| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: June 17, 2008 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to review this and give my opinion on this work of literal art. This is one of the best Naru/Hina fics I've read in a long time. The only thing that disturbed me was the entirety of Chapter 13 (which I now avoid when reading this story from now on), even if Sakura realizes and admits she's a bitch. Speaking of Sakura, maybe you should continue the storyline now. It'd be great if it took Naruto to wake her up, and that afterwards she would start obsessing over him and trying to win his love, much to Hinata's anger and Naruto's disgust. As for Hiashi...kill the bastard as soon as possible. Naruto's already got Akatsuki, Sound, Orochimaru, Sasuke and other corrupt Konoha officials/shinobi to deal with, the last thing he needs is someone close by threatening his beloved Hinata. With Tsunade...she should hurry up and sort her life out, especially when it comes to Jiraiya. Kakashi...I'm glad he admitted he was such a damn hypocrite, and was unfair to Naruto. And finally when it comes to Sasuke...for all our sakes don't let him touch another woman, ESPECIALLY Hinata. That would be a real tragedy. That's all I have to write. Great job so far and I hope you update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 14:49 EDT
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^_^ yays you updated! as usual, you delivered an amazing portrayal of the characters and i am loving the scene with Hinata and Naruto at the end :P
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 01:18 EDT
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SO you finally updated again King K. How have you been, hope things got better. Anyway, I like the Tsunade/Jiraiya altercation. Also, drunk Naruto was hilarious. I think that you are one of the best at capturing the character's true eccense. But, hey I've told you that before. Oh, one favor can you check my story "Eyes piercing the darkness" I've got good reveiws, but I want to see what you think. See you next time King K and Shine eternal.
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 07:31 EDT
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WOW. YOU'VE GOT ME ADDICTED it's utterly amazing, and i wish i could write like you do.. Pleeeeease hurry up and update! it's driving me crazy
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Title: FUNNY
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: May 19, 2008 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. I am glade that I forgot how to spell Naruto's Teacher's Name (feels stupid) is out of the hospltaland what happend to Lee. I am glade that Naruto got Lee to smeil and Lagh. keep up the good work and update soon. Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you. please update soon Thank you.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT. MORE
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Title: Yeah I work fast now.
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 04:50 EDT
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Thanks for replying and thanks for this great chapter. I can relate because I'm kind of in a moment of shitastic days myself. Man, I wish that I had a friend like Naruto. It seems that I'm the Naruto to most of my friends though, I always have to cheer them up even though I have problems of my own. I digress, in the future of this story I hope to see more of Lee, and I hope things get better for him. [Rock Lee fan] Also I hope things get better for you too King K. No matter how dark things may seem there is always a light at the end of the tunnel. Part of that light is you, just remember what I always say and shine eternal. See you later.
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Title: Best one on here
Reviewed By: AKACHAN CHUX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Literally the best one I have found one here, and I been looking for a while now. Keep up the great work. P.S. Wish i could write like you^_^
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Reviewed By: abbie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:55 EDT
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OMG! THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT! FUNNY, SAD, THRILLING! IT HAS IT ALL!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:14 EDT
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nice chap! keep up the AWESOME work!!
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Title: scene breaks
Reviewed By: Naruto'sBrat On: May 16, 2008 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only beef I have with your story, is scene changes. It's kind of hard to determine scene changes. Like when you were doing the Naruto/Neji and Tsunade/Chouza/Shizune back and forth thing, I got mixed up a bit. You should put something in to show where the scenes switch. Other than that, much props. I don't usually read stories on Mediaminer, but I've got the site on my favorites list just for this story. By the by, the only reason you don't have all tens, is because I've read some fanfics that are actually better than the actual series they're based off of. I'm on fanfiction.net if you want to read something of mine. I know some authors get pissed when people who haven't even written anything try to tell them how to write.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 14:34 EDT
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Man, Gai's grilling of Kakashi was epic. Up date soon, I really want to know what happened to Lee. Please tell me he's okay.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read here. When I log on to MediaMiner, I always go see if you updated your story, because I like it pretty much. I love your style of writing, the story is EXTREMELY good and I love Naru/Hina(although my fav is Naru/Saku). The only part I think was weird, was the part when Sakura got raped, by Sasuke. I mean, the lemon part was good, but Sasuke is very sadistic, like you say in your preview. Overall : 9.5/10
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Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: innocence_lost14 On: April 05, 2008 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR THIS CHAPTER!! U LUV IT!! TO BAD KIBA AND SHINO DONT:) I THOUGHT IT WAS WELL PUT ON HOW EVERYTHING CHANGED FROM GOOD TO BAD TO SCARED TO GOOD AGAIN BETWEEN THE RELATIONSHIP OF NARUTO AND HINATA. IF YOU HAVE MYSPACE PLZ ADD ME WWW.MYSPACE.COM/INNOCENCE_LOST14
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 18:46 EDT
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I've been waiting forever for this. That chapter was so sweet I almost started crying, and I'm in the library, people were looking at me and stuff. Anyway. Great chapter King K and I'll be waiting patiently for the next. P.S. I'll always review this story, because you write back. It actually makes you feel like reviewing was worth it. Shine enternal King K from your friend JJ.
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