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Title: pups
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey are you doing ok? I'm not very good on words with emotion correctness. I alway left that up to the other girls but I did want to know how you are doing and holding up. Hm sound like a evil hanyou we know is up to no good. Rin made the face, and Inuyasha lol it's him and he show alot of concern for his pup. he may have to lay with his brother again to save there life. that's something we have to see. maybe they can take this time an really get to know each other to somewhat grow close in this time of need. Hm another jewel is in play whats going happen dondondon! see ya for the next update.
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: September 12, 2007 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At the risk of getting personal, I hope you're doing okay in the aftermath? It's situations like these where my words fail me. It's easy to kill off a character in fiction, 'play God' so to speak but in our lives the ultimate reality is quite different. The pain goes on and on... Your new chapter, more involvement from your original characters which I loved. The times that I wished I could sprout wings and fly... Miroku's reaction was truly excellent. I eagerly look forward to more time and tide permitting.
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Title: it's out in the open
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo sorry that your father passed way. I hope your doing alright. I am soo happy that you updated. baka Sesshomaru! at least Inuyasha seem to care. it's time for a reunion of sorts. sesshomaru needs to get over himself! just when Inuyasha was going to tell Kagome here comes Kazuo spilling the beans. and it's so cute that Inu is protective over the baka. And what the HELl does Sango feel Betrayed!???? I'm slow but did Kagome sit him or did Kazuo knock inuyasha out? cause would inu have gone with him just to get to his pup? update
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 22, 2007 20:50 CDT
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well goodbye to Kagome. It's a yaoi fic so she's not needed anyway. hahaha
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For being mpreg, you've done a great job. Inu and sess are so IC. I don't know that I can even do that. Those two are great. I don't know how you can possibly bring them together unless Sesshoumaru being sick truly is a crisis. Can't wait to see that one. Oh yeah. I am looking forward to that next chapter. Oooh, Sesshoumaru was such an ass to Inu...as expected. Inu's rescue of Sess was great. The comedy and the angst. I sure wish Kagome would have taken a liking to an interested youkai. Instead of freaking sitting Inu to hell. That bitch! I love the whole glowing thing and the two being in such denial. Ahahahahaha. That is so them! Chiyo is great and I hope to see her a lot more. Sess needs a real spanking. Miroku's reaction to Inu's revelation was hilarious too. LOL I'm really worried about sess and inu. Like I said, I'm anxious for the next chapter. Wish I could update as regularly as you. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 13:22 CDT
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feeling a little bitter? writing is cathartic so i applaud your use of it back to the fic. finally. inuyasha will realize blood will tell he's going to run to sess! besides wasnt that awful of kagome to sit him hell hath no fury like a woman scorned indeed!
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Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 21:42 CDT
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I have been reading your most excellent story Dubious Relations . I usually like to wait til the end of a story and give an overall review . Overall I enjoyed it very much , you have a good grasp of the characters personalities and make them come alive . The only thing wrong is that it's not finished ! Please continue , I hope to see more soon .
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: August 12, 2007 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic work as usual. I'm afraid I didn't get to read it again. :-( I got a bit carried away working on my own story and now I'm really frazzled. I swear the quality of your writing gets better with each installment. Perhaps it was a little jerky but each segment stands on it's own. Much thanks for including a number of scenes with Kazuo. For some reason I really like the idea of him being an old married man. :-) I loved his joking manner with Inuyasha and his explanation for why Sesshomaru and Inuyasha glow. The idea of Inuyasha spying on his half-brother made me giggle for some reason though it's probably not supposed to be funny or cute. Inuyasha's loving thoughts about him are really sweet. I'm very much looking forward to finding out the explanation for why Sesshomaru's scent is at that scene of the carnage in the next installment. Until then I hope that the exams are over and done with and that you get much need rest and relaxation. whisper
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Reviewed By: Amanda Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, came here to let another review for my actual fave inusess fic cause it's adorable and also you're adorable person! Please update soon, okay? *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 06, 2007 20:51 CDT
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I would've liked to have read the scene where Inu and his gang got the boot. I'm sure it was quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: pretty-crazed-doll [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 17:29 CDT
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More more please! No enough people manage to mpreg Sesshomaru and keep his character. Can't wait for the next instalment!!
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Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic work as usual. That conversation with Chiyo was enlightening. That explanation for Sesshomaru's predicament was nicely done. That image of a male Kitsune growing taller made me chuckle... That's interesting that Sesshomaru responds to Inuyasha's commands. Hmm... Poor Sesshomaru! What would he do if lusty Inuyasha found that one out? I can see Inuyasha using that particular compulsion for his own nefarious purposes... Poor thing he seems a little hurt by Sesshomaru's harshly spoken words. I can tell he feels more for his older brother than he would care to admit. That moment where he was working so hard to keep looking at his face rather than his naked body was bittersweet... I like Kazuo so far. I hope you'll keep him... Hmm... That is interesting that Chiyo took Inuyasha's side in the arguement about the mating. The part with the pup was truly warm and wonderful. I felt like metaphorically swatting your Sesshomaru on the head for spoiling the moment in a very Sesshomaru-like fashion or would that be cranky pregnant lady fashion? *snickers* I can see that things are going to get more interesting from now on with the arrival of the others... I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FLUFFY A IDIOT! I wonder how long will it take for those two to get together? the whole feeling your pup is so sweet awe! I totally awe and I would have loved to see the look in inu face. sessy better shape up or I'm going to beat him up on his butt of course don't wanta hurt the pup. kagome gotta know soon she getting on my nerves baka and make sure to take that damn leash off to please. and what the hell is kagrua up to? plz update gotta know.
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Reviewed By: Strawberry_chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove this story :) I took a long break from fanfiction and have only just now come and caught up on my reading which is why i haven't reviewed since like, chapter two lol I think the thing i'm most impressed about with your story is how you've managed to write an mpreg fic with sess as the uke without making me go 'ah, yeah right, this is getting ridiculous n awfully far fetched' i mean, its about as realistic as such a fic is gonna get, so good job! And you've kept everyone in character pretty well too. The scene with inu feeling sess's stomache was really cute! Will kagome and the others find out inu is the father soon?
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 02:06 CDT
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yes. bridge chapter it may be, but this time inu gets to feel his child. this just may be the sundering of kagome and inuyasha. the child - inuyasha's child, will take precedence over kagome, i think. he will not allow it to be "unloved". looking forward to the "fireworks"
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