| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 01:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the chap and the e-mail. I really like the Tsunade/Jiraiya backstory. It made me wonder if they really really were his grandparents and it makes a lot of sense. P.S. Who died? I stopped reading the manga after I got high speed internet
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Title: Dear God!!!
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 21:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that I don't like Sakura but, damn that was ruthless. I think that I hate Sasuke a little bit more now. I think I love this story, it's good. Twisted but, good.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: November 02, 2007 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*muses* Do you hate Sasuke this much? Because it seems like he's more evil in this than he is in canon. That is, since I haven't read the latest chapters of the manga. I cannot read Japanese, so I have to look for a site with manga scans that are translated in English...Kakashi and Co better hope they go back, cuz if something happens to Hinata, Naruto will LOSE it for sure! And while I don't like Sakura much, I wouldn't wish for my worst enemy to be raped. No one deserves that. If the Leaf villagers want hte Sharingan that badly, they should ask Itachi WHY he wiped out the Uchiha clan. I don't buy that he did it to test his power! If he had done it, he wouldn't have spared Sasuke!
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: October 06, 2007 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OmG This is the awesomest fan fic ,well besides OUR LIVES IN THE HURRICANE CHRIOCLES, and the other stories by Hello lover. No offese but her stories are number one on my list. Yours is second though! I love it! Anyway plz review! Or else I'll get to bored waiting. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story but why do you hate Sakura she's a cool character.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 17:59 EDT
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oh my god!!! how oculd oyu end it there?!!! plz update soon, or i;ll blow a frickin' gasket!
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Title: a wait that is worth it
Reviewed By: Reogen On: September 20, 2007 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if sasukes gonna get the worst kind of character then, by my standards, it will be a wait that is well worth it. but i must ask will sakura still be bashed thru the entire fic, or just the beginning? either i shall continue to read this! P.S:If you could make your portrayl of sasuke even more dark and so on
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i really liked reading that chap. it was AWESOME!!! and as for the Sauske thing i my self am a Sauske fan, so yeah. i really am interested in reading what will happen next! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVED IT! U ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: w4sp On: September 10, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good concept, good story, I like the direction this is going, I like the way everything falls on Kakashi's face. You could work on your usage of coma's though, they make sentences so much easier to read. Decent grammar, a few mistakes here and there, but the quality of the plotline (for a first chapter) makes up for it. I'm now going to eagerly dig back into your fic. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 16:11 EDT
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Neh, it's cool to see an update though in all of this time. Anyway, keep up the good work, this story is rocking. Alright, it's given me some fuel for thought for my own stories, and how things wouldn't go. So, whatever. GOod story, so I look forward to the the next update. Later.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chap! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! YOU ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: chezaswolf666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love reading your story!! Cant wait for the ~ominous 13~ wwwwooooo~ lol wow keep it up!!! bonus points for the best couples !!! ya 4 u! I'd give u a cookie, but I'd probably eat it! lol jk . I hope u find some way to save(partial at least) Sakura's dignity b4 its all over!!! I like her. wow ok longest review I've written so far. kk , good luck!
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Reviewed By: snowecat(not signed in) On: August 28, 2007 17:42 EDT
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Sakura is a bit of an idiot, but did she have to throw her ninja career away? Maybe Naruto will have to retrieve her? Will there be any redemption for her?
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! It was awesome! you are such a great writer! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! YOU ROCK!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!!
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Title: YEA!!
Reviewed By: dororokun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AMAZING! I love the part when you have everyone hate sakura. I never thought so many poeple could hate Sakura at once!
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