| "My Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 22:36 EDT
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great chapter, no i don't have anymore questions thank you for clearing that up... so why are you deleting this by 14th? i'm curious about that lol... anyway keep up the great work you're doing with this story and update soon please =)
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Title: A/N
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 21:39 EDT
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Sorry for the bad spelling and stuff (well worse then it usually is). I didn't have time to look it over, but i wanted to post the next chapter. I was planning on editing it and posting the new version along with chapter 6.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH! its so good! but why will you be deleting it by the 14th? oh my god i cant wait to find out what happens next keep it up your a great writer!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay u updated im so juiced thank you so much i lub da chappie n lub da story cant wait till da nxt chappie!!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 19:33 EDT
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omg, i would've been so embarrassed if i were kagome at the hospital. good new chapter! thanks for updateing:D
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 19:28 EDT
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OO two quotes tht have me very interested are "That day ten years ago" and "the girl of his dreams"..did I miss a flashback? O_O well either way, I luved this chapter! I just finished watching Full House (korean drama) and I was extremely bored and voila! U came out with a new chapter =D Update soon!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 18:44 EDT
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Thanks. I'm sorry 'bout that... but THANK YOU!!! and great job! and sorry, but UPDATE!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is totally different. I do like the premise of the story, and the fast, but not too fast paced set of it. And the lemony goodness getting in there as well. Heh, really liked the 'stall scene' there, very nice. Didn't see that coming, lol. I really do like the story, but might I suggest a beta for it? Its just a thought. Update when ya can! ;)
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Title: New insight
Reviewed By: animelovera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fiction i love this cuz Kagome not so weak woman that need his help all the time great work keep it up and yes some of the other favor of ur r my too.
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Reviewed By: T-Pot On: July 08, 2007 11:48 EDT
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I liked it and I thought the citrus was great..... between good and excellent!! Write another quick please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah the wonderful smuttiness of it all... Please update soon. I'm vibrating with excitiment!
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Reviewed By: annoynmous On: July 07, 2007 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Master333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My little sister read this, and since she is grounded she asked me to write her review. She absolutely loves the story, thinking it a dark and twisting tale of pet and master, strong and alurring. She wishes you would update sooner, as do I. ^.^
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Title: wooo!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 03:26 EDT
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new chapter, yay! good citrus and excellent cliffie. how sweet he said her name^-^
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely a different type of story. I found it to be be very interesting so please update soon.
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