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Title: Ravens_Ashs
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 22:49 PDT
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OMG...I was crying and sniveling over what InuYasha was feeling on the way to the hospital and elating when he jumped on all the nurses. I'm happy that Miroku was back and helped them by giving them information. I agree with LouLou, it was great stuff about buying the hospital and firing the nurse. I've felt like that a few times myself...hehehe. I know Kagome makes a full recovery and InuYashs is going to take down Kouga, maybe with a little help from Sesshy;)... hehehe. Keep up the great work and I hope you are able to give us an update here soon.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 21:51 PDT
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Wow! Lots of emotion that nearly has your gut wrenching in sadness. I can only hope that things will be improving for your cast of characters in your next installment (with the exception of Kouga of course). I think we all want to see Inuyasha take down Kouga now. I do want to mention that in Japan health care is socialized. So there would have been no one asking for health insurance or if someone could pay for the surgeries. Remember that the US is one of the only industrialized nations in the world that does not offer health coverage to all of its citizens. My brother lives in Japan and sings praises of their nationalized medicine.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update. Powerful update. I'm sure Kagome will survive the surgeries, 'cause otherwise that would be a gods awful way to end the story, since if she dies, Inuyasha dies too. Of course, not sure if this version of Sesshoumaru has a nifty little sword back at home somewhere or not. But however you have Kagome survive all this, just so long as she survives, I'll be happy. I wonder if she heard Inuyasha while he was at her bed side. I wonder if Kouga was also watching the news! Oh man...you've got me on pins and needles here!
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!! Great Update!!!!!! I enjoyed it. Cant wait till the next one :)
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 16:28 PDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 15:41 PDT
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GREAT chapter. I haven't reviewed ANYTHING in a while, but this chapter was terrific. Inuyasha's hurt was almost painful to read. I just hope that Kagome can fight her wasy back to him. That's a TALL order, though. And as for Kouga, I sincerely hope that Inuyasha will be the one to dispatch him, if not Kagome herself. This joker has got to die. What a waste of oxygen.....
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 15:13 PDT
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I liked it. Flowed well. Left me hanging for more--what happens with Kouga? Will there be a big confrontation? Will Ayame find her true mate? I'm guessing Kagome's eventual recovery is a given, but how will Inuyasha figure in helping her recover? Is there something about their being mates that will help? Can't wait till he discovers it. I'm rambling. Sorry. Really enjoyed it. Eve
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Reviewed By: CCKXS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good thing comes to those who wait, and you have definitely given me this amazing chapter! I love this story, so kudos to you !!!!! XD
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 13:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how happy I am to see a new chapter from you. It has been soooooo dead around here lately with nothing good to read. I just knew Inu was going to really flip out at one point, and the bit with buying the hospital was hilarious. I can't wait to see what's next. Fantastic job.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn. That brought me to tears.
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Title: heart felt
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story i shed tears! i dnt normally do that for a story ...... thank you for creating this story
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story i shed tears! i dnt normally do that for a story ...... thank you for creating this story
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 07:18 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: Ht tp:// groups. yahoo. com/group/ FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/winners. php?a= show&type= Fanfiction&year= March%202010 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: Ht tp:// feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/pickup_ site. php First place awards will be on permanent display here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/gallery. php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Flowergirl! On: April 18, 2010 20:50 PDT
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Yet another breathtaking chapter!
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Reviewed By: anana945945 On: April 02, 2010 21:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read a lot, and i have to say that although this story isnt finished yet, its one of the best ive ever read. Personally i think you should be published. Your cliff hangers are in the perfect spot. the story itself isnt predictable. Youve got the right amount of everything in there. your portrayal of each of the characters is as if they are real people. i absolutely adore this story. when i realized it wasnt finished, i went berzerk! haha. but no joke, i adore this story. oh and omg not that im a lemon freak, but they amuse me. haha, just bc your like this is a mild lemon and when i read it i was like ...this is mild? haha. just saying. so yeah. your an amazing writer/author.
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