *evil laugh* jk. Really good so far. ummmmmmmmm he sould maybe take her camping (just her)and then hot spring? *huggles* ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 19:22 EDT
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Jeez finally. I expect you to have a longer update next time.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! you updated!! *dances around* and yes it does get better nd better every time i read it and i get sad when i reach the end. woo hooo keep up the great work! ^_^ blahh need more!! MORE!!! *crawls away*
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 08:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great introduction to Shippo. The way he attacked Kagome shows he doesn't like Yura any more than Kagome does. I also like the silent food battle, with both the girls threatening the other with food. So what does Kagome want that extra hour for anyway? Just to be bad and spend time away from Inuyasha? It should be interesting to see what Inuyasha does when he finds out Kagome lied about the study group.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said in my ff.net review I was confused and left wanting for more from the ending of the manga but overall, I enjoyed this chapter[: Lol, hioping to still read more upcoming ones.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 00:12 EDT
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I too got disapointed by the way takashi ended the manga and without mentioning kouga! he's my fav character... anyway, that update was um... weird? it was a bit too short although it was nice to see you finally writing this chap. i hope the next one is up soon! =)
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Reviewed By: Willowstar14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please updat soon. I'm sorry if I'm bugging you but I really like this story and would like to see more of it? Please update.
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Reviewed By: puppy eyed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey keep writing you rock u could publish any books and i would buy it
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story was freakin goood!!!!!!! I hope u review soon becuase i cant wait until they get to the real sex and do it up the vajayjay!!!! and it will be really funny if BAM!!!! BOOM!!!! PLOOP!!!! KAgome gets pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahaha I cant wait til she submits!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!111111
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Reviewed By: Kags13 On: May 14, 2008 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why aren't you writing more? I love your syory don't stop please! :)
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Reviewed By: yashielover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I would love for you to continue it:-) please update soon, I really want to know what happens next.
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