| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark lance [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 08:50 EDT
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so nice i had to review it twice only as dark lance this time instead of downward spiral still hate Sakura ;) loved the drunken chapter with her dad he's alright (better than Sakura!!!!)
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Reviewed By: downward spiral [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 08:20 EDT
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love the fic and hope it continues as one writer to another i love what you did to Sakura i hate her even before i read the fic GJ pal GJ
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Reviewed By: rhonda On: August 08, 2007 07:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Its very creative and original. The plot is very intense and eotional, it even made me cry at a few parts! XD And the way you've been portraying Sakura suites her. You've practically ripped of her angel wings and given her the most painful drop into hell I've ever read. kudos. The only issue I have with your story is all the grammar errors. But with an amazing story like this its easy to ignore them. Once again amazing story! Please continue writing till the end! I'll definitely keep reading!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update, this is a awesome story! Sakura is a bitch and deserves everything she got.
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Reviewed By: Michi_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting even better than before.. i didnt think it was possible though but i guess it is ^_^
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Naruto Rulz!!! On: July 23, 2007 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome! I love all the storylines you've got going for so many characters. The Naruto/Hinata possible pairing is great. Sakura's taken a beating but you've done a good job with it. How you've written it, she deserves all of it. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
go Hinata. she kissed him yeah. can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: Regain the grip
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naruto is completely OC, there is no way he would address anyone like that no matter what,he doesn't have in him to be bitter unless he is brainwashed or the kyuubi has taken over. Ok Sakura does deserve the bashing but I belive enough is enough. The rest of the chapters are great but this last chapter does seems a bit off. The rating ifs for the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Gobi no Houkou On: July 20, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice I've seen catfights but the way you wrote it takes the cake from all of them. The way you made Jiraiya and Naruto have the same falt as in losing the faith off being with their " true love". It was a genius to have the story writein out that way;to have Naruto act crazy to the climaxic cat fight at the end, but I have to say that Sakura lovers diffinity hate your story and if you are a SasuSaku Sasuke is gay.
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Title: I highly recommend reading
Reviewed By: resenting eyes On: July 15, 2007 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories i have ever read!this story has everything that makes up a good fanfic and more. You must have a natural sense in writing like this. I can't wait for the rest.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it, Sakura's fall from grace was wonderful, i really love who you made Naruto's family be. he's realted to almost all of the Hokage's. keep up the great work.
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Title: Great work
Reviewed By: werewolf1586 On: May 05, 2007 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job with this story overall. The only real complaints I have are that Niji and Shikamaru seem to be a bit more emotninal then normal other then that exilent work I can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed Kakashie conversation with the Kyubi, and the way that Sakura didn't just fall from grace she crashed like a poorly piloted hang-glider.
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Title: Intense
Reviewed By: Tsunade Rocks On: May 03, 2007 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really an intense story you have going on. It's packed with quite a bit of emotions, and I really like that your not rushing the romantic pairings but actually building a story that will lead into them among the other stuff. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what you've got in store next?
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Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 00:19 EDT
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Finally, someone wrote something about someone chewing Kakashi out because of his unfairness to Naruto! Yes!!! It was a bit harsh but I think it was very well written and I think you did the most important thing ever: you DIDN'T give any character more knowledge than they should have known at the time. That's a pet peeve of mine and I thank you that you didn't make one character have way too much knowledge of future or past events. Thank you for a well written story so far and I hope you update soon.
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Title: Definately Worth Reading!
Reviewed By: Hokage Naruto#1 On: April 30, 2007 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really interesting story. I loved the back and forth commentary between the 9-tailed fox and Kakashi. You don't see much introspection or psychology written in these stories, but you did a great job with it. I look forward to the upcoming chapters. I'm sure your romance pairings in your lemons should be interesting as well. Keep up the good work!
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