| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Glowerer On: February 14, 2010 18:13 PST
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Update soon please, this is such a great story!
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Reviewed By: Flowergirl! On: February 10, 2010 10:10 PST
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This is bomb!
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Title: You can't
Reviewed By: KatyR On: February 09, 2010 05:41 PST
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You can't just leave it hanging like this! They both must survive! Please tell us that you are going to update this soon! Ugh! This is such an amazing and very very addicting story! It's so sad what's happening to them! And what kind of reaction is InuYasha going to have when he sees Kagome beaten and even skinned like that! Poor thing, she did not even have a chance to defend herself! And to think of it is mostly his fault! If he would have not stupidly mated with her! So many things would have been different! Kagome probably would be awake and be able to coax Kouga somehow, instead of being unconcious while brutally beaten! And who the hell doesn't ask where their gf is? Or where she's going to be? Or he could have just come with her! But great great wonderful amazing story!
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Reviewed By: Bethronet On: February 07, 2010 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Zoey&Jake On: February 06, 2010 20:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when I stumble upon gems, and this is one of them =)
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Reviewed By: Hotfuzz On: February 05, 2010 19:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story! I wish more stories were like this!
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Reviewed By: EmmaS On: February 04, 2010 22:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very very much!
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Reviewed By: LizzyBennet On: February 04, 2010 21:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know how rare it is to stumble across a thing that makes you laugh and weep every five minutes! Well your story did just that! I love it love it love it!
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Reviewed By: Tronbot On: February 04, 2010 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot begin to tell you how much your story means to me, I really want to finish reading this. Please update this story soon
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Reviewed By: WendyZ On: February 04, 2010 12:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Snoopygirl21 On: February 04, 2010 09:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Meghanita On: February 04, 2010 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I was so surprised by InuYasha's reaction! At first when he would not stop looking for her, ah that was so sweet! And then he stopped, which kind of dissapointed me! But you had such a realistic approach towards it! A phone dying, that is so common, it happens all the time! I was kind of sad how he wasn't doing anything. But it made so much more sense, than have him crying over her, or ripping things apart. That is so cliche, and the way you approach it is so much better. It's more realistic and believable. And they way you work in a lot of things blends in well, and sounds so true! I cannot wait until I read some more! Your story is purely wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Morgan_kitty On: February 03, 2010 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING!
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Reviewed By: norwegianwooood On: February 03, 2010 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHH!! I almost can't take all the angst in this story, but it's good, it's sooo goooood! I can only imagine the pain and guilt Inuyasha will go through and I have no idea what's going to happen to Kagome, and Kikyou's not even here yet to make Inuyasha more angsty and to make Kagome doubt herself! I mean, Kouga will die (right?? PLEASE KILL THAT EVIL, EVIL MAN!! Even if I do like him very much in the anime/manga, but not here!) and then Kikyou's just going to mess everything up again!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!! You know, it's stories like yours that are just fantastic and deserve to be read and loved by everyone because of the character and relationship development, so the readers really appreciate everything Inuyasha and Kagome goes through in the end. This couple goes through SO MUCH SHIT all the time even when they're so obviously meant to be together. Please update soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter. I swear, sometimes I wish I never started this story until it is completed because I have to wait for updates!! It's almost unbearable! YOU'RE FANTASTIC! PLEASE KEEP IT UP!! YOU'RE MAKING ME SPEAK IN CAPS AND MULTIPLE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!1 Thank you for writing this amazing story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ruchi-san On: February 02, 2010 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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