| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Title: I was behind but now I'm caught up, so please may I have some more *big sparkle urchin eyes*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 04:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the drama and the chair throwing and the room recking tantrums. I was happy with who came to the rescue, it was nice to see someone else kicking ass for a change. I'm hoping things will work out for everyone and that you know who gets his can o' beating until he dies soon. Not to mention the others waiting patiently for this thing with the dirty wolf to be over so THEY can reek they're own havoc. Dang this story is just so freaking addicting.
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking Koga! ~_~ Kagome.....
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Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: June 07, 2010 23:03 PDT
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You made me cry AGAIN! Agh. The scene with Inuyasha at her bedside...you deserve an award for all the crying and eyerubbing you're wringing out of me. :p
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Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: June 07, 2010 23:03 PDT
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You made me cry AGAIN! Agh. The scene with Inuyasha at her bedside...you deserve an award for all the crying and eyerubbing you're wringing out of me. :p
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Reviewed By: Sternenstaub [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 04:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok - you've got me hooked. Normally I don't review, because as a non-native speaker with limited practice I find it hard to describe what I feel about a story and put it into English. But this will be one of a very few exceptions. I like the whole story. - the story line is unique. Your timing regarding the events and building up of tension and relaxation is subtle. The creativity for new ideas is awesome. As an Inuyasha fan for about 5 years I've read a lot of them (even I'm a huge Sess/Kag fan). Every time I think I've got the hints to imagine a possible twist of fate, you turn the other side. So every time you update is like getting a lucky or surprise bag for me and I like to confess: I'm addicted to your fabulous story! So keep on writing - don't you think you should alter your profession into author - and I can start waiting for my next lucky day with a lucky bag. P.S. sorry for all errors in spelling and grammar!
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Reviewed By: AnotherSongstress On: May 25, 2010 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is an absolutely amazing story, even at the worst parts I want to keep reading. You are without a doubt one of the best writers on this site. I can't wait for your next chapter, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 23:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a wicked chapter...... I caint wait to see wat u come up with in ur next chapter.so Kouga next mated Ayame that's a twist in the story, bt nw I want to see Kagome regain conciensness and remember wat yash told like it was a dream bt she knows its true.... and oh man when yash gets his hands on Kouga I hope he kills him with a maticulous slowness and calmness that it puts a chill down the readers and yash's back
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 20:52 PDT
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE! this is such an amazing story. i cant wait to fins out about kagome! i hope shes ok keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I've been lax in reviewing lately, and I'm trying to make up for it. I am still with you, though. Second of all, please accept my heartfelt condolences for the loss of your wonderful Neko. My thoughts and prayers go out to all of her family and friends. Now, on to the review. What a heartbreaking chapter. InuYasha's pleas broke my heart. I know that Kagome will survive this. I only hope that their relationship will, as well. They're both going to have a long, hard road to recovery. I can't begin to fathom that journey, at all. I'm also wondering what will happen to Hakkaku and Ayame. Will they come out of this unscathed? It seems that Hakkaku may have some feelings for the she wolf. I wonder if she will eventually develop some for him in return. I think I'd like to see that. I'm sure there's also gonna be one hell of a battle when dog meets wolf. I shudder to think that it. I know you can't divulge, but I still like to "think out loud." LOL Bottom line, it was an excellent update. I'm anxiously awaiting the next!
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Reviewed By: nikki_nightmare On: May 23, 2010 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh... emmm... geee... i love the update sooo much. i checked mediaminer everyday since the last update waiting for this chapter :) i hope a new beta comes thats just as good as the old one *may she rest in peace* i cant wait for the fight between Inu and Koga. and i hope Kagome gets better :) best wishes
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 22, 2010 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ayame. Is she and Kogua really mates??!! Poor Inuyasha. Its so sad to see him so torned. Will Kagome survive the surgery. Will the Inu brother get to Hakkaku and Ayamae before Kogua? Will Sango and Miroku be written in future chapters? If Kagome survive, will she remember Inuyasha? Update this awesome story soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 21:40 PDT
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Even though, I hate what was done with Kagome, I think I know where this is going and I love it! Can't wait to see the next couple of chapters. Loved the whole cat/dog thing with Nola and the Takashi brothers as well as the part where Sesshoumaru asks Inuyasha if Inu is trying to commit suicide. That whole part was great. Lots of angst and suspense. Great story. I just wish that Kagome hadn't had to suffer through all of that. :-( 'Til the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 21:39 PDT
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Even though, I hate what was done with Kagome, I think I know where this is going and I love it! Can't wait to see the next couple of chapters. Loved the whole cat/dog thing with Nola and the Takashi brothers as well as the part where Sesshoumaru asks Inuyasha if Inu is trying to commit suicide. That whole part was great. Lots of angst and suspense. Great story. I just wish that Kagome hadn't had to suffer through all of that. :-( 'Til the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very powerful chapter. At times very difficult and emotional, but breath-taking none the less. The emotions on Inuyasha were so strong that I had to fight to not let it affect me the way it did. To think that you can see your loved one at the threshold between life and death and in the condition in which Kagome is at,is something I don't think I could ever handle. It was really painful to see that Inuyasha blames himself for this atrocity, and at the same time is heart breaking. Physically this has been devastating for Kagome and everyone else, but I wonder what the psychological toll will be on all... *** Once again, a wonderful chapter! I look forward with anticipation to you next update. Hugs: MidCat
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: May 21, 2010 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely Awesome!! Can't wait for the nexted chapter....Thank you!!! An absolute joy to read.
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