| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: January 25, 2009 19:48 EST
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Guess the entire universe is conspiring to destroy the Leaf Village and everyone in it. Now I'm really starting to feel sorry for Sakura, and I hope her fate doesn't befall Kurenai. You might want to put Ishi Haruno on that mile-long list of people to kill off. Taro, however...don't know about him. Spare him, perhaps? Make him realize how corrupt the Haruno clan is and do something about it. In short, Keep up the good work. I hope it doesn't take a long time for you to update.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: January 25, 2009 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. I hope that everyhings co,e out ok. I tis great that naruto and the other lady are friends. I hope that if hainta gets in to trouble that she gets help if she needs it. I hope as will they get the seals off of the teo people that want them off.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic you've taken Naruto charachters and given them the personality's and status they deserve. I have one request though PLEASE DON'T LET SASUKE HAVE HIS WAY WITH HINATA!!!!! And one more thing I hope this deosn't sound to perverted but is there gonna be a chap where Naruto and Hinata you know do it coming up soon? And if there is could you let me know. Thank you. I'm greately anticipateing the update of this fic. And good luck with getting a job, especially if your in America, what with the econemy and all.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: September 26, 2008 09:12 EDT
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Heh, no wonder Anko doesn't have any friends. Good work, and kudos on the conclusion to the dreamscape fight.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: August 31, 2008 22:15 EDT
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Inochi's theory with Inner Sakura sounds very logical and valid. The character development, especially the NaruHina, were great, and kudos on that fleeting, emotional moment between Tsunade and Jiraiya. The Sannin really do need to sort their lives out. This chapter gives out a sense of foreboding towards later chapters. If you don't mind me saying it would be best if Sakura told Tsunade and Naruto of Sasuke's plans the second she recovers, and don't let that tainted little Uchiha have his way. I can easily imagine what will happen to Sakura once she recovers. We can expect that the village will be calling her traitor and her going through what Naruto went through, and feeling terrible because of it. And I can imagine her trying to win his love, going as far as becoming fanatical as she did with Sasuke. This has been a really interesting chapter with, like I stated already, a sense of foreboding. I hope it doesn't take you a long time to update because the anticipation is too much to bear. GamerJay out...!
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Title: No
Reviewed By: Nannashi On: August 31, 2008 02:37 EDT
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dude no on previous review I think its Asuma but no way Kurenai would be mad at Anko for being with him, but i do think that Kaka-sensei needs to just talk with Kurenai instead of assuming. Otherwise awesome fanfic O_O darkness isn't usually my thing but I'll deal for the sake of awesome plot line
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Title: Yeah, I still work fast.
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 02:26 EDT
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Dude where have you been? I've been waiting forever for this to come out. I'll have to take your advice too, I was planning a party scene later in the story, but it does sound kind of hard to do. I really love the opening of the chapter, Kiba just doesn't get it. Also, please save Sakura soon, I'll admit that I don't like her and you actually pulled up the exact reason why as Inoichi explained to Tsunade, but I actually feel like saving her myself. It would be cool though if that rage somehow made her extremely strong. P.S. is the person Anko is with Asuma? It would explain why Kurenai was made at her. Just guessing though. Anyway be faster next time King K, I was beginning to worry about you man. Til next we meet Shine eternal.
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i just finished your story and i have to say that that was one of the most injoyable things i have ever read and i can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work. Oh, and i realy hope you don't kill Kakashi or Naruto for that matter.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: ninjaintheshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far just finished ch 21 i like that the chapters are long cant wait for ch 22
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:47 EDT
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One of the better chapters so far. You seem really good at writing comedies please update soon. And thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: June 26, 2008 13:43 EDT
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I can not read the the update you have for yesterday. Please fix it soom. I like this story a lot. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 12:00 EDT
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Heh, awesome latest chapter. Now, if only the next update came a little faster, neh? Alright, please update soon, this story rocks hard, and is worth the wait, but much longer and this one just becomes a pain to wait for. Heh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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