"Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 00:42 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i still like ur fic(even though i really didn't like the whole evil Sasuke thing. And the Sakura thing.) I give you props because it is very well written and overall AWESOME!!! so continue with the great story you are writing!!!
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Title: evilness Reviewed By: Nannashi On: March 13, 2008 02:03 EDT Comment/Review: pretty good so far -.- as long as naru stays with hinata i have no problems =D hopefully(both idea and warning) that thing with Sai drawing naruto shouldn't happen -.- one rape scene was more then enough
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Reviewed By: Trife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 23:35 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ichigo is from the anime Bleach if I am not mistaken. Also I would like to say very very good job on the story so far and update soon please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 01:07 EST Comment/Review: What a good chapter! I wonder what Tsunade wants with Kakashi? Things are heating up between Kakashi and Kurenai. Being in that position with Kakashi I'd climb in bed not go to the sofa lol.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:36 EST Comment/Review: Even drunk Kakashi can still kick butt. What's with Sakura's mom spying? No way to tell except reading on!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:25 EST Comment/Review: Wow what a reaction from Kakashi! Although I would of done the same. At last everyone understands what Naru-chan went through growing up. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:09 EST Comment/Review: What a way to reveal the truth. I just wanna hit Sakura upside the head right now though. Hopefully she'll realize the error of her ways and change. Must read on!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 23:53 EST Comment/Review: Good first chapter! It's about time Kakashi faced all his doubt towards Naru-chan! Although Kakashi with whiskers and ears would definetely be cute. Must read on!
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 16:17 EST Comment/Review: OMG!!!i love it
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Reviewed By: LordFaroar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 18:16 EST Comment/Review: Sir, while you are an excelent writer, I warn you that if you take Naruto from Hinata, many people will be upset. Including me. Other than that,keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Graypheonix85 On: February 13, 2008 00:17 EST Comment/Review: Take it easy as well, my friend, this is a good story, and it's just getting better. Still, how is Naruto gonna react? And how is he gonna feel about Kakashi putting his life on the line to save the little bitch? Neh. Anyway, far as I see it, Naruto, as the son of the 4th, does have a right to a council seat (would get him into politics if he took the Uchiha seat from Danzo, or left it in Danzo's hands to vote in his stead) with Sakura being either charged with death for her traitorous actions, or given a second chance, with the lesson, and warning that many people nearly died to save her, that the weight of that sacrifice remains on her shoulders. As such, she will have to train hard, and become an entirely new person, one that will have a very hard time at first. Plus, she is gonna have to get over her own experiences, and that won't be easy, far from it. *Sigh* Mendukusu. Well, update soon and all that, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 13:18 EST Comment/Review: Once again another great chapter. I'm glad that it came to you. But, I was kind of wondering, what happened to Lee? He would have to be pissed off too. Well, as long as you keep writing I'll keep reading, I doubt whatever you do, this story will always be great in my eyes. P.S. Kiba's an asshole. Shine eternal King K.
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Reviewed By: innocence_lost14 On: February 11, 2008 22:30 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG I THOUGHT U FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY!IM SOO HAPPY U UPDATED. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. KEEP IT UP!CANT WAIT TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:46 EST Comment/Review: I don't think I need the numbers anymore. I love this story so much. I have to admit that I've been having writer's block too for some strange reason. It doesn't happen to me often. Sorry I'm late again but, serac updated "fetish? what's a fetish" and I just had to read it. It's hilarious, if you hadn't read it you should. While you're at it why don't you check out my story Resident Naruto 4. Product placement, product, placement, product placement. Just joking but, really I am kind of wondering how the Konoha 12 are going to react to this but, no pressure. Remember, when you think about it too much is when it never comes to you, relax a little. Well til next I sign on, Shine eternal King K.
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Reviewed By: LoopyKid On: January 21, 2008 11:30 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is hella awesome. p.s Hell yeah I'm pissed, he (won't say name either so as not to spoil it) was one of the best characters in there.
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