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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 22:18 CDT
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I sure hope that Kazuo doesn't get into trouble. It sure will be interesting to see what Inuyasha's new growth spurt is all about. Their cuddling was really sweet. Sesshoumaru is being a real asshole and I'm wondering what you are going to do with him. This could get very dark. You have me worried. Still enjoying the story very much. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: vampress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoying your fic very much except for the extremely long time between updates. The plot is very interesting, the story flows rather smoothly. The mother from hell & teeming up with nuroko, sounds like a super huge double cross is in the works. A lot of drama from the one sided mating, but it seems Sessy will have to side with Inu against this new threat[mother/motherinlaw]. kagome with her toddler mentality, temper tantrums etc, she is beyond dense. Not a kogome fan, wonder how any one really can stand her, oh yeah miko, doesn't make her a saint or god. One would think since Sango her friend, she'd be honest & tell kags about herself.
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Reviewed By: BethB56 On: January 06, 2008 00:04 CST
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I just found this story and I have to say I love it
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Title: Awesome!!!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story! Its so entertaining! But im so confused as to who Inuyasha is going to be with! He seems like he has some feelings for Sesshomaru but Love for Kagome. It would be so awesome if they were all together because sesshomaru doesn't seem to dislike Kagome.
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Title: sorry i forgot
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oohhhh more things are happening and the plot thickens what will sesshomaru do when he find out he's more like his mother than he thought. I love inuyasha he's MINE!!! STAY WAY! I really don't like kagome but she is so damn un I''m sorry she not matrue to handle a fight and talk it out with Inuyasha sesshy right if she didn't treat inuyasha like a slaave dog and sit him when it suits her. keh she's abusive and damn I'm sorry I wouldn't want her raising my kids have you seen shippo? whatever I'm sorry for the rant plz update soon. ladytoyko
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 22:51 CST
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Well, now I'm thinking that Chiyo should kick Satori's ass. Maybe they could have a stoning where all of them could take part. I really don't like that woman. Wow! Sesshoumaru is getting shorter! Seriously? What is up with that? He's getting shorter and wider. *snicker* Sesshoumaru still seems to be such a bastard though. Is he still threatening to gut himself? Damn! He just doesn't give up. The little family that Kagome is staying with is really cute. The whole spider thing was a bit gross though. *shudders* Kagome is being sweet, but it looks like Inuyasha may be taking his involvement with Sesshoumaru a little more serious. Poor girl. I'm glad you didn't make her into a tyrant. That would be sad. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Under the current circumstances, I do believe that you did a great job of predicting the behavior of all parties involved. Sesshoumaru's mother had to be a shock to everyone. After everything with Kikyou, this could possibly have broken her. Chiyo is between a rock and a hard place as far as protocol. Inuyasha's instincts have been sprouting up and this is just another show of the protectiveness that he does not understand. His behavior was as impulsive as always. Sesshoumaru is not cowing under Satori. He dares her to prove who she is. Everything seems quite normal to me. Under the circumstances, I don't see any OOC'ness. Your chapter is wonderful just the way it is. You don't need to edit. I can't wait to see someone kick Satori's ass. It should be Kagome, just to bring her out of her stupor and to prove that she will always be Inuyasha's friend. Although, an ass-kicking from Inuyasha would be just as entertaining. Maybe they could team up to protect Sesshoumaru. I would feel sorry for Sesshoumaru if he had to do it. I'm very excited about seeing what you will do.
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Title: More luff for yooou
Reviewed By: sharkie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 17:24 CST
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O.O... ihope it wasn't my review that annoyed you :/ If it was then I'm sorry And again, much love for this chapter. In certain stories and chapters I have things that stand out for me, little things that make me love the story. And for me, frankly, in this one it was the bit where Kagome was akward around Inuyasha. Loads of people will be thinking along the lines of 'oh kagome is a bitch we all hate her blah blah blah' but I think you have done her reaction so well. You've not done the 'Kagome is a nasty bitch who will go on about everything being sick and sit Inuyasha over and over again' and you've not gone for the 'let's make her really nice and basically Inuyasha's fag hag.' I mean, come on, she's just found out that Inuyasha is not only shagging his brother but also got him pregnant... bit much for a human to grasp. It just makes me happy that, it being a yaoi fanfic, you've managed to keep her so wonderfully in character. Canon Kagome wouldn't be very confrontational in a situation like this. And it makes me happy that you've not just done the whole 'let's just make all the characters that might get in the way bad' thing (even though you probably wouldn't want to get rid of Kagome anyway). Everything else about the fic was great, obviously. But I figured, I went on about Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's relationship in my last review. And I ran out of things to say about them- and the way you characterise Kagome does make me very happy :) ----Jennifer
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Title: *lovelovelovelove*
Reviewed By: sharkie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I thought I'd reviewed this fic- I really did, I searched through the reviews unti I realised I hadn't... So I'm going to review now :) I love this fic so much and one thing that made me really happy in it was (and this is going to sound strange) the fact that Inuyasha does not appear to be attracted to Sesshomaru when he is pregnant. Cause let's be honest- he's a boy, no nice boobs to make bigger, pretty strange to see him suddenly getting a beer belly. The fact that in most fics the people still have randy bum sex with out being the least bit phased by the fact that this is a *pregnant* man really annoys me. Everyone is just so... in character. There is no real bashing of anyone and just the fact that Sesshomaru is the one that gets pregnant makes me so happy because I really can't see that happening to Inuyasha, reeally. In so many things it's like "ah beautiful- blah blah blah blah" and Inuyasha becomes all pretty and meek- Have you seen his hair? There is nothing pretty and meek about that! If you manage to convice me that that hair can be put in a pink flowery kimono ever then I will... do something... ^^' But anywway! :P Back to your fic! Updates just seem slow and that makes me sad :( because it's so good and it makes me happy when you update *coughcheckedbeforeschoolonceortwiceandbeenlatebecausei'vereaditcough* If you discontinue this fic, like the author of Topsy Turvy seems to have done *cries* I will.... eat your first born.. or something like that------Jennifer
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Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: November 13, 2007 18:10 CST
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I'm a bad reader! Here it is another alert and I haven't read the other two chapters yet. I promise I'll read and fav them on y! Gallery in a little bit.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Amanda Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, can't wait to read more!!:)
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 14:37 CST
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I"m so sorry I thought I review already. I'm glad to know that your feeling better. Inuyasha is being stupid his pup life is at stake his dislike for Sesshomarus should not make an unborn child suffer for such a thing. this also goes to sesshomaru, inuyasha of all people should know better that you can't pick your parents. They both should get over themselves. I know in my head that Kagome is upset she's heart broken, but really she have no right to be upset. she never thought that after the jewel is completed that she may not be able to stay there going back and fort. besides she doesn't belong there just like Inuyasha doesn't belong in the future. and she doesn't treat him right at all. Kagome act like inuyasha is her slave and a dog. and tries to change him. She is immature and need to think on how she is what she does. he's not a human she doesn't seem to remember and in any case she could leave and run home like she always does that one reason why they never get anything solve. she a girl not a woman.I wouldn't want to be with someone who could sit me at there pleasure. " Damn it! How could she have been so blind and stupid? Life wasn't perfect! How could she have believed that Inuyasha would sacrifice everything for her, throw away everything to be with her? Was she just some high school girl with a fairytale like crush on a guy she just couldn't have? She'd wondered about it sometimes, about whether their close friendship was just that: friendship. Despite them having kissed, they hadn't really admitted or changed their actions towards each other. They didn't hold hands, they didn't hug all that often - Inuyasha just wasn't the one for cuddling - they didn't really do anything any normal couples did. With that thought in mind, Kagome numbly questioned herself: did she have any right to be as angry as she was?" so true, and shippo needs a good spanking or something. he can't live with humans forever. " He was nothing more than a wretched half-demon, dirty, foul…" how dare she! stupid wench someone will have to put a mussle on her soon. huff ok now that my ranting is somewhat done. hmmm and the evil hanyou and offspring is up to no good. oh good lord your brought back the evil mother from hell. poor sesshomaru he will have to learn what his mother is. (poor inuyasha the inlaws are coming) XD DUNDUDNDUNDUNDUNDUNNNNN!(incert cheese mystery music) ok UPDATE PLEASE ok I'm going to end it here. hope you are alright and things are going good with you. ladytokyo
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: October 08, 2007 20:57 CDT
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I feel bad for Sesshomaru. I don't think Inuyasha is strong enough to protect him.
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Reviewed By: erisincognito [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! I like the way Sesshomaru and Inuyasha don't lose their personalities despite unusual circumstances. Very well written with just enough depth to keep the story full but not so much that it bogs down.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: September 21, 2007 21:02 CDT
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Inuyasha is being stupid. He can get in some free groping and doesn't wanna! why?
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