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| "Blind Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Renna On: October 16, 2008 08:34 PDT
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*lets out a little fan girl squeal* It always makes my day to see such a great story like this updated instead of having the author forget about it. This was amazing. Poor Ed in finally figuring out it was Roy but I saw it coming once Ed was brought to the hospital. I mean it's Roy, Roy always visits Ed. But now, no idea what's going to happen next...it's what I love about this story. The first few chapters in, you never could dream it would turn out something like this. You also have a very good writing style, description wise with fine details and making sure everything makes sense. *patiently awaits next update*
| Title: Everything that can go wrong, will
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 13, 2008 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea how your going to bring these two together after THIS chapter, but I wish you all the luck in the world ^^' God I feel bad for Ed, its like all his misery has piled up, just to be released at the same time. It was only a matter of time befor he broke down. Lovely, as always. I love how this is written and can't wait for more! So until then, ja ne!
| Title: noooooo
Reviewed By: kitsunesan (nsi) On: October 13, 2008 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SOOOO not how i wanted that to turn out!!!! please update again soon. i love this story and every detail. i want more!!!!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 16:02 PDT
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It was bound to happen, but it still sucks in every single way, neither of em deserved to find out like this, well, Ed didn;t deserve to find out about his mysterious friend at his weakest moment. Damn, it;s gonna be near impossible to get Ed to trust Mustang again after this, and probably not even then. For that matter, what happens when he realizes the consequences for a relationship between subordinate and superior, or at least remembers it? That is gonna suck. Neh. COntinue to update, this story rocks. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: gunslinger-alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 08:13 PDT
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pleaaaasssseee update soooon! this is really cool!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: trumpeter4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 19:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wowo great turn of events with the whole blind thing very creative story's been so awsome so far
| Reviewed By: Renna On: September 09, 2008 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fianlly been waiting forever for this. Poor Ed. I forsee him figuring out it was Roy all along. And there is a saying that it gets worse before it gets better. I think that applies here. ...and I let out a fan-girl squeal when I saw it was updated...LOL
| Title: Soooo Sad! :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 09, 2008 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ed, his life just gets worse and worse, I actually feel his pain :( Wonderful chapter, I was so excited to see that you updated I let out a rather embarassing fan-girl squal :P Wonderful work as always, I think I know where your going with this and it's a wonderful direction! ;p Heres waiting for the next chapter! XD
| Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:51 PDT
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My god, that was a very good chapter! XD But I hope that our little Edward is okay :[ That would suck if he was permanently blind. . . DX
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:52 PDT
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Jeeze, all this stuff does add up eventually, ya know. It sucks, but that's life. Continue to update, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 16, 2008 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, fun, fun! Very well written, I enjoyed it greatly. Who knew Roy was a super perv lol A very enjoyable read, cant wait for the next chapter, perfect 10s from me, keep it up! ;p
| Reviewed By: zyf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:59 PDT
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This story must be very challenging, but you've done amazing. Figuring out all the parts that seem crazy and making them actually seem plausible. You are a great writer. I'm looking forward to how it'll all end. Everyone deserves love...except Russle for being an asshole!
| Title: =O! WOO
Reviewed By: TypoDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeees! Do want more chapterrrrs :D:D:D I've gotta re-read the story until more comes out! But hey that's all good! hope all's going well for you! ~Typo
| Reviewed By: Sydney On: July 13, 2008 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have REALLY enjoyed this story so far. I sincerely hope that you continue it. I must say that I saw something happening between Ed and Russell, but I didn't quite expect it to be like that, so it was a good thing to be thrown at me. It's really good and I like the mental attributes that you've put into it. Please update soon!
| Title: Oh my ._.
Reviewed By: Ms_awesome On: June 16, 2008 15:52 PDT
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Um... to be entirely honest with you, that was a bit too weird to be arousing, even for me. And I usually enjoy kink, but when Ed went as far as to hump Roy's leg, that was it. Dog-master-games ain't my cup of tea. Sorry. The chapter was still very well-written, and I read it all, but when it comes to sex-games, I like it better when they stick to naughty toys and perhaps some bdsm, but not... not that! That doesn't do it for me. Then again, this review just represents my personal likings and opinions. I'm sure a lot of ppl liked this chapter, but from now on, please stick to ordinary bdsm. Please? Every chapter so far has been very erotic and kinky, and I've enjoyed them a lot. Oh, and I really hope that we get to know more about Al soon, too! :D I'm still shocked by the fact that he's a shameless player, who actually fucked a girl on his own brother's bed! I have to admit though, I didn't like it when Ed thought it was a bit kinky. If it was me who had cought my brother or sister fucking someone on my bed, I know I'd be outraged. At least, I wouldn't think it was kinky. Then again, you are the author, and what you say goes. Ne? You know I still think you're awesome, and I hope you understand that I'm not trying to belittle you or mock you or anything like that. This is a review, and I like to be as honest as I can when it comes to stuff like this. Okay? Now, give us more sex (less animalistic) and more kink! And more Al! And more Ed-almost-finding-out-who-his-secret-fuckbuddy-is!" :D You're great! Keep up the awesome work!
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