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Reviewed By: Laura~PrincessAurora On: December 25, 2012 11:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written and VERY HOT! Loved how you show them coming together, mending their hearts. I love sweet endings like that. |
Reviewed By: Kitty Gets Loose On: June 04, 2011 08:58 EDT
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I'm delighted with the openness and honesty of this latest chapter. Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are finally revealing to each other what they think, and what they know that perhaps the other didn't know they knew. It's incredibly sweet that although Sesshomaru must have been hurt by what Koga and Inuyasha did in the hot spring, he is ready to admit the part he himself played in causing it to happen at all. Miroku will make a wonderful adviser. And I believe he will be wise enough not to always take Inuyasha's side. I don't know if that mention of what Jinenji's mother said is a hint of future uncertainty to come, but I hope the two brothers learn to trust each other implicitly. I also like the idea that Koga will be around to look out for Inuyasha's well-being without having the freedom to pursue him romantically. Inuyasha really was very torn between his feelings for Sesshomaru and not wanting to hurt Koga. Will there be more chapters to come that will wrap up these issues, and perhaps show more of the development of the love between Sesshomaru and Inuuyasha? I don't think you've rushed the ending of this chapter - but there are a few loose ends that it would be good to tie up, if possible. |
Reviewed By: Kitty Gets Loose On: May 05, 2011 02:32 EDT
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Sorry to take so long to get to this - I didn't realise a new chapter was up! I love it that Koga had the sense of humour in the face of such danger to tell Sesshomaru that he'd got his words backwards. Love the viciousness of the fight that was somehow enhanced by Sesshomaru holding back for the sake of his relationship with Inuyasha. And definitely love the intensity of the build-up to the climax, when Sesshomaru finally admitted that he loves Inuyasha. Perfect! |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2011 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow the fight was truly amazing and the ending was perfect for this chappie. I loved how Sessh reflected back over the times in the show or manga and the movies of the things he did for Inuyasha without realizing it absolutely beautiful. And the end where he admits to Kouga that he loves Inuyasha I almost cried and I have to admit I did yell out yes real loud my sister thought I was nuts. Can not wait to see where else this takes us but I sure am excited to find out. Really great work. |
Title: Still love this!
Reviewed By: DaGrrrl On: April 09, 2011 11:38 EDT
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I still adore this story so many years later. You inspire me to pick up mine again soon and pay proper homage! You are Legion , woman! |
Title: Fight Fight
Reviewed By: ajj7Sunhawk On: April 07, 2011 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oooo I love the statement a little bit of maiming.. lol Sesshy is really wonderfully mean. Great chapter, Really enjoyed reading *chough even if Inu was not in it*cough. But glad the two had it out. Yippe fast update - amazing. You on a roll |
Reviewed By: Kitty Gets Loose On: February 28, 2011 19:00 EST
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This story of yours is so heart-wrenching. It really hurt to read the chapter where Sesshomaru killed Inuyasha. Your evocative writing brought out the pain and bittersweetness of the scene beautifully. All the parties involved are facing so much internal and external conflict - so much trust needs to be built, and so much understanding is needed, with Sesshomaru under the influence of the poison, Koga's feelings for Inuyasha, and Inuyasha's hurt and suspicion... but I am sure that you will lead us all through it in your inimitable way! So, who is it who's coming after Koga now? I would love to find out soon! |
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 23:05 EST
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Oh my goodness, what happens next! Please update this story! I want to see what happens next. Will Kouga screw everything up? Will Sesshomaru set it all right? Will Inuyasha be with Sesshomaru, happy and healthy again? Please update soon! These questions burn me! |
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2010 01:56 EDT
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AMAZING i love reading this please keep up the amazing work.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2010 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did enjoy this latest installment. I can see why Kouga has all the misgivings based on Sesshomaru's past history. Inuyasha loves him and wants to give Sess a chance to redeem himself. Hopefully, Sess will do that but I can't see Kouga going down without a serious fight!! Great work and I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Lynx212 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOO HOO they are back together!!
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Reviewed By: Lynx212 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 04:38 EDT
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I am re-reading this fic and enjoying every minute of it!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 05, 2010 19:09 EDT
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SQUEEE!!!! I love this chapter. I'm so glad that Inu and Sess finally were able to give enough of themselves to finally be together. Your lemon was lovely and emotional. I just wonder how Kouga is going to react. While I've been a little miffed with him over his sometimes underhanded actions, I still care about the guy. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 16:17 EDT
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What a great chapter!!! So happy our puppies finally got back together properly! Shippo and Rin will be delighted!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 22:17 EDT
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Wonderful beautifully written chapter and no tears. Thank you so much!
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