| "A Little Faith" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date soon!! will sesshomaru and kagome ever meet?! will there be lemons?! who is sachimaru's(sp?) father?!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 10:59 EDT
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Your story is really interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon
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Title: awesome story please write more
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you are an awesome writer i love the story will you please update soon i think im becoming one of your biggest fans can't wait for the next awesome chapter i luv the story update soon pretty please your biggest fan *hugs you*
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Title: oh yeah...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna up your rating since i really liked this chapter! lol it had the perfect balance of past and present so i was VERY satisfied! one happy customer, entropy9
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Title: i think it's delicious
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 22:44 EDT
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I really liked this chapter b/c i'm more interested in the past than the present lol, but i am curious about sachimaru (well of course i have my own guess i mean his nam esounds like someone elses lol) but yeah good chapter. I was thrown off when you switche dfrom past to present because the ***divider thing is in a weird place...maybe :-P take a look at it anyway this is getting really interesting an di can't wait for more i was so excited to see the update and i'm glad you decided not to rewrite! anyway this is a great story, take your time and let your vision unravel i'm eagerly awaiting the next twist! -entropy9
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was definitely better than the first. Though I am not crazy about Inuyasha's role, it makes sense, and in this story, I can go with it. Great job! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original storyline! It begins a little slow, but it is an intro. I can see the potential for a lot more to happen, and I can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 19:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date soon!!! that was really good!
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 02:38 EDT
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but even if it's confusing don't change it! i'm confident that it will all come clear eventually...besides i like stories that i can't figure out too easy.
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Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 21:38 EDT
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Not bad although I agree with the person that said that the flashbacks and changes in PoV are bit confusing. Why is this story listed as "continuation"? Continuing from where? "other" or "alternative universe" are better classifications.
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Title: it's gettign clearer
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 20:00 EDT
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ok so they are both dreaming of the past at night... kagome was unconcious two years ago, but why cant sesshomaru remember the past? hmm....can't wait for more. again thanks for a long chapter and quick updates! happy mother's day if it applies to you!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date soon i like it a lot!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelGirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 15:56 EDT
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I am wondering about a few things. Like entropy9 said, are you going to be switching back and forth? I wonder how you're going to combine the past and present later. You don't have to answer that. Lol! :P It's good! I like it! Now, what will Sesshomaru do with his little concubine? :P Can't wait for the next chappie! Oh, and I haven't rated because I think it's too early in the story to do so. I will later on though! AngelGirl101
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Reviewed By: darkserenity07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks as though you have another great story lined up for all of us! as usual your long time fan
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 07:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this looks very interesting. are you going to go bakc and forth between time every chapter? this story seems to me to be pretty unique and even though it is au i hope th echaracters won't be too oc (it doesn't seem like it though) I hope you update this often as i am very curious abou what happens next. thank you for such a long first chapter. -entropy9
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