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| "A Deeper Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: Chs. 18 & 19
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 19:42 CDT
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What else can I say but WOW!! Excellant chapters! 18 was sweet & heart warming (& musical!) and 19 was scorching hotness! YEAH, finally mated! That little creep Mareo better keep his distance, perhaps in a little hut on the edge of the Western Lands?? Or is there yet another trouble maker? Seven months huh? Sanyu will be a good mid-wife for Kagome. Update when you can. Good things come to those who wait! :D
| Title: awesome update
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the whole story so creative though i wish inuyasha didn't die but my favorite pairing for inuyasha is sesshomaru and kagome i think they would make a great couple your a wonderful author ive read all 12 of your stories your awesome when it come to writing lemons i very much enjoyed them i love how you tie amusement entertainment and romance all in to your story it is very romantic i hope you continue writing your so gifted when it comes to writing you are truely a remarkable writer this story is very intense i love the entire story except the fact inuyasha is dead i love him it makes me sad *crys* i cried alot in this story its so sad but so interesting at the same time its what everyone is looking for in their stories it wouldn't be a great fiction without some sarrow and saddness thats why you amaze me how you've tied it all in together perfectly im very courageous and ready to find out what happens next i totally understand about the upcoming of school and the ending of the summer im not to fond of school but we all got to go right well besides some of us need to go *refers to self* haha im kind of a dumby lol well anyways i hope you update when ever you get the time looking forward to finding out what happens next well take care and don't pressure yourself take your time if necessary from your newest fan Inuyashalover161 a.k.a Sheena *hugs you* Take care oh heres my email address i would like to become one of your friends and get to know the amazing author to my favorite fanfiction A Deeper Destiny i hope to become great friends with you my email address is sheena_skatergirl16@yahoo.com well farewell for now i hope to hear from you soon and remember take care of yourself :P
| Title: Three cheers for chapter 19
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo crazy....but I did expect it after reading some of you other fics...hehe....and of course people like this fic...its a good fic...I's got everything...literaly....hehe.....I'm realy happy because now Mareo can't get near Kagome in that way.....(YES!)....was that guy in a villiage near the western lands him??.....Is Sesshoumaru going to ask Kagome about how she got that, is Mareo going to get the boot...Yes!....ok I have nothing against the guy exsept he is a stoker and he was tring to steal Kagome from Sesshoumar and that he reminds me of Onigumo stalked Kikyo...well sora considering he was nearly burned alive and couldn't move....any ways I realy hope that you can update soon I realy do love love this fic....XD....Nyuka
| Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot. hot, hot, need a very cold shower now and maybe attack my boyfriend. As u can tell I loved chap 19... very sweet and fluffy and citrusy. perfect
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 10:29 CDT
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Yay, they are finally mated!! Is it just me, or is there something up with Lord Toyoharu, and Sanyu...? I am so happy for them, and Sesshoumaru actually said I love you!!! Hurray, you just the bestest!!!!I can't wait for 20, and I hope you have a great yr of school....But I am happy to say school doesnt start until Aug. 9!!^_^-HCDK
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 10:03 CDT
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Oh'.'-lol. Stupid me. I should have read it before I jumped to conclusions, but all still the same. Yay, another update! I read your A/M, and don't worry I will always be here, and wait on updates..... And I will send you a friends request as soon as I get on Myspace^_^-HCDK 0FF TO READ CHAP. 19!!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 09:46 CDT
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Yay, two updates in the same day! What a way to start off my morning! YOur the best, but I gotta go start reading now......Review when I'm done!!!^_^ -HCDK
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Omg, chapter 18 was so heart warming, I felt Kagome's pain. I am so mad at Mareo, not only did he betray Sesshoumaru, he was willing to break Kagome for his own selfish greed. If he really did love her, he would be happy if she was happy, and instead of trying to break her, he would be trying to build her. He is kinda like Naraku in a way, tear people up, for his own personal gain, no matter who he hurts, or the cost. I was kinda shocked about the way things turned out, kinda embrassed to say this, but I was expecting Sesshoumaru to sing a song to Kagome, from the bottom of his heart, to prove to her that he is forreal, and he is not doing it for power, because of with your love, and smile, I have all the power I need.....I know, I know, thats way to open and mushy for Sesshoumar, but Hey, a person can dream can't they? LOL. Thank you for the wonderful update, and once again I apolgize for my empthy mindedness, and I hope you update soon, and I know chapter 19 is gonna be the bomb. Why you might ask? Well, that's an easy answer...Because your writting it, lol....Update soon!!!^_^ -HCDK
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 18:13 CDT
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Omg, you updated!!!! I am so, so, so, so, sorry that I forgot to bring my dads labtop!!! I was go to Pensacola for a little while. I just got back last night, and I had a dream about InuYasha, and like *BOOM* it hit me 'A Deeper Destiny!' Please forgive me, but I am about to start reading you updates, and once again I am really, really, so sorry.-HCDK
| Title: Good work!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So wonderfully happy that you updated XD.....soooooo whats up for chapter 19 hu!..huuuuuuuuu!....hehe...I can't wait I love this story waaaaaay to much if ya ask me....hehe.....but any ways cuality is nice but...O.O..*on the verge of cring*...please don't take to long to update I don't know if my heart can handle it...JK...but seriously I love this story and I want to read more please don't take to long looking for your insperation....because if you spend to much time looking for insperation when you find it you'll have forgoten why you were looking for it in the first place......XD.....but any way this was a great chapter...I was hopeing that more would have happened though.....thats mainly why I wan't you to get chapter 19 ready because I want to see how the two work things out...oooooow will Sesshoumaru confess his utmost dieing devotionous love to her...(are those even words?..XD...hehe)...I don't care what other people say I love..well..love stories...hehe...please keep up the great work and I sooo glad Kagome still loves him.....score: Sesshoumaru: 1 bizilian....Mareo: 0.....hehe....keep up the good work and get those updates in...you'll make me very happy...XD...Nyuka
| Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 02:23 CDT
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ohhhh it was so fluffy and sweet, i loved it and i loved the lyrics to the song too. sob
| Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 07:25 CDT
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i get on first thing in the morning and go directly to here to check if i can read on.... and then nooooooooooooo theres no uppdate!!!! plz update asap you have me buy the leash!
| Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 16:01 CDT
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ack!!!! so does this mean she will have no doubts when and if she mates with sessy (fluffy to me) plz update soon!!!!!!
| Title: Haray you finaly made chaper 17 my heart is sorring XD
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o I soooooooo glad you are not feeling ill I was very worried that you had gotten sick.....What going to happen in the Sesshoumaru's little sanctruary....Kagome is mind is at peace there she has not dought that she love Sesshoumaru there....and because She unmasked her pressence wont Sesshoumaru come to finder her in his garden....Will he be mad that she stumble on to his and his mother's place...or will something else happenes I hope nothing gets ruined....speaking of ruin this Mareo guy I don't care if he is alot like Inuyasha, he Isn't Inuyasha and he should just bud out he has not chance with her she is just a nice person....to every one....I hope he gets fired for what he tried to do....for some reason he may remind Sesshoumaru of his brother but he reminds me of Naraku and what he did to try to be with Kikyo....weird how that works out hu?....does that mean that Inuyasha and Naraku are alot alike??....Naaaaa I'm just going off ....hehe....but this is going to be great I so glad you finaly updated but if the next chapter takes as long I dont think I'll be able to handle it with such a cliffy ending to chapter seventeen.....aaaaa man I realy do hope that you will be able to update the next chapter faster...hay and since you said that you were going to have more on 17 that means you have a head start on 18.....sooooooo please don't take as long I have all these questions in my head and I want them answered befor I for get them and I've been haveing alot of head acks resently so I realy don't want to for get the quetions I have because of a head ack so please up date soon ...please and thankyou......Nyuka
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 22:10 CDT
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Chappie well done - you expressed many emotions in a short bit. Mareo is really a rat-youkai, isn't he? Not too smart to try to get between a powerful miko and a powerful taiyoukai. No good will come of this! Kagome's walk to the grove was heartbreaking. Especially the image of InuYasha walking away... made me grap a tissue! I hope Kags & Sesshy can have an open & honest conversation in the comfort of the magnolias. And maybe a nice sweet song from Kagome?
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