| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... I just caught up on the story and... Holy crap. For one I didn't know you can have such a twisted plot, I mean I know you're good but damn you just prooved me wrong, you're GREAT. And as for the characters, Koga my god man didn't know he was just a body of sick. Just a walking, talking sickness of rage, evil and above all monster. For Kagome PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE don't let it be what I just predicted that might or will happen. Same for Inuyasha too. Dear lord this just gotten sick yet in a good way. I hope you keep it up and update soon. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAARRRRrrrrrrrggggg.....I hate cliffhangers!!!! Please, please update as soon as possible!!! This chapter was so intense! Please don't let her die...I'll cry...I really will...T_T
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 23:12 PST
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Oh NOOOOOOOO!!! That is just a horrible way to end it ... argh!!!! You making me cry like a baby here. It seems that Kagome is not going to be able to recover from the things that are being done to her and maybe not Inu either. I will be waiting for the next chapter ... hopefully for some relief from this lack of knowing what is going to happen.
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Reviewed By: Ravens_Ashs On: January 24, 2010 19:48 PST
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OMG...This chapter was soooooooooo intense!!! I have to believe that you are so heartless as to leave us with this cliffhanger for another month. We, your fans, IMPLORE YOU to update your story as soon as you possibly can. We all know that Kagome and Inuyasha can't die, but this is killing US!!! Please, please, please update soon. I love this story and cry a little bit everyday that I don't see an update. Keep up the great work. Many hugs.
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is devastating!!! Damn you Kouga!!! This is such an intense fic.... You're awesome! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 16:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Plz he has to save her! Omg I'm starting to cry lol. Its good but plz update!!!!!!!!
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Title: Darn it!!
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 15:54 PST
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Please hurray and save Kagome!!!
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Title: How could you!!
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 24, 2010 15:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you!!! Now, why would you leave us with this ending?!! You are killing us with the suspence here!! You must do a very quick update; now that you had done this to us. Preferably tomorrow. ^_^ Great chapter, and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! why do u do this to me? I was sooo excited for something good to happen... but nothing good happend!!!!! things got worse! gawwwwww! im depressed! :*( im crying a little inside.
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Title: Cold ending
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 24, 2010 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOW!!!!!!! I thought this chapter involving Kagome's "friend" was so cold and so well written I actually felt sorry for her. I do not know if Sess has his legendary sword on him in this story, but I think that's the only way they will get answers. I going to read your latest chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 24, 2010 13:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is going to kill me!!! i hooope you update very soon, keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 13:32 PST
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Holy crap! That was so violent! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha. *sobs* I want Kouga dead. D-E-A-D, dead! *sobs again*
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Werewolf-lover On: January 24, 2010 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am crying my eyes out! This cannot be happening! They cannot die! But even if Kagome doesn't die, she's going to be in the hospital forever! She ingested so many drugs, the she probably got really bad chemical poisoning from all the bleach and cleaning products. Her skin is probably gone and there are so many infections! And the way she is beaten! If her blood splatters on the walls, that must mean she might have had some of her organs ruptured, maybe some head trauma. And now he's chocknig her? What if Kagome becomes a vegtable? I can't wait to know what happens. I love this story sooo sooo much, it's becoming my life. Please update soon!
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Title: Gaah!
Reviewed By: Zvaigzduuute On: January 24, 2010 12:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually check your story every day, if not a few times per day! Even tomorrow I will check, probably even later today! But I get so happy when you update! I love love love your story. I know Kagome probably won't die because you still have that Kikyo stuff to sort out! But still what will happen to her afterwards? Your story is amazing! I love it, love it, love it! Poor InuYasha =(. I love the whole thing with the mate thing how they can feel each other, and one dies for another. I usually hate the whole mate thing because it sounds so primitive and animalistic, but this is incorporated so well into the whole story! I cannot wait for you to update, please please please do it as soon as you can! I just can't wait for more, even if it's a little bit! Please please tell us what happens!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 11:28 PST
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=O!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!! I "accidentally" read some of the ending and wthhh!! SHE CAN'T JUST DIE!! ARNT U A BELIEVER IN HEA?? PLEASEE TELL ME U R! SMHH HOPEFULLY THERE IS SOMETHIN IN THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER THAT WILL REVEAL THAT HER DEATH IS SOMEHOW IMPOSSIBLE OR SOMETHING OF THE SORT, BECAUSE SHE CANNOT JUST DIE! SHE CANT I TELL U, CANT!! *breathe breathe pant pant*... ok I'll be back in a little while..
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