| "Brother's Can't Be Trusted" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 04:16 CDT
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When I think about it, the plot of this story has greatly changed. But it's still really good and I'm very interested about what will happen to Itachi later. And his father. ALSO, THAT WOULD BE SO COOL - SEEING NARUTO IN ACTION. Sorry for the caps lock ^^"
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:15 CDT
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It's really sad that Sasuke is so oblivious. Heh, KisaIta ^^ I wonder what Naruto got else for his birthday.
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:21 CDT
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Aww man, I haven't been keeping up lately, sorry about that. I've been really busy lately and haven't had time to read and review for you. I just read chapters 32 and 33, I loved them both as always, but I really loved 33, not because of the smut scene, but because it was really well written, not to say I didn't like the smut scene of course ><
I love all your work, and I'd actually like to talk to you online some time, like IMing and such, because I want to say I know you when you become a famous author. If you ever feel up to a good chat, just E-mail me and we can talk ^^
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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The Itachi and Kisame plot is really interesting me.
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Title: hahahahahahaha
Reviewed By: lara_101_chick_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 19:55 CDT
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a blowjob practice on a dildo?!?! thats low even for zabuza!!!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved it! I agree that Kisame is the right one for Itachi!
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Mia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I'm not really afan of the anime itself but I do love this story and especially the pairing I can't wait to see what happens on their trip to the beach
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: lara_101_chick_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i just read your fanfic over the course of like, 13 hours(not all at once of course). So, naturally, I was totally hooked by it. I love the story line and how you incorperate so much of the naruto feel into the fanfic in an original way. This is really inspiring, i tottaly love it. If there are any more chapters to come, than I'm super phsyced to read them later on. You ROCK!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I god you scared me!
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:25 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Sasuke SO got owned! Obviously, Naruto can't be as naive as he lets on if he can give a performance that good ^^
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! ive read all the chapters up until now and i cant wait for the next one! I really hope that the author continues the story and doesn't drop it like a lot of authors do XD The writting is well done and the plot keeps a person interested (there are some excellent limes XD) the author could use a beta reader though to help touch up some of the spelling. overall this is an excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! I would like to see Haku and Sasuke as at least half -friends but since Sasuke still acts liek a jerk...
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you first introduced the bully Haku I wasn't so pleased because I really didn't want to read how Sasuke gets all hurt. Then again, Sasuke really needs to think about his behavior. One thing I didn't understand is, how did they know that it was Sasuke spying on them? It was Jiraiya's camera after all. I liked this chapter. Now that Naruto and Sasuke is all alone they can talk things out.
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Reviewed By: narugaa On: July 18, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the funniest most original story I have ever read at first i thought hak was like sasuke in his craziness but he is waaaaaaaay worst
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 22:30 CDT
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.....*Sniff, sniff* Poor Sasuke, you wont have any alone time with Naruto....wait...does that mean....NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! No Naru/Sasu happy sexy time. You have to find some way to fit that in.
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