| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adon On: February 02, 2010 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot stop crying! This is so so sad! I cna't believe what is happening! How can it happen to them! I cannot stand the wait! Please tell me what happens!
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Reviewed By: Austenfan On: February 02, 2010 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE MOST EPIC THING EVER WRITTEN! PERIOD!
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Title: So worried
Reviewed By: BJAG On: February 02, 2010 14:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad! Poor InuYasha, he can't even help Kagome now because he is in so much pain! Maybe somehow this will help him tell where she is! And poor Kagome she can't even defend hereself! I hope you update soon! I cannot wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Assan On: February 02, 2010 14:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What an intense chapter! I love the way you put your characters! Instead of being preoccupied with all the drama at hand they have human feelings too! And human dillemas like your phone dying! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: vintageazalea On: February 02, 2010 05:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read up to this chapter so far, but oh my goodness, let me tell you, I'm SO glad you built up their characters, backgrounds, and attitudes to such a point that when they finally met, it was absolutely explosive. Talk about fireworks! And I'm all for anger and arguing, because that's how they really are, and I honestly do think they turn each other on by making the other livid. In other words, I ENJOYED READING THIS so very much. You write very, very well, and I can't wait to read the rest of this story. THANK YOU for building up the tension and (not-yet) romance and not bringing them together justlikethat, like too many fanfics do. All your readers will definitely appreciate the buildup and the love story. I can't wait to read! You're fantastic!! p.s. - I loved the chapter when Kagome and Sango were singing along to Alanis. Jagged Little Pill is the ultimate breakup album, you feel so invigorated afterwards.
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Reviewed By: Edwardsgirl On: February 02, 2010 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading this! OMG I did not expect this to happen. It is so sad that Kagome and InuYasha must suffer like that! I even felt sad for Yuka to die! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kori_chan On: February 02, 2010 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story made me cry and laugh, and sob again! This chapter just made me sob so hard, I can't believe what's happening! I hope they get better soon! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Dexter90 On: February 01, 2010 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful and delightful, and slightly twisted. I enjoyed reading this so much, I think I will go reread it again! I hope I will read something new soon!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Devilishdream On: February 01, 2010 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter.. it left me so thirsty for more!!!! crazy cliffhanger!! cant wait for another update!! your amazing!
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Reviewed By: LucyC On: January 31, 2010 22:59 PST
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Will InuYasha get better? I hope so! He can't die! Please update soon!
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Title: I LOVE THIS
Reviewed By: Animegirl90 On: January 31, 2010 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This cannot be happening! Another amazing amazing chapter! I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!
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Title: What a great story!
Reviewed By: Ari-chan On: January 31, 2010 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, she's not even concious! She can't even defend herself! And all those injuries, ugh how will they tell what happened to her! Since she won't know what happened! I hope Ayame and Hakkaku can get there in time!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: KoriL On: January 31, 2010 09:18 PST
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You can't just leave us hanging on the edge like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing, please tell us what happens next! PLEAAAAAAAAAASEW
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Reviewed By: Dreamer1234567 On: January 30, 2010 23:54 PST
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OH MY GOD NO!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!! please please please update soon!!!! this is such a great story!!!! ive spent the majority of three days reading this, the plot totally just sucked me in! i know its a great story when that happens, but PLEASE update soon, I REALLY hope there is a happy ending coming with this!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ninjamonkeyspy On: January 30, 2010 22:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! When I started it, I was not expecting this. Actually I thought pretty much it would be the same old story, but I am so freaking glad it wasn't! I love it, love it love it!
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