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| "A Deeper Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 20:25 CST
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DONT FORGET THIS FIC DANG IT...*pout* you where doing realy good with updates all the way up untill August now you haven't updated in a long time why are you taking so long....are you realy realy sick for like five months, I don't know whats up mayber you not ok but I realy want you to update please date this fic....don't sercome to the writers block I emplor you do not sercome....*pout*...please..................Meow
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:03 CST
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Are you ok I haven't seen an update come from you resently are you ok?.............I hope itsn't nothing to serious cause I want you to continue this fic.............ummmmmmmmmmm did you for get about it...........well if you did this is a reminder to keep writhing............................Please.............Nyuka
| Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 14:21 CDT
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omfg!!!! i read this a while ago and you still... i repeat STILL havent put in the twenty effing third chapter in!!!!!! god now im pissed.... i was going to do some leisurly read ing while at work but no you didn't put the chapter in so now i have nothing (im liein ignore me) any way......... update asap!!!!
| Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 16:39 CDT
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omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hate you so much!!!!!!! *kills* no i don't i love you!!!!! and you can't die!!!! no dont die!!!!! *ressurects* write more dammit!! lmao
| Title: DEATH IS ONLY THE BEGINNING
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet thanks for telling me the title name of the song it will make it easyer to search for.......and that was so unfair the reason everyone...(well my reason any way)..thought it was going to me Inuyasha is because Midoriko called her a fool...I think I would have to go back an check to be sure but that is some thing Inuyasha would say not a enchanting Miko.....Well I'm glad that Sesshoumaru was able to hear what she had to say...(well at least Inuyasha came in this chapter so I wasn't tearably wrong...hehe)....now when she come back at least he won't think she did it because she regreted it and wanted to be with Inuyasha that sure would have put a damper on things...I so glad I did work out that way..............so what is the danger that is comeing in their future...well I guess you won't tell me strate of I'll just have to struggle though reading every chapter.....ya...ok...update soon....Nyuka
| Title: Ch 21
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 14:54 CDT
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No way, can't hate you! And not interesting enough? BAH! A lot of the Sess/Kag fics are all 'wham, bam, mates". You have taken these 2 from friendship, to courtship, to mutually agreed mating. You are actually telling a story & not just some sweaty little smut fic (NOTHING wrong with those *wink*), with a beginning, middle, and (*SOB* eventually) an end. I love your 'eye' for details & can easily picture everything. And of course ya just gotta love the music you add because it does fit in with the scenes. Shinjitsu no Uta is perfect for this scene. It's always made me feel that something not good was about to happen (had not seen the lyric translation til now). For those interested, it can be sampled at www(dot)j-fan(dot)com if you don't recognize it as 1 of the anime's ending songs. That all said...yes, extreme angstyness in this chappie! These two are so friggin hard headed (yes, it would be boring if everything just fell into place). Did they not learn from their time spent in the magnolia grove that talking is a good thing? Grrrrr, obviously not! I know you will take care of this in your own time so, again, can't hate you for creating a story that just begs to be read! InuYasha had better not mess this up for them. Even he understands how hard it is to love two, so he's got to allow Kags her happiness since he cannot give it to her from the great beyond. I guess this chappie was a sink hole in the road to happiness *wink* Thanks for the update!!!!
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 14:34 CDT
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NOOOO!!! Why does Kagome have to be all out going, why Kagome, WHY???? Sesshoumaru and Kagome both think that each other regretted the mating, and they were both wrong, man you have to fix this, and fix it quick. I dont know who the voice is but I have a strong feeling that its InuYasha again....Songo, Miroku, Kirra, and Shippo needs to come and help too, they could be like her muses, I hope the the Tensiga can bring her back to live, or InuYasha has some after-life healing magic he can use, but we both know that that is too good to be true.....I jus hope that she wasnt pregnaunt when she desided to do all this, and if she was thats just another reason for InuYasha to get on her case in the after life.......Oh the work of InuYasha is never gonna be over....I wonder what Sesshoumaru is gonna do when he wakes up??? I'm just surprised that KAgome Miko powers can work on Sesshoumaru....InuYasha is prob. gonna talk some since into her, and remind her of all the people who needs her, Rin, Sesshoumaru, her family in the future, and the people she is gonna get to help by mating with Sesshoumaru....OMG random thought, what is by Sesshoumaru being a Tai-Youkia and Kagome being the great Miko that she is, and mated with this all powerfull Tai-Youkia, think of the baby they would have... I would be like the strongest half demon in the world(no offence InuYasha) Demon blood mixed with a miko, he wouldnt have to worry about becoming a blood thirsty monster because Kagome's Miko powers will conseal the demon with in him....That baby would be an un-sttoppable force.... Oh but enough of my thoughts, update soon, and Im still in honors classes, I have all honors but english, and I have Spanish first block!!! This is gonna be a hard semester, I wanted P.e first but I can deal with it, Update soon, abd hope your first day of school was a blast^_^-HCDK
| Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 13:30 CDT
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talk about the angst in this chapter and don't tell me there is more. i enjoyed the lyrics for the this chapter too, very apt.
| Title: The edge of the world
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't find the song...*sniff*...I wanted to hear it...*sob*...I know who it was Kagome found in the steamy mist it had to be Inuyasha am I right...O-ya I'm right I have to be right....Sesshoumaru is going to revive her with tensaga right..he has to....what will he say what are they going to say to each other...Acuward silence realy ruins the mood....they love each other so much and now they o gosh this stinks......well try to update soon.....Nyuka
| Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't hate you for this chapter but if it was going to make your readers mad at you and you knew it what was the compulsion to write it so sad? I can't really say I enjoyed it though because it was so sad...the OMG NO! type of sad.
| Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 17:57 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS NOT COOL!!! THATS HORRIBLE!!! THATS..... THATS..... THATS.... NOOOONONONONONONO!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 09:23 CDT
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The path to happiness ain't smooth, is it? Sesshy just set himself back a millenium. I guess another trip to the magnolias would be too easy to straighten out this misunderstanding. And Mareo's going to try to work this in his favor. But we'll have Rin and Sanyu to run interference, huh? Very angsty chapter girl!! My heart clenched a bit during Kag's dream/vision, and with Sesshy's re-freezing. You my dear can really spin a tale!! And, go with whatever flow works for you! :D
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 13:16 CDT
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Omg,poor Shesshomaru, and everything was going so well, but I guess that it wouldnt be an interesting fic if everything was all bright and cheerful all the time. At first I thought he was greving with Kagome for the lost of his brother, but that was until I read your A/N. I'm so happy that you started putting your responces at the endz of your chapters, because I havent checked my mail for aol in like forever.......Kagome is gonna be heartbroken when she wakes up, she needs the confort of her mate right now, but poor Sesshy feels betrayed about that dream of hers. If I didnt know InuYasha the way I do, I would say that he did it on purpose, comming into her dreams at that particular moment. He prob. did, it was prob. some fate of destiny to make sure that their love for each other is strong and can endure for the hard challenges that they must face from the phophcey. Well enough of me talking, your are great. Oh yea, hope you have a great school year too, I know I will, we both will, and I might not be taking honors this year, so if I'm not I can get my 4.0 instead of the 3.0 I have now, lol.... Well update soon, and I hope the rest of your summer is great too.^_^-HKDC
| Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 15:50 CDT
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I just reolized that my last review was number 61....that means Im them best ya...JK...well I guess this is number 62..you just got another review...hehe...eny way I better say something about the story...ummmmmm..I HATE MAREO!....HEHE....NYUKA
| Title: WITH OUT LOVE WHAT IS LIFE BUT AN EMPTY SHELL
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO I HAVE KNOW IDEA WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT....*BLUSHING WITH THE EXTREMENESS OF THE SUN IN SUMMER*.....*hu..hemm*....any way I was so nice that Inuyasha was understaning and was ok with her falling in love with another....exspeshaly he brother.....I have read stories where he says that she has betrayed him and that is so not koo like it wasn't hard enoph for her in the first place.....And yes I realy HATE with a passion Missunderstandings...they always screw every thing up....how will she explain her dream to him...will he believe it...I'm mean they are still Mates and all...that is probably what made it hurt so much....you better fix this *on the verge of cring and red with anger*......ok and thankyou for updateing fast then the last time I lovet to read this story....XD...........Nyuka
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