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Title: WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hotsttuff_90 On: January 30, 2010 22:22 PST
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THIS IS SO INTENTSE< I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOU!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Laila On: January 30, 2010 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing! I am so glad I stumbled upon it! I read through this thing in a day! It's purely addicting! I can't stop reading it! I can't stop thinking of how all of this will pan outs, and how everyone is going to react to this! It's kind of funny though that it's mostly InuYasha's fault that Kagome is hurt that much. If he would not have impulsively mated with her, Kagome would not have been in so much trouble! She probably would not even be hurt! Most likely Kouga would have just tried to get her back, and get in bed with her. And Kagome probably would have played smart and somehow gotten out of it. Or played along and somehow gotten out, or had a way to contact InuYasha. But instead she's know been over drugged, and then chemically poisoned, and then savagly beaten, and chocked to death. While she is not able to even defend herself! And once InuYasha sees her again, in her condition he's probably going to realize it was his fault! Poor thing! And also he could have stopped her from going! Or better yet just come along with her, there's nothing bad about it! Or at least find out where she was going! Well I can't wait for more, this was really amazing! I will keep coming back to read more! Who wouldn't? Lol!
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Title: Great stuff!
Reviewed By: Sarika On: January 28, 2010 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, I never even have heard of InuYasha or Kagome before. I never even read fan fiction before, lol. But this has to be one of the most amazing things i have ever read in my life! This should be a movie or a tv show! I can't believe what is happening! This can't happen! I think she will get rescued by the name of your next chapter! But still how will Inuyasha respond to Kagome looking like that! She must look like a plum! Poor thing! She did not deserve it! But you know who the hell leaves their drink at the bar, with a crazy ex boyfriend! And then drinks from it again! Really??????? First rule of drinking: never drink what you didn't see poured. Rule two: never leave your drink alone! Please update soon! I cannot wait for more~
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 17:21 PST
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Oh HELL no!
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Title: No
Reviewed By: JulianeZ On: January 28, 2010 12:52 PST
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You can't leave us hanging like this! You must tell us what happens next! Soon! THis is such great stuffe!
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Title: WHYYY
Reviewed By: Chocolate Cake On: January 27, 2010 13:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo. If one of them (Kagome or Inuyasha) dies.... I'll die. Well.. not really, but I'll cry for a whole week! PLEASE NOOOO! D: I hope you can update sooon! ;_;
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 22:57 PST
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Whoa!!!! This was a doozy, I can't wait until the next chapter, geez so much to take in. You got the "SHINE" girl..lol Till next time, read ya later.
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Title: Little_Anna
Reviewed By: Zvaigzdute [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read! It was so heartbreaking! I hope Kagome and Inuyasha survive, they jsut can't die! It's not their fault! Please update soon,the suspense is killing me
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Roniwasa On: January 26, 2010 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really when I started reading this story, I had nothing better to do, and read it just because! But after I finished the first chapter I could not stop reading this is getting so crazy! I was not expecting anything like this to happen! And you know there's going to be all the Kikyo stuff too! I cannot wait to know what happens next! Please please tell us soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 01:23 PST
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Another amazing chapter! Thanks. =] Have you considered updating the summary of your story? It doesn't do justice to this epic.
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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 19:37 PST
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please update soon i need more info im gonna jukp outta my socks if i dont get more info!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gods... *whistles*... that was way more intense than I was expecting. Her being mated was both a good thing and a bad thing, because it bought her some time before being raped while he was busy freaking out over her scent, but what ended up happening as a result was also a fear of mine, that he would ultimately end up just deciding to kill her. Man, a youkai pounding on a human like that? I doubt you honestly intend to kill Kagome off after everything she and Inuyasha (and we as readers) have been through, but how could she honestly survive such a thing? Maybe...because they are clearly linked as Inuyasha can feel what is happening to her...maybe she will be able to gain his strength somehow in order to heal faster? Either that, or like somebody already said, if Sesshoumaru happens to have Tenseiga...which I don't think I recall any mention of off the top of my head. Oh man oh man. And you definitely built up to the prospect of her getting rescued at the last moment with Ayame and Hakkaku rushing to the cabin, but now the chapter title for the next upcoming chapter has me worried that something will end up happening to one of them after they save Kagome and nobody will end up knowing how or who saved her. I hope that's not the case and that Ayame and Hakkaku can try and repair what's left of their own lives after everything is said and done. Man…this is totally not how I had envisioned this chapter playing out. I was picturing her coming to, and Kouga confronting her about being mated…letting that cat out of the bag…and then I was picturing more of a violent beating/rape when she got rescued. I am seriously on pins and needles awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... I just caught up on the story and... Holy crap. For one I didn't know you can have such a twisted plot, I mean I know you're good but damn you just prooved me wrong, you're GREAT. And as for the characters, Koga my god man didn't know he was just a body of sick. Just a walking, talking sickness of rage, evil and above all monster. For Kagome PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE don't let it be what I just predicted that might or will happen. Same for Inuyasha too. Dear lord this just gotten sick yet in a good way. I hope you keep it up and update soon. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAARRRRrrrrrrrggggg.....I hate cliffhangers!!!! Please, please update as soon as possible!!! This chapter was so intense! Please don't let her die...I'll cry...I really will...T_T
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:12 PST
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Oh NOOOOOOOO!!! That is just a horrible way to end it ... argh!!!! You making me cry like a baby here. It seems that Kagome is not going to be able to recover from the things that are being done to her and maybe not Inu either. I will be waiting for the next chapter ... hopefully for some relief from this lack of knowing what is going to happen.
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