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Reviewed By: Caelestis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read through all thirteen chapters of your story, and I have to say I absolutely adore it. I'm a writer myself, and in my opinion you're a very talented author. The expressions you use, descriptions, emotions, all give way to a beautifully rendered story. I don't think I've found a story yet that pulls at my heartstrings more than this one. The intimate scenes are ... incredible. In many stories I've read with sex scenes, the sex is just there. There's hardly any emotional attachment, it's purely physical--lust. I'm not saying lust is completely bad (I read my fair share of lust-based sex), but I like the emotion involved, the thought and consideration that goes into making love and being made love to. I enjoyed reading it, thanks for posting and I hope you'll continue writing!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 15:41 EST
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Another great chapter! So glad Sess is taking some action (I hope Inu is going all youkai in a good way). I like how Shippo and Rin are playing matchmaker.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 11:34 EST
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sweet! keep it up!!!!!
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Title: Still lovin' on this...
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: February 01, 2010 05:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Snow, I will always love this story. ALWAYS. And it just gets better every time I read it. You're fantastic!
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Reviewed By: konekochan74 On: November 21, 2009 05:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is one of the best that i have read, i congratulate you on keeping the characters as in character as they can according to the situation. Keep going!!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2009 16:49 EST
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Great chapter! I am so glad Miroku was the voice of reason. I hope the boys can start to work things out now that Sess is getting better and the kids are keeping Kouga out of the way! Sess did say the L word and that should count for alot!
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Reviewed By: Reality_Check [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2009 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was such a good , I just wish the Sess would snap out of it and fight more for INu
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2009 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you have them going from one emotion to another. It keeps you wondering what will happen next. Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are growing closer together whether they know it or not. It's funny how they are so much alike without either of them really seeing it.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really great! Thank you for allowing Miroku to be the voice of reason to Inuyasha even if he's not ready to believe it just yet. Bless Rin and Shippo, they are trying so hard! Kouga is determined but realistic about his feeling for Inuyasha. I just can't wait until Sess gets his strength back!! Looking forward to the next update!!
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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I have read in a long time.Not only is it well thought out but it is detailed enough to take anyone on an emotional rollercoaster ride.You can actually feel thier pain and anguish and even thier happiness when it is there.What is just as important is that there is a plot.Thank you God!I can not wait to see what happens next and in my own personal opinion it would be wonderful to see all three of them together.Excellent writting!
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Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! you updated. I'm happy to see Sesshoumaru was better enough and concerned enough to risk himself to find InuYasha. I hate Kouga - more than I normally do. Lying, cheating, advantage taking little jerk. Poor, InuYasha, I hope this Kouga thing doesn't screw things up more with he and his brother. I also honestly hope Sesshoumaru kicks Kouga's ass when he's better.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter (though I must admit this one did not have me grabbing for tissues like all the previous ones)! If only those two silly brothers would actually talk to each other (and talking when the other one is unconscious does not count). This is so well written it is a real joy to read.
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful as usual. I'm sorry its been a whiles since I last expressed how truly great your work is but keep the splendorous work even in my silence of absence. Kisses.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 18:38 EDT
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i love the way that you bring out the sweet innocence of inuyasha's character. so many stories just focus on the rough, blustery exterior and never look for what lies beneath. the delicate torture of the back and forth emotions is so much fun to read. never having had the pleasure of reading this in its first incarnation, i have no idea where (or with whom) it will end. it really doesn't matter, though. you have the skills to make it a wonderful story no matter where you take it. thanks for another great chapter!
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Title: Back to Square One
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You’re so nice for explaining why Kouga’s introduction to the story was that way. Thanks for that. I now understand your decision and agree with it. This also gives me an idea about your method to add insight to an already finished story. I have been thinking about that a lot since your suggestion to me in one of my stories. As you can see, I am always learning from you. ïŠ But back to this chappie…Wah! How are you going to address their respective stubbornness!!! Arrghhhh!!! And Kouga is just ready to take Inu…grrrrrr. But in all honesty, it is rather nice that he is there for InuYasha although he is in-the-way. It is a good premise to have Jijenji’s Mom be the all knowing Obi-Won that makes InuYasha care for Sesshomaru. But girl, you just had to make Kouga so nice to Inu. It is making it hard for me to dislike him. Perhaps “Torn†should be change to “What the hell, Threesome†and give us some smacky yummylicious moments between the three. Ahhhh…ok, coming back to earth now… Oh yes, absolute thanks for the update. QS (This time I'm pasting from clipart...hope no weird things appear).
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