| "Blind Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to tell you how HOT your story is! I am just so mad that I found it so late, but it is fire!!!!! I love the way you have Ed submitting to Roy right off the bat in the first chapter! I love it when Roy dominates Ed like that! It just sets my little heart to racing! I can hardly wait for chapter 12, I hope you post it soon~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Renna On: October 16, 2008 08:34 PDT
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*lets out a little fan girl squeal* It always makes my day to see such a great story like this updated instead of having the author forget about it. This was amazing. Poor Ed in finally figuring out it was Roy but I saw it coming once Ed was brought to the hospital. I mean it's Roy, Roy always visits Ed. But now, no idea what's going to happen next...it's what I love about this story. The first few chapters in, you never could dream it would turn out something like this. You also have a very good writing style, description wise with fine details and making sure everything makes sense. *patiently awaits next update*
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Title: Everything that can go wrong, will
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 13, 2008 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea how your going to bring these two together after THIS chapter, but I wish you all the luck in the world ^^' God I feel bad for Ed, its like all his misery has piled up, just to be released at the same time. It was only a matter of time befor he broke down. Lovely, as always. I love how this is written and can't wait for more! So until then, ja ne!
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Title: noooooo
Reviewed By: kitsunesan (nsi) On: October 13, 2008 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SOOOO not how i wanted that to turn out!!!! please update again soon. i love this story and every detail. i want more!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 16:02 PDT
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It was bound to happen, but it still sucks in every single way, neither of em deserved to find out like this, well, Ed didn;t deserve to find out about his mysterious friend at his weakest moment. Damn, it;s gonna be near impossible to get Ed to trust Mustang again after this, and probably not even then. For that matter, what happens when he realizes the consequences for a relationship between subordinate and superior, or at least remembers it? That is gonna suck. Neh. COntinue to update, this story rocks. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: gunslinger-alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 08:13 PDT
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pleaaaasssseee update soooon! this is really cool!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: trumpeter4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wowo great turn of events with the whole blind thing very creative story's been so awsome so far
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Reviewed By: Renna On: September 09, 2008 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fianlly been waiting forever for this. Poor Ed. I forsee him figuring out it was Roy all along. And there is a saying that it gets worse before it gets better. I think that applies here. ...and I let out a fan-girl squeal when I saw it was updated...LOL
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Title: Soooo Sad! :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 09, 2008 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ed, his life just gets worse and worse, I actually feel his pain :( Wonderful chapter, I was so excited to see that you updated I let out a rather embarassing fan-girl squal :P Wonderful work as always, I think I know where your going with this and it's a wonderful direction! ;p Heres waiting for the next chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:51 PDT
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My god, that was a very good chapter! XD But I hope that our little Edward is okay :[ That would suck if he was permanently blind. . . DX
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:52 PDT
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Jeeze, all this stuff does add up eventually, ya know. It sucks, but that's life. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 16, 2008 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, fun, fun! Very well written, I enjoyed it greatly. Who knew Roy was a super perv lol A very enjoyable read, cant wait for the next chapter, perfect 10s from me, keep it up! ;p
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Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:59 PDT
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This story must be very challenging, but you've done amazing. Figuring out all the parts that seem crazy and making them actually seem plausible. You are a great writer. I'm looking forward to how it'll all end. Everyone deserves love...except Russle for being an asshole!
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Title: =O! WOO
Reviewed By: TypoDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeees! Do want more chapterrrrs :D:D:D I've gotta re-read the story until more comes out! But hey that's all good! hope all's going well for you! ~Typo
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Reviewed By: Sydney On: July 13, 2008 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have REALLY enjoyed this story so far. I sincerely hope that you continue it. I must say that I saw something happening between Ed and Russell, but I didn't quite expect it to be like that, so it was a good thing to be thrown at me. It's really good and I like the mental attributes that you've put into it. Please update soon!
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