| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it, Sakura's fall from grace was wonderful, i really love who you made Naruto's family be. he's realted to almost all of the Hokage's. keep up the great work.
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Title: Great work
Reviewed By: werewolf1586 On: May 05, 2007 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job with this story overall. The only real complaints I have are that Niji and Shikamaru seem to be a bit more emotninal then normal other then that exilent work I can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed Kakashie conversation with the Kyubi, and the way that Sakura didn't just fall from grace she crashed like a poorly piloted hang-glider.
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Title: Intense
Reviewed By: Tsunade Rocks On: May 03, 2007 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really an intense story you have going on. It's packed with quite a bit of emotions, and I really like that your not rushing the romantic pairings but actually building a story that will lead into them among the other stuff. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what you've got in store next?
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Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 00:19 EDT
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Finally, someone wrote something about someone chewing Kakashi out because of his unfairness to Naruto! Yes!!! It was a bit harsh but I think it was very well written and I think you did the most important thing ever: you DIDN'T give any character more knowledge than they should have known at the time. That's a pet peeve of mine and I thank you that you didn't make one character have way too much knowledge of future or past events. Thank you for a well written story so far and I hope you update soon.
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Title: Definately Worth Reading!
Reviewed By: Hokage Naruto#1 On: April 30, 2007 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really interesting story. I loved the back and forth commentary between the 9-tailed fox and Kakashi. You don't see much introspection or psychology written in these stories, but you did a great job with it. I look forward to the upcoming chapters. I'm sure your romance pairings in your lemons should be interesting as well. Keep up the good work!
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