| "Blind Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: yami990 On: July 26, 2007 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would you please continue this fanfic? i'd love to see what happens next and maybe we could see if ed can figure out that it's roy who he's dealing with while blindfolded? you have really good spelling and grammar in your writing.
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Reviewed By: TheAngelIsrafel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your style of write hope you write more soon!
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Title: Great piece of work
Reviewed By: Meyham On: July 04, 2007 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you narrarate from both Ed's and Roy's points of view without writing that tacky 'Ed's POV' or 'Roy's POV'. So irritating. Kudos again on your excellent grammar. You really portray yourself as a confident author with morals, something not always found in the yaoi circle. 10 for creativity because you make the pairing seem slightly more possible with the 'anonymous' factor. Very unique! 10 for enjoyment because everyone is pretty in-character...although Ed seems pretty hormonal to me. The actual lemons are VERY well written. I'm impressed. I always say "Potty-mouth Ed is okay, but the author shouldn't be dirty using 'four-letter-words' to describe body parts too often." You keep it clean and professional. (Or at least as clean as one can keep a yaoi!) Please keep updating, I want to find out Ed's response when he finds out it's the Colonel! He will find out, right....
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:03 PDT
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Yea! Ch 4 was great. I MUST know what was in the note! Maybe you have the next chapter written already and are just making us poor readers wait? Maybe? Well, I can hope. Giving us the thoughts that are going through their heads, from both points of view, really makes the story so much more involving and interesting for us. Thanks for this chapter and more please!
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames (not logged in) On: July 01, 2007 18:03 PDT
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I rather like Ed's personality here. It's quite exciting for the reader too.
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:27 PDT
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Good chapter! Really good! ^^ can't wait for ch 4. You rock. *chu*
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg! This is really good, and I mean really good! Don't stop there, please! I want, no I need to know what happens! The lemon was amazing! The whole first chapter was very arousing, and I loved Ed's bathroom-scene! Very erotic. You definately have a talent for this! I love the way you describe why edward gets turned on by this and that, and of course; the same goes for Roy! This is simple, not too complitcated; a perfect yaoi! Please update sooooon!! :D You rock!
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Reviewed By: Alaizabel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! i love this! this is a really really great fanfic. and i normally don't like fanfics. but this is awesome! i can't wait for the next chapter! update sooon!!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 16:34 PDT
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write more please
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Reviewed By: Shiin-kun On: June 08, 2007 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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-cracking up- This is brilliant, and I love you. "Now wasn't the time for lusty thoughts about his subordinate... Now was the time for teasing the hell out of him." You rock. Update soon. XD ~Shiin-kun
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing idea for a fic! I havent read anything like that before, and I loved it. I can't wait to see where this goes! Like all of your other fics it is wonderfully written, and its my favorite pairing so that adds to the amusement! Keep it up! I love seeing Roy have the upper hand in situations (even if thats usually how the story goes). Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Saanrio [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:54 PDT
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Very nice start. You have a readable writing style that makes this even more enjoyable. I look forward to seeing where you take this and whether Ed will ever find out it was Roy.
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the irony! The first chapter was HOT, the second was hot and made me giggle! Can't wait to see what happens next. More now, please. (BTW- it was also well written and I could easily see them all acting just like that)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 18:36 PDT
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Monday Monday... this is great, with Roy's sadistic nature and all, this is just great =)
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 14:58 PDT
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Oh Hell Yes, i want to know whats going to happen on monday night, i can't r eally wait, but i guess i have to aww
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