| "Arubaito" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 24, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou! And yeah, he probibly does have super recepton being a workaholic and billionar lol Kabia on his cell while climbing a mountin, why is it that I can picture that? lol
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Title: raaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:42 PDT
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Oh my GAAAAAWWWWWWD I'm soooo sorry for taking so long with this chapter! It has ACTUALLY taken me like... a week to be able to read it xD that's how busy I've been! Anyway I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter, once again, well done. Niita just cracks me up man. She's like an anime Barbie x Paris Hilton x Anzu... the way I see it lol. Can't wait for the next installment! And, btw, in case you care, my next chapter will be up very shortly. It is in the works!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:01 PDT
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Haha, you know there's something weird about you when you stick the natural laws of physics into a YGO fanfiction. At least, weird in a good sort of way... Overall, it's a pretty good story, with some slightly cliche moments. And I actually know what you're talking about with the gashapon machines! I was in Hong Kong, and I got two Naruto ones (Tsunade and Naruto) and a Fullmetal Alchemist one (Scar). I didn't see any YGO ones though; if there was one, I would've bought as many as I could. Well, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 05:15 PDT
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Great chapter and just too cute. They each got the others dragons. Seems like Niita is not the complete idiot she seems. He cryptic comment to Joey was pricelees. I wonder if he will see if for what it was. I hope they figure it out themselves soon.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:58 PDT
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great chapter can't wait for the next aknkkskd alaska(ak)newton kansas(nk) kasas(ks) kid(kd) lot of k's huh
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Title: Neat!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 13, 2007 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, I finished it all in one day! Really thought Kaiba's phone would have no reception in this last chapter but I guess going uncontious works too lol Cant wait for you to update, im totally hooked ;p
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 17:38 PDT
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to funny, feel sorry for them being locked in a closet, not fun. anyway your story cracks me up. have a good b-day
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:03 PDT
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Yo yo yo! Happy birthday dawg! Man, that was a lengthy chapter! Good nonetheless, though! ^_^ it's actually a rather believable situation. Offices are pitch black even during the day if you're in a room with no natural light, let alone lightbulbs that don't work! Poor Kaiba, I wonder what will become of them? Once again looking forward to more!! hehe JG-chan ~~ xx
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 11:49 PDT
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Funny chapter. I could see where this was going as soon as she told him about the door knob. Well that was Jounouchi's third bad thing for the day and possible in a very twisted way Kaiba's third good thing. Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 18:44 PDT
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This chapter wasn't lame at all! What the hell are you talking about?! It was fantastic! *shakes you* O_O... *regains composure* OK. Sorry...I just don't like it when people put themselves down like that XD In any case, I am totally impressed with the way this story is turning out. It almost feels as if it could all be real, like I could step into it and be a part of it! As for Niita... God, I could smack her! Does she even realise how lucky she is to be KAIBA'S ASSISTANT?!?!? I also liked the part with Ryou and Bakura XD he cracks me up. Anyway, please continue! It is a masterpiece! ^_^ JG-chan ~~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:13 PDT
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I hope Seto gets the idea to fire Nita and take Jonouchi back to Kaiba corporation. He is more than slightly more dependable. of course, his disadvantage is that he can't work in the mornings. Darn, I forgot about that. Oh well, somehow they could make it work. I liked the chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 05:03 PDT
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Good Chapter. I am really enjoying this fic.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 04:26 PDT
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Great chapter. Poor Jounouchi, it probably was better for his health that his brain shut down and he didn't say anything to make Kaiba attack him like the old days. I hope he gets to keep his job.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 04:07 PDT
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Good chapter. I hope Jou will be alright.
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