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"A Deeper Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ]
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 Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2007 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh nasty mareo i want to beat him up now, i hope sess finds out and kicks his arse but first a little bit of torture just to soften him up. other than that i really did like this chapter, it was sad and sweet at the same time.
 Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2007 15:44 CDT
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so sorry for the loss of the chappie, that sucks! but I know you will do your thing & get us up & going again :D
 Title: yay! ^.^
Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2007 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
thank god!!! sometimes people start to write really good stories and just stop! which really makes me mad cuz i'm always like.. 'grrrrr!!! i like that you should finish that!!!' but woooo!!! you will finish it!!!!! i loves it so far!!! (and this is coming from a hard core inu/kag fan lol) but.... uh... other than the fact that there IS NO UPDATE at the moment everythings peachy....... oh and sumthin else... what the hell did she wish for... that has been bugging me.......
 Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2007 09:53 CDT
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Yay, I'm just glad that you wasn't sick. It's a good thing yoi posted that a/n because I was gettin worried about you. Hope you find great inspiration to update as soon as possible, and yes I had a great fouth!!!^_^ Have a great day, and update soon^_^-HCDK
 Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2007 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Same thing happen to me as HCDK....the only difference my friend was over so I couldn't realy get on my computer at all with out her getting mad at me....o well......I hope you had a good 4th of July I like mine...hehe.....well exsept for the fact that I couldn't go to the computer...hehe....so I Hope your ok and that you will update soon....lots of smiles....Nyuka
 Title: Happy 4th
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2007 10:10 CDT
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Happy late 4th of July. and I am soooooooh sorry that i forgot to say it yesterday, but I was just so busy with the cook-out and then firecracker war, that I just didnt have time to get on the computer.....Well I hope you had a great 4th of July, and I really really really hope that you update soon^_^ -HCDK
 Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2007 20:11 CDT
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Hey, long time no update.Your not sick or anything? I hope not....Well update soon, and I hope you have a great summer^&^
 Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2007 20:11 CDT
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Hey, long time no update.Your not sick or anything? I hope not....Well update soon, and I hope you have a great summer^&^
 Title: Its been fifteen days since you've updated...*sob*....Pain
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2007 17:46 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA why havent you updated yet...are you ok did you catch the flew......I want to read more of this fic please don't let it die.....*sob*....I don't know what I can say to give you inspiration to write but I just though you should know that I will wait as long as it takes to read the rest of this story and hopefully that doesn't take to long.....please update as soon as you can *sob* *cry* *tear*....Nyuka
 Title: It's been to long
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2007 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sadness overflows deep with in my heart.....The story which brings so much joy seeses to be post...is it for ever more....the pain it would be.....please say you shall update....please never say die....this story sould not ever falter...why do you delay the update?...why must I wait....ah that sadness is over whelming......So I ask...can you update soon.................Nyuka /U.U\
 Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2007 15:53 CDT
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Are you alright you havent up dated in like eight day I hope you are ok...*sniff* because I want to read more of this story......so empty.....sigh.....please up date soon....Nyuka...P.s. Don't fall off a cliff because then this story will never befinished..........ummmm and alot of people will be upset that you are gone tooo.....*peace*.
 Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2007 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Five days...sniff.....Five long days...sniff....What is going to happen to them??.....What about the profacy??.....I sorry if you buisy and its hard for you to up date but...but....I love your fic's to much....*waaaaaaaaaaa*....Must read more....*sob*...O sob...O cry ....O Kagome....O Sesshoumaru.....O..........O mareo....he better stay away....grawl*......I think I wining to much....and sobbing to much...and sighing to much...probably because I need to read more....Or maybe I need to read less??...Its like a drug....lol...Ok try to up date soon.................................Your fan, Nyuka XP
 Title: Catching Up - Ch 16
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2007 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, the world stops when the computer ain't working! I just finished Ch 16..sad, sweet, intriguing! Poor Sanyu! And of course Lord Toyoharu for losing so much! What is Mareo up to? It's obvious he's liking Kagome, but no way is Sesshy letting her go! But one never knows, huh? I love when you include the Japanese lyrics. I've got songs like Every Heart & Dearest, and they are much better in Japanese than the English translations. I like trying to follow along with the lyrics so please continue to include these! :D
 Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope they figure out how to mate soon. This story has intriqued me from the start. I'm so glad thatthey are both showing emotional attachment to each other...I hope no one causes that to fade and they can manage to only strngthen and grow more in love with the ability to satisfy that love. I really got involved with this story as if I was the magician that was making them grow instead of being only a bystander of your beautiful imagery and words that seem as if you must have known them and their love.
 Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no, a snooping Mareo, thstt can't be good. I hope he doesn't try to break up Sesshoumaru, and Kagome by sayint 'The only reason for Lord Sesshoumaru wanted to mate you, was because of some Prophecy to increase his power.' Because if Kagome hears that, it will be like her whole world will crumble. And for your question, I read you song lyrics at the bottom in english, after I download the song and listen to the beat, but on some of them I can't do it, but I do it on most of them. That was a great chapter, and I can't wait on 17^_^!!! Update soon:D
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