| "A Little Faith" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:50 EDT
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so exciting. i can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cool!!! whats next?! lemons? love? other kinds of action? up date soon! ja ne!
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Title: ugh schooll
Reviewed By: entropy9 (not signed in) On: June 05, 2007 22:15 EDT
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darling, sorry to cheat you out of a review I've been dying trying to study for finals. anyway i loved this chap! well.. i hated it too...only because it made me want the next part so badly that i feel all restless now. It's like i live for the mystery of the present to unravel (well...to be confirmed b/c I've got my suspicions) and i love reading the pasts parts because those are just plain enjoyable. thanks for updating, work hard to finish the next chapter. make it nice and long lol I'll send you a shiny penny. regards, entropy9
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Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: June 03, 2007 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as it was a cliff hanger I loveed it. A great big "WHAT". The time things were a little bit confusing at first but you make things alot clearer in the later chapters. It looks really good so far, but I can't help but wonder. Why dosent anyone really remember? It a side effect of a removed mating, but if that were the case then Sesshomaru wouldn't remember his mother. I think it would be kinda funny if when Sesshomaru takes Kagome to free Inuyasha all the does is accidentally grab the arrow when inspecting him and he falls from the tree. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does when he confrunts Inuyasha in the past and Kagome in the future. It would be logical that she would deny that he's even infront of her (or real at all) or faint. Another question raised is the conseilment spell on kagome and her 'adoptive' son, is that something she has unconciously, something put on her by someone in her time, or mabye it was put on her by someone in the past because they knew she would need it. Either way i can't wait for your next chapters. Yours truly CHELLY anonomous angel 0;)
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Title: Oops!
Reviewed By: AngelGirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! Forgot to rate! :P I say 9 because (so far) "Simple Legacy" is still my fave but it will probably (aka: will definately) rise later on. ^.^ Until then... -Angel Girl
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Reviewed By: AngelGirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 19:58 EDT
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Darn. I thought they had finally met for a second there! Then I went back and looked at it again... Evil suspense! I love it! :P Once again, I find myself checking to see if you have updated every hour, sometimes less. You said before how this story would have a hard time being as good as "A Simple Legacy" but I must say, it's well on it's way to being just as good, if not better! I can't wait for the next chapter! Kagome's reaction! YES! ^.^ -AngelGirl
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Title: BRAVO awesome amazing excellent
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this such a great story i love it so much i love the cluelessness of the story it makes it more entertaining to read your such a great writer and a author i like reading this story you've got so many wonderful ideas and your such an amazing writer i hope you update soon your biggest fan *HUGS YOU*
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 20:03 EDT
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cool!! are the lemons coming soon??!
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Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 15:55 EDT
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Read summery once before didn't find it interesting enough to stop and read. Got a little board when I ran a cross it again. Deciding to read it I have found that I happen to really like and enjoy how and where you are taking this story. Please don't stop would really like to see what happens next, up date when you can.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i love it im going to add you to my favorites i think im becoming one of your biggest fans i love the whole fuedal era/present day thing your such a awesome writer i check for update twice a day because i love this story one question is Sachimaru Kagome's and Sesshomaru's son i think that would be so cool i think its a bit sad how she lost most of her memories but with your fantastic writing ability i know you'll haver an explaination well i hope you update soon can't wait to find out what happens next thanks from your newest biggest fan your biggest fan *hugs you*
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Title: nooooo!
Reviewed By: entropy9 (not singed in) On: May 29, 2007 02:01 EDT
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ahhh! that was a great chappie...you've succeeded in making the present as engrossing as the past now. i just wanna know what happens next! in both eras! i'm dying here, i can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 00:19 EDT
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i really like how this story is going. Sachimaru is very cute and making Sesshoumaru chase after them is very amusing. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cool! and wow! please up date soon! will there be lemons later? please?
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: May 22, 2007 07:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I just read this new fic and I wanted to tell you how very good it is. I'm enjoying the time sequences where each of them go back to the feudal era in dreams and that they are both having the same dreams apparently at the same time. You are doing so well in keeping me guessing about what is happening in both time shifts. I have quite a few guesses but I'll forego asking as I know that the questions or conclusions cannot be answered. I've read your other fics some time ago but back then I didn't believe my reviews would mean much. I have come to learn that this is the reason you all write here in fanfiction, to get feedback on your writing skills and ability to create stories worth reading. So now I've been leaving my thoughts to those I feel have talent and should be encouraged as it is because of your talent for writing and doing so for free people like myself can escape their own personal problems and enjoy the world of adventure you give us using the characters from anime and such that we so love. I am grateful and tell those I review to this same thing. This fic is very intiguing as it gives me the feeling of many well known drama series that leaves us questioning and guessing at every new chapter. I was going to review this on ASS.net but for some reason they are responding extemely slow and even though I have dail up service, tonight is more annoying then ever. So, most times I will be there but if they give me problems I will review here just so you know I care enough to encourage your work. I am not very well will the gramatical stuff but if there is something I might be able to pick up on I'll be sure to let you know. There is one particular thing that I'd like to convey and as of yet I've not been attacked for but when in the Feudal Era the people there do not use contractions and slang of our modern day tongue and it seems to me to make it more athentic it would be better to keep to the period of dialect that they used then, but, in your narrative I don't think it matters so much. Now when Kagome speaks it's normal for her and would even be so for the Inutachi as they spend so much time with her that it would be habit to immitate her. But these are your stories and I mean no harm. I've found that a few writers who try really hard to keep the characters as close to normal as possible and that doing so is a difficult task when you need to meet your deadline to posting, so anyway, either way, I'm very pleased with with this fic and it feels as though it'll be as big a hit as your others. Much respect...Jen
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 23:22 EDT
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there were a lot of typoes in this chapter but i'm just glad you updated! is inuyasha going to the demon carnival (it's his company whog ot the tickets right?) in fact...doesn't kagome work for him? i can't wait for her to run into one of th einu brothers...i'll be patient lol, but this story really excites me. and i don't know any good kagome/ bankostu fics ... i know a bank/sango one, but i'll get back to you when i find it. what are your favorite fics? (good fics so hard to find nowadays)
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